At first, I thought breaking up with Mike at the end of our four-day vacay might be a little harsh. Who am I kidding? It will definitely hurt.
I wanted to visit the beach though, and we still get along with each other . Besides, I’ve been planning to end it for a while. It isn’t him; well, maybe some, but mostly it’s me. As soon as he returns from the bathroom, I’ll tell him.
I stared out at the ocean on our final day together. Turning around at the sound of my name, there was Mike, on one knee…
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Abby Kay Mendonca
Here to share my voice. I write about the overstated and underappreciated. Also, I love cats.
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Nooooooo!!!! I can feel the awkwardness 😱
Oh dear, and what happens now? Great story