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Fatal Mistake: Three Men

The story is about 3 friends getting into trouble with a cartel member.

By MetehanPublished 3 years ago 7 min read

Note: The following story contains graphic violence, language, and themes that may be disturbing to some readers

Part 1: The Mistake

It was supposed to be just another night out for Max, Adam, and Jesse. The three friends had known each other since they were kids and had always been up for some excitement. They decided to hit up a sketchy bar in the outskirts of town, looking for a good time.

As soon as they entered the bar, they knew they were in trouble. The air was thick with smoke and the sound of loud music. The bar was dimly lit and filled with rough-looking men and women, all of whom seemed to be eyeing the newcomers suspiciously. Max felt a knot in his stomach, but he didn't want to chicken out in front of his friends.

They ordered some beers and started playing pool. They were having a good time until a group of men entered the bar. These men were different from the others, they were dressed in suits and had a menacing aura around them. Max and his friends immediately knew they were not to be messed with.

One of the men walked up to them and said, "What are you doing here, boys?" in a deep, intimidating voice. Max tried to play it cool and said they were just looking for a good time. But the man didn't seem convinced.

Suddenly, one of Max's friends, Adam, decided to speak up. "What's it to you? We're just having a good time."

The man looked at Adam with a cold stare and said, "You should leave. This is not a place for kids like you."

Max and Jesse tried to diffuse the situation, but Adam was not one to back down. He started to argue with the man, and things quickly escalated. Before they knew it, a fight had broken out.

The three friends fought as hard as they could, but they were no match for the seasoned fighters. In the chaos, Max saw one of the men pull out a gun. He knew they were in serious trouble.

Suddenly, everything went silent. Max saw Adam fall to the ground, blood spilling from his chest. He looked up to see the man with the gun looking at him with a cold, emotionless expression.

Part 2: The Cover-up

Max and Jesse were in shock. They had just witnessed their friend being killed in front of them. They knew they had to get out of there before the men caught up with them.

They ran out of the bar and got into Max's car. They drove for what felt like hours, not knowing where to go. They were both in a state of shock, unable to process what had just happened.

Eventually, they ended up in a secluded area on the outskirts of town. They parked the car and got out to get some fresh air. That's when they saw it - the body of a man lying on the ground, not far from where they parked.

At first, they thought it was one of the men from the bar, but then they realized it was someone else. The man was dressed in black and had tattoos all over his body. They knew immediately that he was a member of the cartel.

Max and Jesse were horrified. They had no idea how the man had ended up there. They knew they had to get out of there before anyone saw them. They got back into the car and drove away, leaving the body behind.

For days, they couldn't shake the feeling of guilt and fear. They didn't know what to do or who to turn to. They couldn't go to the police, they were too scared of what might happen if they did. They decided to keep quiet and hope that no one ever found out.

Part 3: The Consequences

Days turned into weeks, and weeks turned into months. Max and Jesse tried to move on with their lives, but they couldn't escape the guilt that weighed heavy on their shoulders. They didn't talk about what happened that night, not even to each other. It was like a dark cloud hanging over them, constantly reminding them of their mistake.

But their mistake was about to catch up with them.

One day, Max received a call from an unknown number. When he answered, a deep, intimidating voice spoke on the other end. "I know what you did," the voice said. "You killed one of our own, and now you're going to pay."

Max's heart stopped. He knew immediately that the voice belonged to someone from the cartel. They had found out about the body, and they knew that Max and Jesse were responsible.

The next few days were a blur. Max and Jesse received countless threats and warnings, telling them to leave town and never come back. They knew they were in danger, but they didn't know where to go or who to turn to.

One night, they heard a loud banging on their front door. They knew immediately that the cartel had come for them. They tried to escape through the back door, but they were too late. The men had already surrounded the house.

They fought as hard as they could, but they were outnumbered and outgunned. Max saw Jesse fall to the ground, blood pouring from his chest. He knew it was only a matter of time before they caught him too.

But then, something unexpected happened. The police arrived, guns drawn. They had been tipped off about the cartel's presence and had come to stop them. The men scattered, trying to escape, but many were caught.

Max was arrested along with the other men. He was charged with manslaughter, and the weight of his mistake came crashing down on him. He knew he had caused so much pain and suffering, not just to the man he had killed but to everyone around him.

Part 4: The Aftermath

Max spent several years in prison, trying to come to terms with what he had done. He thought about Adam and Jesse every day, wishing he could turn back time and make a different choice. He knew he would never be able to fully make amends for his mistake, but he tried to do what he could.

When he was released from prison, he tried to start over. He moved to a new town, got a job, and tried to make a life for himself. But the guilt and shame never left him. He knew he would always carry the weight of his mistake with him.

Years passed, and Max grew older. He never forgot what happened that night, but he learned to live with it. He knew that he had made a terrible mistake, but he also knew that he had learned from it. He tried to be a better person, to make up for the harm he had caused.

In the end, Max realized that life is not about avoiding mistakes. It's about learning from them, growing from them, and trying to do better. He knew he could never undo what he had done, but he could make a difference in the world, one small act of kindness at a time.

And so, Max moved forward, carrying his past with him but never letting it define him. He knew that life was precious, and that every moment was a gift. He tried to live each day to the fullest, knowing that tomorrow was never guaranteed. And he hoped, in his heart of hearts, that someday he might be able to make amends for the mistake that had changed his life forever.

Part 5: Redemption

Years went by, and Max lived a quiet life, working hard and trying to be a good person. He had made a lot of progress in his own life, but he still felt like he had to do more. He wanted to find a way to make up for what he had done, to make things right somehow.

One day, Max heard about a volunteer program at a local community center. They were looking for people to help mentor at-risk youth, to give them a positive role model and help guide them towards a better future. Max knew this was his chance to make a difference.

He signed up for the program and soon found himself working with a group of teenagers who had been through some tough times. They came from broken homes, poverty, and often found themselves getting into trouble with the law.

At first, it was challenging. The kids were skeptical of Max, and some of them seemed to resent him for trying to tell them what to do. But Max persevered. He shared his own story with them, telling them about the mistake he had made and the consequences he had faced.

Slowly but surely, the kids started to open up to Max. They began to trust him, and they saw him as someone who could help them. Max helped them with their schoolwork, took them on field trips, and showed them that they had potential.

As the weeks and months went by, Max saw a change in the kids. They were more positive, more focused, and more determined to succeed. They started to believe in themselves and their abilities, and they saw a future for themselves that they had never imagined.

Max felt like he had finally found his purpose. He knew that he could never undo what he had done, but he could make a difference in the lives of these kids. He could help guide them towards a better future, and in doing so, he could make up for his past mistakes.

In the end, Max realized that redemption was not about erasing the past, but about making the most of the present. He had made a terrible mistake, but he had also learned from it. He had used that lesson to become a better person, and in doing so, he had found a way to help others.

And as he looked back on his life, he knew that he had found something that was truly valuable. He had found a way to make a positive impact on the world, and that was a gift that could never be taken away.

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About the Creator

Metehan

Hi! I'm Mete. I have been writing for 5 years and during this time I have written many articles, essays and poems. It's like there's no text left that I haven't written. I think you will like it when you read my useful articles.

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  • Nikki Clam3 years ago

    Lovely read and the way you have organized the narration is really impressive :)

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