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''Justice Jones Puts on the Brakes to Avoid Disaster''

Braking Point: Justice Jones' Narrow Escape

By AbbasPublished about a year ago 3 min read
''Justice Jones Puts on the Brakes to Avoid Disaster''
Photo by Denys Nevozhai on Unsplash

Justice Jones had seen his fair share of close calls. As a retired special forces operative, he was accustomed to high-stakes situations where a fraction of a second could mean the difference between life and death. Today, however, the stakes were personal.

The humid Islamabad air clung to him as he navigated the winding roads of the village where his grandmother lived. He was on his way to visit her, his beloved Dadi, who had been feeling under the weather. The sun had begun its descent, casting long shadows over the lush fields and narrow streets. Justice had always found a strange comfort in the familiar sights and sounds of this place, a stark contrast to the chaos of his former life.

As he rounded a bend, Justice's sharp eyes caught a glint of something ahead on the road. A truck, moving at an unusually high speed for these parts, was barreling down the narrow path towards him. The truck’s driver appeared distracted, perhaps fumbling with something on the dashboard. Justice's instincts kicked in immediately.

In a split second, he assessed the situation. The road was too narrow for both vehicles to pass safely, and the truck showed no signs of slowing down. On one side of the road, a steep embankment loomed, and on the other, a dense thicket of trees. His training had prepared him for many scenarios, but this required a deft combination of skill and reflexes.

Justice's foot moved to the brake pedal, pressing it firmly but not too abruptly to avoid skidding. He scanned the surroundings for an escape route. The trees to his right were thick, but there was a small clearing a few meters ahead. It would be tight, but it was his best shot.

The truck's engine roared, growing louder as it hurtled closer. Justice could see the whites of the driver’s eyes now—wide with panic as he realized the impending collision.

As the truck rushed past, mere inches from his car, Justice felt a surge of relief. He pulled into the clearing, his car coming to a complete stop. The truck skidded to a halt a few yards down the road, the driver visibly shaken but unharmed.

Justice took a deep breath, steadying his racing heart. He stepped out of his car and approached the truck. The driver, a young man in his early twenties, was trembling. Justice's voice was calm but firm as he spoke.

"Are you alright?" he asked, his eyes scanning the young man for any signs of injury.

"I... I'm sorry," the driver stammered. "I didn't see you until it was too late."

Justice nodded, understanding the mixture of fear and relief in the man's eyes. "It happens. The important thing is that we're both okay."

The young man looked down, shamefaced. "Thank you," he muttered. "I don't know what I would have done if... if..."

Justice placed a reassuring hand on his shoulder. "Just be more careful next time. These roads can be tricky."

As the adrenaline began to ebb, Justice walked back to his car. He checked it over for any damage, finding none. Satisfied, he resumed his journey to his grandmother's house, grateful that his quick thinking had averted a disaster.

When he arrived, his grandmother greeted him with a warm smile and a hug that melted away the lingering tension. Over tea, Justice recounted the story, leaving out the more harrowing details. His grandmother listened, her eyes reflecting both pride and concern.

"You've always been quick on your feet, my boy," she said, patting his hand. "But remember, even heroes need to take care of themselves."

Holiday

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Abbas

Versatile writer skilled in both tale & stories. Captivate readers with engaging content & immersive narratives. Passionate about informing, inspiring, & entertaining through words.

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