[FINAL UPDATE] I was the only one working the night shift… so who checked in Room 409?
By: Inkmouse

Okay, I don’t even know why I’m posting this.
I just need someone to see it in case I… I don’t know.
If you read my last two posts, you know what’s been going on.
Room 409 keeps checking itself in.
A dead guest’s name keeps reappearing. And last night, he answered the wake-up call.
Tonight
I wasn’t supposed to be here.
I asked for time off — told my manager I needed a break. He said fine, but when I checked the schedule earlier, my name was still listed for the overnight shift.
No one else’s name is ever listed anymore. Just mine. When I walked in, the lobby lights were dim. It smelled like aftershave. The keycard dispenser already had a card sitting in the tray. Room 409.
Time-stamped 1:13 a.m., even though it was barely 9:40 p.m.
I tried pulling up the reservation system, but the page wouldn’t load. It kept flashing the words:
GUEST CHECKED IN
CHECK-OUT: PENDING
And every time I hit refresh, another name appeared underneath Walter D. Price’s... Mine.
At 1:13, the monitors flickered again.
This time, I saw him. A man standing by the window in 409.
Old-fashioned clothes, neat gray hair, holding something that looked like a hotel keychain — the old metal kind we don’t use anymore.
He turned toward the camera. And I swear to God, his face was mine.
The elevator opened on its own. No ding this time. Just that low electrical hum.
I told myself I wasn’t going to go up there, that I’d stay put until morning, but…
The front desk phone started ringing.
Line 409.
The caller ID read: “Front Desk.”
The Room
The door to 409 was already open when I got there.
Inside, everything was arranged the same way as before — suitcase, shoes, toiletries.
But now, there were two suitcases. One was mine. The same black roller bag I keep behind the desk. I didn’t bring it up. I didn’t even pack it.
The bathroom light was on. I heard the tap running.
And then — faintly — that same voice:
“Front desk?”
Only this time, it came from behind me. Before It Went Dark.
The lights cut out as I turned. For a split second, I saw something — a figure, maybe a reflection — standing where I’d been a moment ago.
Same uniform. Same posture. Same name tag.
I don’t remember leaving the room. I don’t remember getting downstairs.
But the footage this morning (before it vanished) showed someone — me — returning to the desk at 1:28 a.m., checking something into the system, then walking out the front doors.
I haven’t left since.
Now
The lobby clock says 1:12 a.m. The elevator just started moving on its own. There’s a keycard sitting on the desk again — fresh, still warm from the dispenser.
Room 409.
Name: [REDACTED].
It’s not Walter this time. It’s me.
And the system says:
CHECKED IN.
GUEST NEVER CHECKS OUT.
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