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Hide-N-Seek

Mugly Girls

By Mother CombsPublished 2 years ago 1 min read
Image by Prawny from Pixabay

“You know we have been here awhile,” Jeanine stated.

“I believe you are right, look at the sun,” Maria said.

“My stomach is growling. Let’s go in,” Chelsea added.

“I don’t know. You think it’s safe?” Maria asked.

“Surely, the game is over by now. The idiots couldn’t find us, so we won,” Jeanine answered.

“Let’s go in, then, bitches,” Chelsea begged.

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Meanwhile:

“This has been the most peaceful afternoon,” David said

“You know you are right, I’m glad we thought of this,” Melanie said

“I’m just glad no one called me a flaming gay midget today,” Lester stated loudly.

“It’s nice having no one make fun of my zits,” Minnie iterated.

“No mugly comments have been so nice. Why are they so mugly, David?” Stacey asked

“I don’t know,” David answered, ”but let's go somewhere else before they come up from the river bank they have been hiding by. See if we can have peace awhile longer.”

The group all agreed, so they left the three mugly girls to play hide-n-seek by themselves.

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Back to the girls:

“Wonder where the losers went?” Jeanine asked.

“I don’t care,” Maria answered.

“Let's look through their bags,” Chelsea hooted.

They all cackled and started looking through the bags and making fun of the things they found inside. Then they got to David’s bag, and sticking a hand in, suddenly, Maria screamed. She yanked her hand out with a mouse trap attached to it.

Just then, the other children walked in and saw the girls sitting there with their bags spread out around them. As mad as they were about their stuff, they had to laugh about Maria being caught like she was even more.

“Whose the losers now?” David asked.

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Mother Combs

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  • Dharrsheena Raja Segarran2 years ago

    Lol, serves Maria right! I wish Chelsea and Jeanine had something happen to them too. Hahahahaha!

  • Alisa İnnokate2 years ago

    Three girls play hide-and-seek and go through the belongings of another group. When Maria gets caught in a mouse trap while inspecting David's bag, the friends return, finding humor in the situation as David teases the girls about who the real losers are.

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