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Foul Play In Law

Boomerang Affect

By Mariann CarrollPublished 3 years ago 1 min read
Foul Play In Law
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Kima finally met the man she wanted to marry. Edward was nice with her kids and a great father figure in her book. She did not like, how he was closed to his sister.

She called in the Curse guy to destroy the family relationship closeness. She fallowed the Curse guy instructions for a year. Edward’s sister, Flora started to have series of bad luck. The relationship between Edward and his sister started to deteriorate overnight.

Kima obscenity, cause her to lose her kids and parents in her process of trying to curse her sister-in-law.

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Mariann Carroll

Proactive for positive change.Born in the City of Chicago ,Illinois.

Multi race .Studied in a foreign country .Fluent in several languages .

fascinated by diversity.A Romantic and a dreamer.Interest in healthy living

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  • Novel Allen3 years ago

    So sad. Karma is a biach.

  • 🥹Wow that sucks❗ Someone is always wishing for bad things to happen to someone else and that's why I stay prayed up❤️😉🙏Gods Favor❗

  • C. H. Richard3 years ago

    Karma has a way of coming back! Nicely done ❤️

  • Cathy holmes3 years ago

    Nicely done.

  • That is why jealousy and resentment should never be acted upon. She should have known Karma wouldn't leave anyone out. She got what she deserved. I loved this story!

  • Dawn Salois3 years ago

    Great flash fiction! Well done!

  • Clyde E. Dawkins3 years ago

    Epic short story!!

  • Tiffany Gordon3 years ago

    Awesome work!

  • Karma is a..., well, let's just say, "What goes around comes around." And curses have consequences.

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