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First Impression

How it all started

By Michelle SolomonPublished 3 years ago 3 min read
First Impression

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First Impression 🤦🏻‍♀️🙅🏻‍♀️😫😪

April Donovan’s father seriously needed a strong business partner or risk loosing his company.

With things seeming to crumble April dad has changed from the sweet loving dad to a sadist.

In a bid to help out, she tries to offer herself and her virginity

Turns out she couldn’t after-all. . .

But there at the brothel she met him.

Jederiek MacKenx

A Casanova of all time

His father will only give him the company if he gets married.

Fast forward. . .

April was getting married

Twas d least she could do to help out her old man

Not what she looked forward to though

She didn’t even know the groom gosh.

There at the altar she met face to face with Jederek

He was the same dude she met at the brothel .

Jederek p.o.v

“Wow so father is getting me married to a slut”

Does he even know?

Fine we didn’t fuck but shit!

I saw her bidding herself

I’m a player but I don’t want this bitch

I’m sure gonna frustrate her life

April p.o.v

I know what he’s thinking

But he doesn’t really know me

“Hell i’m a virgin “

And my husband to be . . .

The hottest bachelor in town

I want my first time to be with the one I love. . .

This marriage is just a compromise

But gosh he looks so cute, sighs.

I’m allowed to admire hello!

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First impression (1)🙅🏻‍♀️😫😪

(How it all started)

Mr Donovan paced around the wall of his furnished sitting room

Mumbling things he alone could hear.

From a distance I watched as dad kicked stuffs. I felt really bad

Dad wasn’t one to vent his anger out this way.

Mum was trying her best to pacify him

But he yelled at her

Have never seen dad react in this manner

Is that how bad things were, I wondered.

After dad stormed off to his room

I walked up to Mum

She was trying so hard to hide her tears but it was of no use

I hugged her closed and remained silent as she sobbed against my shoulders.

Mrs Donovan POV

April sweetie yunno things ain’t going well

The business really needs fund

or we cease to exist

Sweetie, yunno how much this empire means to I and your dad

We’ve worked all our lives to

bring the Donovan’s empire to this height. Now this she sobbed. . .

It’s fine mom, it will be.

Nothing will be fine sweetie

I don’t know I can’t watch him this way, he’s a shadow of himself .

She walked out and gave me a fake smile. I’m sorry April, I shouldn’t have let you seen me in this state.

Common mom, I ain’t a child anymore. I You can tell me anything, I’m your daughter not a stranger. She muttered a thanks as she disappeared into the darkness.

My mom was a pretty blonde

At 45 she maintained her physique

and looked quite astonishing

Her well tanned legs fit perfectly.

Gosh! mum was a hottie, I had to admit.

April POV

I have to do something about this

I can’t see my parents in this condition.

Scourging through the internet on my laptop I came across a website where one could bid herself and get a cool pay.

Hell this is a brothel . . .

The cash could go a long way in recruiting partners and paying workers but. . .

Can I really do this

Have dreamt of giving my virginity to my husband. . .but . . .

Dad has done so much for me

We weren’t super rich but we lived a comfortable life. Bidding my self doesn’t that make me some kind of slut? Oh! shit the things we do for money.

If only I haven’t lazied around and started working . . . I feel so useless

It’s the least I can do

It will be late at night

No one will know

April are you really thinking of this ? Every ounce of rationality was gone, the idea sounded perfect.

How did I come across this useless site in the first place.

I closed the system knowing my mind is finally made up.

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About the Creator

Michelle Solomon

I’m Michelle and I’m 20

Have always loved writing stories right from when I was 10, too bad just my sister got to read them😂😂

At first I loved reading stories, mind you I still do but then I thought. . . How about I create them? Thanks 😊

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  • Rayshex TTW 3 years ago

    Nice ❤

  • JaDe3 years ago

    Nice one

  • Pat James3 years ago

    💕💕

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