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Lumina

A 500-word Shockwave Challenge

By Tracy StinePublished 10 months ago 2 min read
Strands of Blue DNA Helixes

The hum of the GeneSculpting room, tiny nanites weaving perfect DNA in the artificial womb. Anya stared at the screen at the flawless azure helix, her daughter's genome, no deviation, no imperfection. A perfect child, guaranteed. Yet, a coldness settled in her chest, an echo of sameness. “Was this perfection?” she wondered, a forbidden thought in a society that worshipped genetic purity. Grandma Elara's stories whispered of children with freckled skin and diverse apperances, seemed relics of a barbaric age, but a longing stirred.

“Congratulations on your girl,” the clinician stated, “what will you name her?”

“Elara,” said Anya, “after my grandmother,” she surprised herself. A shiver went down her spine. “Why did I say that?” she wondered.

“Elara?” the clinician asked, with a slight raise of an eyebrow.

“Yes, a mix of history and new purity,” she insisted, the words feeling foreign on her tongue. The hum of the GeneSculpting bay pulsed, a constant reminder of the flawless helix within.

After the sterile birthing ceremony Anya descended into the forbidden archives, the clinician’s words echoing in her mind. History. Purity. Elara. She found her Grandma Elara's journals, coded with fragmented memories of a time before the Elimination Protocols. A time of vibrant chaos, of freckled skin and natural variations. A time before Lumina. The journals spoke of the Divergents, those who clung to their genetic imperfections, hiding in the abandoned sectors beneath the gleaming towers. They were a whisper, a legend, a rebellion against the sterile perfection. Anya found their coordinates, a map etched in faded ink.

She descended into the darkness, the air thick with the scent of unsterilized life.. “Welcome Anya,” Gaia called from the cavern’s shadows, hobbling into the dim light. “My name is Gaia.” Anya recoiled, her GeneSculpted senses overwhelmed by the raw, unfiltered humanity before her. Gaia smiled, a slow, knowing smile. “You think we are dying?” she rasped, her voice like crumbling stone. “We are the future, Anya. Lumina is the ghost.” She reached out, her hand gnarled and cold, and touched Anya’s cheek. “You are not here to save us. You are here to remember.”

The world shimmered, the clean lines of the skyscrapers lining Lumina’s skyline replaced by crumbling murals, depicting a city of impossible beauty, a city lost to time. Anya's memories weren't hers, but echoes of a forgotten age, a time before the fall. The 'Elimination Protocols' were not a new invention, but a desperate, flawed attempt to recreate what was lost. Lumina was Atlantis, reborn, but broken. The 'perfect' humans, were not a new evolution, but a faded copy of a people that once held true perfection. The baby in the bay, was the key to re-awaken that past. And the reader, holding this story, was not reading fiction, but deciphering the final, fragmented message. A warning from a lost civilization, a plea to remember what perfection truly costed, to remember what was lost.

Imploring the reader not to repeat failed history again.

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About the Creator

Tracy Stine

Freelance Writer. ASL Teacher. Disability Advocate. Deafblind. Snarky.

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  • Randy Stine 10 months ago

    I want to know more about the Elimination Protocols. Great story.

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