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Hope in Darkness

A candle still burns, even when the night is at its darkest

By AtiqbuddyPublished 5 months ago 4 min read

The air in the basement shelter was thick—full of dust, fear, and memory. The stale smell of damp concrete mixed with the metallic tang of rusted pipes. Dust floated like ash in the air, suspended in shafts of moonlight that crept through the cracks above, faint and silver. The walls groaned now and then, as if struggling to hold the world together.

Outside, the war raged on.

The distant thuds of artillery came in uneven bursts—some soft, some sharp, all terrifying. They echoed like thunder but with less mercy. Each boom seemed to shake the ground a little more than the last. But inside, beneath layers of earth and silence, time stood still.

Mira sat with her little brother huddled close to her chest. Her arms wrapped around him like a shield she wasn’t sure she could hold up much longer. Sami’s small fingers clung to the edge of her sweater, knuckles white. At just six years old, he hadn’t yet mastered the quiet fear that survival demanded. His soft whimpers pressed into Mira’s skin like invisible needles.

It had been two days since their mother left. Two long, hollow days. She had gone out to find medicine for Sami’s cough, which had turned into something deeper—wet, rattling, cruel. She promised she’d come back before nightfall that same day.

She hadn’t.

Mira was only thirteen, but war had sculpted her into something older—something tougher, but fraying. She had learned to listen for drones like others once listened for rain, to boil water from the building’s broken radiator pipes, to ration half a loaf of stale bread over three silent days.

That night, the darkness felt different. Heavier. It pressed against her thoughts, her ribs, her hope. There was no candle left to burn; the last had melted into a puddle of wax the night before. And the flashlight had blinked out that morning with a dying sputter. The dark wasn’t just around her—it was inside her.

“Do you think Mama’s coming back?” Sami’s voice was a fragile thread, barely a breath in the gloom.

Mira didn’t answer right away. Lying had never come naturally to her. But the truth felt sharp and cold, like glass in her mouth.

“She promised,” she whispered finally, tightening her grip on him.

Sami nodded. That was all he needed—someone to sound sure. Children didn’t require certainty. Just faith in the voice beside them.

For a long while, the only sound was the rasp of Sami’s cough and the occasional shifting of rats in the walls. Mira's mind drifted—half memory, half dream. She thought of her mother brushing her hair gently on quiet mornings before school. Of music on the radio. Of apricots in a paper bag. Things that felt impossibly far now, as if they belonged to a different life.

Then came a sound—a soft shuffle from the far side of the basement.

Mira’s spine stiffened. She reached for the rusted pipe she kept nearby, her heart pounding louder than the shells outside.

“Who’s there?” she called out, voice trembling, both terrified and trying not to be.

Silence answered first.

Then, a whisper. “It’s me.”

Mira’s breath caught.

She dropped the pipe and scrambled forward on hands and knees, guided more by instinct than sight. Her fingers reached into the dark—and closed around a trembling hand.

“Mama?” she gasped.

A choked sound—half sob, half laugh—escaped her lips as her mother’s form slumped into view. Her clothes were soaked from rain, her hair clung to her face in tangled strands, and her body shook with exhaustion. But she was alive. That alone was a miracle.

In her hand, she clutched a small, battered bag.

“Medicine,” she rasped. “For Sami.”

Tears fell freely now, unashamed and unstoppable. Mira helped her mother lower herself onto the ground. She was cold, soaked to the bone, but there was relief in her eyes—a light that hadn’t been there when she left.

Mira tore open the bag and pulled out a small bottle of syrup, wrapped in cloth, along with two stubby candles and a box of matches. Her hands shook as she measured a spoonful and gave it to Sami. He coughed once, then swallowed. His body relaxed ever so slightly.

Then Mira struck a match.

The flare of light was brief and brilliant—then caught the candle wick. A flicker of golden flame bloomed in the gloom, casting dancing shadows on the walls, across their faces, over the wounds and weariness they all carried.

And just like that, the darkness blinked back.

Sami laughed—a soft, rasping laugh, but real. “I knew you’d come back,” he murmured, curling up beside their mother.

“I never stopped walking,” she whispered, pressing her lips to his forehead. “Even when I couldn’t see the road.”

They sat like that for a while, no one saying much. Just breathing. Listening to the candle crackle.

Eventually, Mira lit the second candle and placed it further across the basement. The twin flames pushed the darkness back, if only a little.

But it was enough.

She looked at her mother’s face—weathered, lined with dirt and sorrow—but strong. She had walked through a city that was no longer a city. Dodged patrols, climbed over rubble, faced rain and fear and time. And still, she came back.

Mira realized something then—something quiet and soul-deep.

The world could fall apart. The skies could shatter. Silence could scream louder than bombs. But as long as there was someone left to carry hope—even a single match’s worth of it—the light would never fully go out.

Hope didn’t need to roar.

It just needed to flicker.

And flicker it did, against the cold basement walls, casting the shadow of a girl, her brother, and their mother—three flames in a world gone dark.

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