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Margarita on the Balcony

Every Friday, the glass sweated poems neither of them remembered writing, yet both knew by heart

By LUNA EDITHPublished about a month ago 3 min read

Every Friday at five o’clock—never five-oh-one, never quarter-to—Mrs. Lillian Hart and Mr. Emilio Alvarez stepped out onto their side-by-side balconies like actors taking the stage for a play written only in the language of ritual. The two balconies faced the same peach-colored courtyard, their wrought-iron railings close enough that the breeze tangled the geraniums together. Between them sat a small round table, half on her side, half on his, hosting a single margarita in a salt-rimmed glass.

One glass.
Two hands.
Three decades of quiet companionship.

It had begun by accident seventeen years earlier, when Lillian’s grocery delivery mistakenly included a mix of limes and tequila. Emilio, who lived alone with his record player and a lifetime of Cuban boleros, noticed her frown as she examined the unexpected ingredients. He leaned over the railing and offered, “If life hands you limes, señora, you must answer back with salt.”

He made her a margarita that Friday. She made him one the next. And by the third week, it became the kind of tradition that needs no discussion—one that anchors a drifting heart to the shape of a week.

Now, every Friday, as the sun slid low and softened the city’s edges, they shared a single glass, passing it gently between them. The condensation on its surface always formed as delicate patterns—ridges, droplets, and faint lines that looked, impossibly, like writing. Emilio had been the first to notice it.

“Look,” he’d whispered one evening. “It’s like the glass is drafting something.”

Lillian lifted it to the light, and yes—there, faint as a breath, were shapes like letters, almost like a stanza forming. They vanished quickly, the moment they tried to read them aloud, but the feeling lingered. It was as if the drink was chronicling something the two of them didn’t quite dare to speak: the story of two lives running parallel but never colliding, except here, in the thin lemony slice of time between day and night.

Over the years, each stanza changed.

Some weeks, the condensation shaped curves soft enough to feel like tenderness. Other weeks, it dripped in uneven streaks that looked like tears neither of them ever shed aloud. Once, during a winter when Lillian’s arthritis was unforgiving, the condensation mapped out a spiral—as if the glass wanted to remind her that pain and healing walk the same circular path.

Once, during the year Emilio’s brother passed, the lines formed something that almost resembled wings.

They never spoke about these “balcony poems” directly. They simply held the glass together, their fingers brushing lightly, both pretending not to notice.

But on the Friday after Lillian’s granddaughter moved overseas, she came out late and with a heaviness Emilio hadn't seen before.

“I almost skipped today,” she confessed.
He shook his head. “Traditions save us on the days we think they won’t.”

When Emilio handed her the glass, the condensation bloomed into a pattern so intricate it looked like a paragraph. Lillian pressed her thumb against the beads, smudging the shapes.

“I wish I knew what it said,” she whispered.

“You do,” he answered softly. “You feel it. That’s enough.”

She took a sip, the salt brushing memory into her mouth. And something loosened—a knot, a fear, a loneliness she had folded neatly away. When she passed the glass back, their fingertips lingered longer than usual.

The courtyard lights flickered on. A moth circled. A faint melody drifted from Emilio’s living room, a bolero he played every Friday without fail.

By the final sip, the condensation had almost dried, leaving behind just the faintest shimmer. It looked like the ghost of a stanza they had written together—

—two old souls, balancing their lives on the fragile rim of shared tradition.

When they finally said goodnight, it was with the gentle certainty that next Friday, and the Friday after that, and the ones beyond even those, the glass would be waiting—cool, trembling, and ready to write the next line.

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LUNA EDITH

Writer, storyteller, and lifelong learner. I share thoughts on life, creativity, and everything in between. Here to connect, inspire, and grow — one story at a time.

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