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🌙 “Grandma’s Last Petal”

A Dark Wholesome

By Muhammad Kashif Published 2 months ago • 5 min read




---Story Begins

I was eleven years old when my grandmother first showed me the flower.

It lived in an old glass jar, the kind that used to hold honey years before I was born. The jar sat on the smallest shelf in her room — the one I wasn’t allowed to touch unless she was with me.

“Come here, Noor,” she said that day, her soft voice calling me like the smell of warm bread on winter mornings.

I climbed onto her bed and sat beside her. The room smelled of sandalwood, old paper, and something else — something like a secret waiting to be discovered.

“Look closely,” she whispered.

Inside the jar was a single flower.
Purple. Soft. Fresh.
As if it had just been picked.

But the strange thing was…

It never faded. Never dried. Never died.

I had seen that flower every day of my life. And it always looked the same.

“Dadi… yeh murta kyun nahi?” I asked.

My grandmother smiled a knowing smile — the kind adults give when they know something you don’t.

“Because,” she said, lifting the jar gently, “this flower survives on love, not water.”

I laughed. “Flowers eat love?”

“They don’t eat it,” she corrected. “They respond to it.”

I didn’t understand.

So she explained.

“Each petal,” she said, touching the flower softly, “is a moment of love left in my life. When I leave this world, these petals will help you instead.”

“Help me? How?”

“You’ll see,” she said, placing the jar back.
“And you must never be afraid of it. This flower knows you. It always has.”

Her words sat in my heart like a warm candle.
But I had no idea how true they were.


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The First Petal Falls

My grandmother passed away on a cold December morning.

The world felt different after that.
Quieter.
Like someone had taken the color out of it.

We returned home from her funeral, and her room felt heavier than ever.
I walked to the shelf, hesitating.

The flower looked… still.
Too still.

And then —
A soft sound filled the room.

Tick.

A petal fell.

Just one.

It floated down slowly, like a feather.
I forgot how to breathe.

My grandmother’s words echoed:

“When I leave this world, these petals will help you instead.”

But what did help mean?

That night, I found out.


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The Accident

It was raining hard when it happened.

I was walking home from school, bag soaked, shoes slippery, when a motorcycle came speeding from a blind turn.
The headlights glared.
The wheels splashed water like angry waves.

I froze.

Before I could move, something brushed against my shoulder — a faint push, gentle but firm — and I stumbled backward, falling into a puddle.

The motorcycle zipped past, barely missing me by inches.

My heart hammered like a drum.

If I hadn’t fallen back…

I would have been hit.

At home, I found a purple petal in my pocket.

My grandmother’s petal.

My hands shook as I held it.

The flower had protected me.


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The Second Petal

Weeks passed.

And then one night, I woke to the sound of someone whispering.

“Noor…”

I sat up, trembling.
The voice was soft. Familiar. Loving.

“Dadi?” I whispered into the darkness.

Silence.

Then — another soft sound.

Tick.

A second petal had fallen.

The next day, I found out why.


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The Teacher

There was a new teacher at school.
Strict. Cold.
She disliked me for reasons I could never understand.

That day, she accused me of cheating on a test — something I would never do. She shouted at me in front of the class, her voice sharp like broken glass.

I felt humiliated, tears burning in my eyes.

After school, she kept me back alone.
She closed the door.

Her face changed.
Her voice grew darker.

“You think you can embarrass me?” she hissed. “You think you’re smart?”

I backed away, heart pounding.
There was something wrong.
Terribly wrong.

Then — the lights flickered.

Her pen rolled off the desk.
The windows rattled.

A cold wind blew through the room.

The teacher turned pale.

And behind me…
For a moment…
For a single heartbeat…
I saw a shadow.

Not frightening.
Not harmful.

Protective.

The teacher gasped and stumbled back.
Her face drained of color.

“You… you’re not alone,” she whispered.

I didn’t understand.
But I went home shaken.

That night, I checked the jar.

A second petal was gone.


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The Warning

The third petal fell on a night filled with thunder.

This time, the help didn’t come in the moment — it came as a message.

A dream.

I saw my grandmother sitting at the foot of my bed, her hands on her lap, smiling softly.

“Don’t go near the well tomorrow,” she said.

“What well?”

“You’ll know.”

Her figure blurred with the lightning.

“Promise me, Noor.”

I nodded.

And the dream faded.

The next morning, the sky was gray.
School felt heavy.

At recess, my friend Hina ran toward me.

“Noor! Come see — there’s water in the old well today!”

My breath stopped.

The well.

“No,” I said sharply. “Don’t go.”

But she grabbed my hand, pulling me.

We reached the edge. Kids were leaning over, curious.

I took one step closer —
Just one —

And the ground under my foot collapsed.

I jumped back instinctively.

If my foot had been one inch forward…

I would have fallen into the well.

A hand — soft, warm, and familiar — touched my back.

Steadying me.

When I turned, no one was there.

But on the ground, at my feet, was a purple petal.


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The Last Petal

Years passed.

The flower grew smaller.
Petals fell only when danger whispered around me like unseen smoke.

A road accident.
A fire in the neighbor’s house.
A stranger following me home.

Each time —
I survived.

Each time —
A petal disappeared.

By the time I turned seventeen, only one petal remained.

One last moment of love.

Sometimes I stared at it for hours.

What would it save me from?
Would I know when it fell?
Would Grandma appear again?

Then came the night everything changed.


---

The Midnight Knock

It was past midnight when I heard a knock at our door.

Slow.
Dry.
Uneasy.

My mother was asleep.
My father worked night shifts.

I walked slowly toward the door.

Another knock.

“Noor…”
Whispered a voice.

A chill ran down my spine.

I peeked through the eyehole.

A man stood outside.
Tall.
Hood covering his face.

Something about him felt wrong.

Dangerous.

I stepped back.

The knocking grew louder.

“Open,” he said, voice low. “I need help.”

But he didn’t sound like someone who needed help.

He sounded like someone who wanted inside.

Suddenly —
the air shifted.

A warmth filled the room.

Soft. Familiar.

Tick.

The last petal fell.

The man outside tried the handle —
it didn’t budge.

Because the lock had turned by itself.

From the inside.

I stared, heart shaking.

A shadow moved behind me — gentle, loving.

A whisper brushed my ear:

“Don’t open the door.”

I didn’t.

We called the police.
The man was caught two streets away.
He had broken into three houses that night.

When they took him, he kept looking back at our house…
confused.

As if he couldn’t understand why he didn’t get in.

I knew why.

The last petal had saved me.


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The Empty Flower

The next morning, I went to my grandmother’s room.

The flower had no petals left.
Just a bare stem.

But it didn’t look dead.

It looked peaceful.

Complete.

As if its purpose was fulfilled.

I touched the jar gently.

“Thank you, Dadi,” I whispered.

The room felt warm —
just for a moment.

And in that moment, I knew:

She wasn’t gone.

She had simply moved into the spaces where love lives quietly —
in warnings, in dreams, in invisible touches.

In petals.


---

Final Lines

Some people say love ends when a person dies.
But they’re wrong.

Love becomes something else.

A petal.
A whisper.
A shadow.
A protection.

Love doesn’t disappear.

It transforms.

And sometimes…

if you’re lucky…

it stays.

ExcerptFableFantasyLovePsychologicalHumor

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