I'll Love you for A Thousand More
Part V: Red and Black

March 03, 1996
250 Miles Beyond Earth's Surface
"Amelia? We're good?", Lucy; one of her Troops' partners asked in a worrisome tone.
"Yes, It's just that... It's just...." Amelia could no longer hold onto her fake 'I'm ok' phase.
She let go of her forced smile and said:
"I miss him... I miss him badly! He must be crying and screaming right now... I'm sure he's in pain... I can feel his pain inside of me... I can't live without him...", Amelia collapsed into Lucy's arms, surrendering the fragile facade of control she had clung to for so long, as she cried her heart out.
๐๐ฎ๐๐ฒ, ๐ฐ๐ก๐๐ญ ๐ฌ๐ก๐จ๐ฎ๐ฅ๐ ๐ ๐๐จ? ๐ ๐๐๐ง'๐ญ ๐๐ ๐ฐ๐ข๐ญ๐ก ๐ก๐ข๐ฆ... ๐ ๐ฐ๐๐ฌ ๐ก๐ข๐ฌ ๐จ๐ง๐ฅ๐ฒ ๐ฉ๐๐ซ๐ฌ๐จ๐ง ๐ข๐ง ๐ญ๐ก๐ ๐ฐ๐จ๐ซ๐ฅ๐. ๐๐ก๐๐ญ ๐ฐ๐จ๐ฎ๐ฅ๐ ๐ก๐ ๐๐จ ๐ฐ๐ข๐ญ๐ก๐จ๐ฎ๐ญ ๐ฆ๐?... ๐๐ก๐ฒ ๐๐จ๐๐ฌ ๐ญ๐ก๐ข๐ฌ ๐ก๐๐ฌ ๐ญ๐จ ๐๐ ๐ฐ๐ข๐ญ๐ก ๐ฆ๐? ๐๐ก๐ฒ ๐ฆ๐ ๐๐ฅ๐จ๐ง๐?
You're not alone, Am. Trust me, you're not! I have left my ill mother alone. My little brother who slept with me every day... Everyone here has left a precious bond behind. Get yourself together! But, I know your pain is deeper; You both shared an undeniable love. Still, you have to be brave! 10 years would pass in the blink of an eye.
Blink of an Eye? Really?
"I'm weaker than he is, though I pretend to be strong and bold... but Iโm not. I never drank coffee. The truth is, I never wanted to. But his love, the care he showedโ I couldn't resist sharing a cup.".
Amelia continued Mourning in heartbreak.

250 Miles Beyond Realm of Space
Jaxon pulled Amelia's letter and hugged it with his chest. His eyes shed blood with constant speed.
There was a small box at the table. Jaxon stared at it with his red-soared eyes. His shivering hands forced their direction at that little box and picked it up.
A small sticky note on that box said,
"Now, My forever Good-Luck charm will stay with you and You'll shine throughout your life"
Amelia left her prestigious belonging; Her Good-Luck Charm to her love of Life.
Jaxon opened the box and it was Amelia's wedding ring with the stone she'd always loved.
Am! ........ My Amelia!............
----Silent Cries----

