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Let’s Kiss Until the Rain Stops

A Love Story of Intimacy, Passion, and the Timeless Connection Between Two Souls

By Shoaib RehmanPublished 8 months ago 3 min read

The realm outside throbbed, alive with the fervor of the storm. Glistening droplets showered from the sky while the roof, windows, and land splashed symphonically like a masterpiece. It seemed everything on earth took part in the fervor of the moment.

We stood as one, wrapped in the storm's embrace, steam lifting from the water pouring down like a gentle waterfall over the showerhead. Your skin shimmered in the soft glow of the lights, every droplet a minuscule glitter a tender memento of those moments we shared.

You blared like a lion, making my chest puff out in an exhilarated way. In this moment, I was staring at you the same way you were staring at me, affectionate and animus. Although the volume of the outside world was cranked to intense with the rain, in here, it was nothing but the two of us. The world consisted of only you and me. The drizzle and slosh of the water dancing together became symphonious to our romance for those few seconds.

As I huddled closer, waiting for the golden droplets to stop pouring, wild clouds blocking the sun’s rays, I and blissful, started whispering “let’s kiss until the rain ceases.”

Your lips turned warm as you gifted me your favorite smile – the one that always triggered a race in my heart; granting me the ability to shiver involuntarily until I felt your lips cool against mine. Leaning in without thinking showed true bravery on my end.

And then, we shared a kiss. At the beginning, when the rain was lightly hitting the windows, we shared a gentle kiss that felt like an introduction to a long awaited meeting. But before long, as the world outside faded into oblivion, the kiss grew deeper as well as the bond that existed between us. All that mattered in that very moment was the love shared and the sweet intimacy radiating from our hearts. Time would almost feel like it was moving at a snail's pace as the kiss grew longer, enchanted by the rain, while both of us were entranced by the kiss.

As I pulled you closer while watching the rain dance to its own tune, I could feel your fingers lovingly tracing and memorizing every inch of my body, sending warmth through my veins.

The chaotic storm outside paired with the water from the hot shower made it feel like we were a part of something bigger than the world outside. Together, we were able to create our very own sanity within the blistering storm.

You loosened your grip for what seemed like eternity, your breath still heavy, as mine remained captured by your gaze. “Do you think the rain would last any longer?” came your playful question. It was soft, but drawled out in a teasing manner, with a smile still partially decorating your lips.

“I don’t know,” I replied while brushing a wet lock off your face. Showering you with kisses and saying, “I’m fine with no time,” while shifting our attention to the moment rather and the never-ending rain.

Yet again, we kissed. This time, enchanted with each exquisite embrace, we blurted, ‘I love you’ in that sweet language. It didn’t matter that we were enveloped under a deluge—what truly mattered was the bond we shared, the countless instances that we had experienced together which transformed this simple act into something magnificent.

It could've been hours or days that went by. We were so lost in each other, time ceased to exist. Out of nowhere, however, the storm lessened, pouring out its watery heart slowly.

Wrapping you within the cocoon of my arms was an impulse I couldn't resist. The rain was irrelevant. At this moment, we were submerged together, all giddy in the essence of our love, all while holding on to each other.

When the storm outside stopped, I understood that the experience we shared - how we kissed until the rain stopped - was a promise of sorts. As I reflected on the moment, it became clear to me that this wasn't just a moment we had shared. Rather, it was a moment that signified the advancement of our love, and would continue to exist even with the winds of passion. Together, we gained the knowledge that as long as we were united, anything was conquerable.

Love

About the Creator

Shoaib Rehman

From mind idea to words, I am experienced in this exchange. Techincally written storeis will definetely means a lot for YOU. The emotions I always try to describe through words. I used to turn facts into visual helping words. keep In Touch.

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