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Groovy

Saturday night

By Raymond G. TaylorPublished 9 months ago Updated 8 months ago 1 min read
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What do you think you look like?”

“I’m going out, Dad!”

My little sister Ruth raised her eyes to the heavens. She’d heard it all before.

“Not like that you ain’t! Bright purple tie the size of a kipper. Trousers baggy enough for Coco the Clown and hair halfway down to your arse?”

“Aw, come on Dad…”

“At least comb yer ‘air before you go out...”

At this, Dad reached into his pocket then slapped some coins into my hand.

“… and no sneaking into the King’s Head for a crafty one!”

Ruth looked up as I left: “Groovy baby!”

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Raymond G. Taylor

Author living in Kent, England. Writer of short stories and poems in a wide range of genres, forms and styles. A non-fiction writer for 40+ years. Subjects include art, history, science, business, law, and the human condition.

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  • Tim Carmichael8 months ago

    It’s like a snapshot of family life that’s both funny and warm.

  • I didn't fully get the context but it seemed funny to me hahahaha

  • Why does this sound so familiar, lol?

  • Mark Graham9 months ago

    Ahh, the life of teens and their parents. Memories, we all have and share and at times do not want to remember. Good job.

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