Two Lovers..........
The love story of Am and Jax was profound
They could hear their cries; The cries with no sound
Amelia had to pay her debts; So she did fly
Jaxon was standing waiting for her beneath the sky
'10 years' was too longโ Too long for someone who
Used to breathe together, their hearts were true
The morning coffee and those Mischievous smiles
Destiny took every moment far awayโ1000 miles
Years went by, But their love never Dried
Jaxon was counting every day; His heart tied
Amelia spent her nights and days singing his nameโ
Their worlds were apart, yet their love burned the same
Jaxon started to fall; Growing weak in this chase
One star was burning on Earth, The Other in Space
5 Years passed and now the other half was left
Destiny saved their Love or was it a Theft?
Jax would smile less or maybe only when marking a cross
Amelia would operate her Job; Inside she felt a loss
10 years did PASS in the Blink of an Eye
Amelia was right, "Jaxon didn't DIE"
But time was HELL for both of them
Inside they wanted to screw time's stem
3 months left... Amelia would come back...
Jax was almost a patient of "Heart Attack"
But His smile was returning back from a vast ocean
Amelia couldn't stop smiling because of her Emotion
10 days... Now Jax started to decorate their place
Amelia gained some weight but there was a smile on her face
They both were still young but their age was thirty-five
But ain't Heart a child? The only thing ALIVE?
1 day left.... But, things started to get Bruised
Amelia and Jaxon started to get Confused!
What if Am's not the same? What if there's a whirl?
What if Jax is no more 'Loser'? What if Jax got a Girl?
Both were confused yet they held a spark
That they won't betray each other despite being in the dark
And they knew not that both of them stood erect
Their LOVE was a literal Fact
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March 2, 2006
This is your host, Ethan Roberts, and you're watching The National News of California.
Our dear passengers are on their way home, safe and sound. We kindly ask you all to keep them in your thoughts and prayers. It's hard to believe that it's been 10 years since that fateful journey.
We honor our brave astronauts, who risked their lives and dedicated a decade to advancing America's progress and shaping the future of our planet. Today, we pay tribute to their courage, sacrifice, and unwavering commitment.
A song started to play with lyrics, a shining tribute to all the beautiful people.
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After a decade, Jaxon wore a tuxedo for the first time. His hair was sleek and gelled, and in his pants pocket, he carried Amelia's wedding ring. He had shaved his beard neatly and applied a touch of concealer from Amelia's dresser to conceal his facial scars.

On the Other Hand; Amelia wore the Only RED dress she carried with her for this very Day. Applied a red shade on her lips. Although, the dress fitted her toughly because she gained some weight but her excitement was beyond the fitting of her dress.
In her hands, she wore nothing because she wanted Jax to put her ring on her hands...

PART I:
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PART III:
PART IV:
FINAL PART:
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Author's Note:
The Day Arrived! Despite all those hard years... Their love was still alive....
What would happen when they both see each other? How would they meet?
Wait for The Final Part of Jax and Amelia's Love Story ๐
FINAL PART COMING SOON
About the Creator
Maryam Batool
I'm 17
I'm a storyteller who loves poems, fiction, and romance. Creativity is my constant companion. I take joy in turning thoughts into worlds. Writing is my way of exploring life and connecting with others
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Comments (9)
Girl, I donโt think you understand how obsessed I am with this story ๐ญ Iโve been offline for a couple of days, and Iโm so glad you have more parts for me to read! Iโm dying for them to finally see each other! My heart canโt take much more of this tension. I just know itโs going to be such an emotional reunion!
Gurl, it's very difficult to make me cry for humans but you managed to make me cry for Jaxon and Amelia ๐ญ๐ญ๐ญ๐ญ๐ญ๐ญ๐ญ I can't believe they're gonna meet each other after 10 years!
Time flies when you are having fun. Ten years barely seems like ten minutes. They had better still be totally in love when they meet (or is that if they meet, she still has to make it happen). ๐ The poem was a nice touch to the story.
Your story is a deeply emotional and evocative portrayal of love and longing across the vast distance of space. The connection between Amelia and Jaxon is beautifully illustrated, capturing the intensity of their feelings and the pain of their separation.
Ohh! Itโs been ten years since Amelia's space mission, and now she has returned. I loved the poem; it was a great approach, awesome๐ Jaxon is waiting for Amelia with a ring, and Amelia, wearing her red dress, is eager to meet him. But I fear that Amelia might die in a car accident on her way back ๐๐ Looking forward to the next part, great work!โจ๐ค๐๐ค
Great, I like your writing style
The love between Amelia and Jaxon feels so raw and real. I could feel their pain, their longing, and the weight of their sacrifice. The mix of prose and poetry pulled me into their world, making their reunion feel so close yet so far. If the transitions were a bit smoother, the story would flow even better, but itโs still incredibly moving.
Beautiful
Wow, Jax and Amelia's love story is pure magicโheartbreaking yet so full of hope! The little details, like Jax holding her ring and Amelia saving her red dress, make it so touching. Their bond stayed unshaken despite a decade apart, and the buildup to their reunion is incredible. ๐ I canโt wait to see how they meet after all this timeโtears, smiles, and love galore! โจ Bring on the final chapter!๐