Hell and Heaven Bent
A quest to steal the bookends of time
First I stole the past.
I rappelled down the crystalline crevasse of history to bring every loved thing back to me.
Memories thin as obsidian blade accumulated, annealed into jade-like stone ridges. Stratas of eons under my digits fractured as hooks laid their fullerine teeth.
Reaching bottom of the chasm, beneath fossilized time, I anchored bolts into the nepheline ground. As I pulled, ethereal lustrous fjords forged of early creation were thrust up above, and every lost thing was again extant in present. And ‘was’ itself: nullified.
“You left me; I wasn’t ready,” I cried my testament. “You wouldn’t be if Hell and Heaven bent,” they replied.
Chronocidal rage blazed into chronophobic determination. Through terrified ears I didn’t hear over thundering fear. From the present grew colossal, branching futures. I had to steal those too.
Latching hooks into the trunk, I scrambled upwards. Above me, time shrunk into the heaven. I threw graphene ropes over those shimmering boughs, filled with hopes that all future lost things could, like all past, be sutured; joined.
No telescope could reach my endmost ascent. Alone, I caught, ensnared the close of history. All events compacted, condensed- destiny itself was a ghost.
Comprehension eludes me.
About the Creator
Sam Gilbertson
I'm just a twenties-something who enjoys sci-fi and philosophy. Writing is an outlet for me in many ways, and I am aiming to explore sharing it as a means of improving.
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"Chronocidal rage blazed into chronophobic determination." Such a great line. I'm ignoring Grammarly telling me those aren't words simply because they're not in common usage. You project erudition in your writing without it becoming condescending and that's often hard to do. I'm frankly impressed.