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Feel Deep

A deep conversation between two individuals without uttering a single word aloud.

By Karun Published 2 years ago 3 min read
A deep conversation between two individuals without uttering a single word aloud.

In the heart of a busy city, hidden amidst towering buildings, there lies a tranquil lake, a serene oasis of stillness. At the very edge, where the water gently kisses the shore, stood a couple, their eyes locked in a silent conversation that transcends words. But they never uttered a word loudly. It was all thoughts and feelings, facial expressions and body language.

Our heroine, Amelia is a young girl, her age is 20. She spark of determination in her eyes. She finds beauty in life's simple moments and seeks solace in the serenity of nature. Despite facing several challenges, there's a quiet strength about her, and her genuine smile can light up even the gloomiest days. Amelia is the kind of person who values connection, cherishing the unspoken bonds that make life meaningful. She is the love angel in human form.

It's Oliver our hero. Oliver is a kind and steady presence, with a calm demeanour that makes you feel at ease. His eyes hold a depth of understanding, reflecting a mix of compassion and resilience. Oliver is a reliable friend who listens without judgment, offering a comforting presence in both joy and sorrow. Oliver always keeps up secrets. He has a thoughtful way of navigating life's challenges, and his sincerity shines through in the way he cares for those around him. Oliver is like the steady anchor in the midst of life's storms.

Let us move to the story, but before going deep into the feeling let's go to the shallow flashback.

It was a crisp autumn day when their paths first crossed, the air filled with the scent of fallen leaves and the promise of new beginnings. Amelia, a dreamer with an affinity for capturing fleeting moments, had been photographing the vibrant hues of the changing leaves. Oliver, a quiet observer with a passion for literature, sat by the same lake, engrossed in a worn paperback.

Their eyes met, a serendipitous collision of two worlds. Without a single word, a connection sparked, like the first ember of a warming fire. Was it a flash of lightning without clouds or a temple without God, it was a conversation without uttering a word.

Does the sun shine or the rain win? Life can change even in a short time. So did it. Each one wanted the silence to be broken by the other. Oliver waited for Amelia to talk, Amelia wanted Oliver to begin. But none spoke a word. The silence was broken by the huge thunderbolt with an ear-piercing sound. Rain had started to drizzle. Yet no one spoke. Oliver made a sign, his single eyebrow went up.

Amelia noticed a hand accompany her shoulders. In the raindrops there bloomed a love without any words. At times silence is better than any music and silence is better than conversation. The love that the ancients who had no language had and the present where various different languages, cast and religion join their hearts with love. When hearts can understand each other words are useless. When there is true love the body language and the small details you show say more than your words and are understood well.

Amelia's cry droplets fell in the ground mixing with the rainy mud. The crying tears in the rain were unnoticed as there were several other drops. But Oliver can understand her sorrow, Amelia lost her hero father in a flood, and every time it rains she remembers her father and the incident that led to an accident.

Amelia was a small child about 7 years old, she was playing in the rain. Her father warned her that playing rain would cause cold. Rain was heavy, Amelia climbed a tree and waved her hand to her father. Her father was shocked, and he ran towards her. Amelia was always speaking aloud, very much her rhymes on songs. His father came straight towards her, he climbed the tree and put Amelia under the tree Amelia turned and looked at her father with tears that were hidden in the rain, but her father knew what real cry tears are. But before he could say anything nature said something loud. Suddenly a lightning bolt struck bright and before the thunder was heard the tree was on fire. Amelia saw her father's death in her eyes and she was guilty that her mistake led to a tragedy. Her inferiority complex was overcome in the same rain with Oliver's hug. It is a story without any conversation, pain without any suffering and cry without tears. There are no tears left to live the ever-after happy life and the interesting problems between Oliver and Amelia. The couple would speak out loud later when another rain comes with their body language. The rain and the tale of unconditional love will continue. Thank you.

AdventurefamilyFantasyLoveMicrofictionSeriesShort StoryPsychological

About the Creator

Karun

🌿✨ Karun, a poet weaving emotions into verses, embarked on the journey of words to unearth the beauty of feelings. In the delicate dance of ink and emotion, my poetry delves into the nexus of the human heart and the natural world.✍️

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  • ABDUL RASHID 2 years ago

    nice

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