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Hilton beach

Chapter one

By EvelynnPublished 4 years ago 2 min read
Hilton beach
Photo by Silas Baisch on Unsplash

As she felt the water flow on her feet she thought “can’t every day be like this one” the sun was setting, the temperature was 70 degrees Fahrenheit, the water was cool but to cold and everything felt perfect. Lillian had walked up to her husband and said “can we stay her forever”? He said “I wish darling, but we can stay a little longer” so Lillian walked over to the water and put her feet in. As she sat there she felt something nipping at her feet, she was confused so she got out. She walked back over to her husband and said “let’s go home but can we come back tomorrow”? He said “of course let’s go.”

When they got home they ate dinner, watched some tv and went to bed. In the morning Lillian woke up before her husband and made some waffles, pancakes, bacon, eggs and got the syrup out of the fridge. She went and woke up her husband so they could eat and they did. After they ate they went down back to Hilton Beach, Lillian got in the water and this time she got completely in her whole body was in there. Again Lillian felt something nipping at her feet so naturally she swam away from it, but again something was nipping at her feet this time Lillian got out of the water and told her husband he said “it’s probably nothing. After that Lillian got back in the water but there was still something nipping at her feet, she brushed it off and kept swimming.

Later that day they were still at the beach but this time the nipping felt stronger like it was biting now. Lillian got out of the water immediately and ran to her husband and told him he said “it’s probably just a fish” so Lillian got back in the water but the biting did not stop. It kept biting and biting and biting over and over and over agin. Lillian brushed it off once again but inside she was scared half to death. She asked other people there is anything biting your delete and they all said no. The biting got stronger and harder so Lillian ran out of the water she told her husband he said “ you are fine see I will go in” so he walked into the water and then all of a sudden he went under water and Lillian just thought he went underwater to show it was fine. After a little bit he had not come up yet. Lillian got super scared.

She ran into the water looking for her husband she couldn’t find him anywhere. She looked and looked but he was nowhere to be seen. Lillian noticed something under the water it looked grayish it looked like a fish it had sharp teeth and Lillian realized it was a shark. She thought that it must have taken her husband but she thought that sharks didint bother you unless you bothered them but she didint give it another second and she ran home. Once she got home she started balling her eyes out because of her husband she knew she would never see him again. Later that day she saw the news it said, man taken by shark never to be seen again at Hilton beach. Lillian knew they were talking about her husband and cried for so long she could not bare this any longer

They had a funeral but Lillian never knew it would end this way.

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About the Creator

Evelynn

I love to write stories, to make people laugh, cry and and even just feel happy I am a very exited person and I personally think i am cool

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