I Want To Run Away From A Place Called Home
Yearning For Freedom

In a small town where the sky seemed perpetually gray, lived a girl named Alisha. She often felt trapped in her quaint little house, its peeling paint and creaking floors echoing her restless spirit. The walls, once vibrant with laughter and warmth, had become a cage, suffocating her dreams. Outside, the town was a patchwork of familiar faces and places, but to Alisha,it felt like a prison.
Every morning, she would watch the sun rise from her bedroom window, the golden rays spilling into her room like a promise of a different life. She longed for the freedom that seemed just beyond the horizon, whispering to her like a distant melody. The world beyond her home was filled with adventure, and every story she read in books fueled her desire to explore. Yet, every evening, she found herself sitting on her bed, surrounded by stacks of novels, paralyzed by the weight of her own indecision.
Alisha’s parents were well-meaning but traditional, their lives steeped in routine. They wanted her to inherit their predictable existence, to find a steady job and settle down. But Alisha craved more than that; she yearned to chase the wind and dance in the rain. The thought of stepping into the unknown filled her with both exhilaration and dread. Each day, she made plans to leave, sketching maps in her journal, dreaming of far-off places where she could reinvent herself. But as night fell, fear would wrap around her like a heavy blanket, pulling her back into the safety of her home.
One fateful afternoon, while walking through the town square, Alisha stumbled upon an old, dusty bookstore tucked between a bakery and a café. Its weathered sign creaked in the breeze, inviting her inside. As she entered, the musty scent of paper and ink enveloped her. Rows of books towered over her, their spines like whispered secrets waiting to be uncovered. She wandered through the aisles, her fingers grazing the covers, until a tattered leather-bound book caught her eye.
The book was titled “Journeys Beyond the Horizon.” Alisha's heart raced as she opened it to reveal tales of explorers, adventurers, and dreamers who dared to escape the mundane. Each story resonated with her own yearning for freedom. Inspired, she bought the book, clutching it tightly as she made her way home, her mind swirling with possibilities.
That night, she devoured the stories, losing herself in the words. With each page turned, her desire to run away grew stronger. She made a pact with herself; she would leave this stifling place and embark on her own journey. By dawn, the decision was made. She would leave everything behind, even if it meant starting from scratch.
The next morning, she gathered her essentials: a few clothes, her journal, the treasured book, and a small amount of cash she had saved. With her heart pounding and a sense of urgency propelling her forward, Alisha slipped out of the house before the sun had fully risen. She took one last look at her childhood home, feeling a bittersweet pang in her chest but knowing that the call of adventure was louder than the echo of her past.
As she walked through the quiet streets, the world around her began to awaken. The air was crisp, filled with the promise of a new beginning. She headed towards the train station, her heart racing with each step. The train tracks stretched before her like a silver ribbon, leading to unknown destinations. She bought a ticket for the first train, her excitement bubbling to the surface.
As the train pulled away, Alisha pressed her face against the window, watching her hometown fade into the distance. Each mile felt like a weight lifted from her shoulders, the chains of her past breaking apart. In that moment, she realized that home was not a place, but a feeling—a sense of belonging she had yet to discover.
With the wind in her hair and the horizon unfolding before her, Alisha embraced the uncertainty of her journey. She was no longer running away from a place called home; she was running toward herself, ready to write her own story, one filled with the adventures she had always dreamed of. And as the train sped into the unknown, she smiled, knowing she had finally chosen to live her life on her own terms.




Comments (1)
Para 1: Patchwork of familiar faces, I wasn’t expecting that, I love how you describe these individuals. They seem to be mere faces, nothing attaching Alisha to them. Para 2: ~stacks of novels, paralysed by the weight of her own indecision~ I am sold, this is getting deep. It’s getting me really invested. Para 3: I smile here, I need that blanket to hide under. She reminds me so much of me so Alisha is already very relatable. Para 4: the sign creaking in the breeze excited me. I love anything old, and this little element made me want to read further, though this not the only reason. I’ve said that a while back, that you’ve got such incredible attention to detail and I see it here in this paragraph too. I love that the book store is tucked behind a cafe and a bakery. Para 5: I went to a book store yesterday, so Alisha’s character is right up my alley. The word Horizon caught my attention, I believe you prepared us for this moment back in para 2. I loved that. Para 6: I loved the ending of this paragraph, it gave me that sinking feeling in my tummy. How will see handle starting from scratch… Paragraph 7: I love when I can get to the end of a paragraph and realise that there’s a satisfying line waiting for me ~ knowing that the call of adventure was louder than the echo of her past~ >>>>> I wonder what she will write in. That journal Paragraph 8: I love how the pace quickened here Paragraph 9: this brought back a lovely memory I have of being on a train, this paragraph helped to pull this memory forward and made this read like a movie scene. I feel Alisha pulling away from me as if she’s leaving me behind. Last paragraph; such a satisfying ending. Living her life on her own terms. This was a great read, I love the length of the paragraphs and how it all flowed. Well done ♥️👌🏽