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Meter Maid

For Raymond G. Taylor's 'Make a quick $5' challenge

By Kendall Defoe Published about a year ago Updated about a year ago 1 min read
Meter Maid
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He was inside and I could see his nervous buddy tapping the steering wheel when I pointed at the meter and told him that if he got there about an hour later he would have been okay and I wouldn't have to take down his information, but he didn't even see me at all (did he?). And then I looked over at the store that just closed and could see the other one inside under the security lights. So, I could see him through those double thick glass windows loading up as he walked around the store, his bag on his back getting bigger and bigger and no one noticing a thing about him taking everything and anything he wanted (was anyone even working? no security?) And there I was with the car and he just ran out to his buddy waiting for him without really noticing me and the ticket I just put under the windshield. At least it was still there and I had a copy of it all for the police (the security camera would help too, but that was under the lights, but my ticket was probably better for them). Sometimes this job really does make you feel like you are spreading some sort of goodness in this world. Pay your tickets!

Pay it...

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  • Testabout a year ago

    Tickets are the worst, love the flip on this "typical" perspective though! Nicely done Kendall!

  • Raymond G. Taylorabout a year ago

    Thanks again for your entry Kendall. I great take on the challenge and fantastic read. Thanks for your support https://shopping-feedback.today/writers/winners-golden-tea-leaf-award%3C/span%3E%3C/span%3E%3C/span%3E%3C/a%3E%3C/p%3E%3C/div%3E%3C/div%3E%3C/div%3E%3Cdiv class="css-w4qknv-Replies">

  • I hate it when I get a ticket. This was a brilliant take on the challenge!

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