Every Car Sounds Different
excerpt from a work in progress

Every car sounds different
[distancing] and still distinct
she is driving while talking on the phone
Aproach of the coach—dreaming of a dram on the couch and reading the sofa—at least that
gentleman was—and see here another bedraggled man-youth just burning and yearning for a new
car silent with stealth or noisy with a roaring motor to put the rest to shame:
every car on the road produces a distinct sound
distances can be measured by sound
as is an oasis in the desert
or a clearing in the deepest jungle
so is a city park, flush with spring flowers and a plot of trees and grass
Root-bound in walkways—great knot of side-steps [all roads leading]
Setting the Trends—
world massing
presence-makers of the glow-worm’s ocular buzz—
bathed and raised in artificial lightscapes
where stars though invisible behind the glare
dance in audible suite
hearing escapist Titles
LIKE ANTS FROM THE TOP
Free-Range Humans and their cage of eggs crowd the belabored supermarket belly big with
squirming Earthlings past the populist defeudalization
From the Top of Skyscrapers was one other such escapist title:
subtitled “Peak Hour” [or Sunset Trip: “Happy Hour”]
ether way
the earthlings look like ants down below
a supermarket job befits it
you could say—I’ve got to find another job HIT THE ROAD and so, moving on...
only dreaming of the dolphins’ path/
the whale-road
the fortune cookie says hit the road jack really meant I need another job
ON THE ROAD [again]
this just can’t go on [is the heroic response]
but why could he not just drift from job to job, from library to library, settling in a humble bed,
owning no books but reading them all, having no career but mastering every skill: wasn’t this the
handyman’s path to sagehood?
here they are walking all over me, I get the worst shifts I’ve forgotten about school and
I’ve learned to do and see everything I can in such a place, which although it’s next to nothing, is still
the kernal and basis of our consumerist conglomerate, I’m still its parasite
Sunset Vapor: wow, eternal pines in the permagreen path, even here, in a park
ON THE RIGHT PATH
blackened Industrial Landscape
Leavings of the Commercial Revolution’s merger with the post-Information Age was aging and the
ages were piling hi 2 the skie, ripe with hopes and misgivings
to us the leavings
this was now beyond metals but still dependent upon metals, basis for all such framework and
wiring
[going the wrong way down a One-Way Street]
high to the sky
the atomic toadstool effect
of a strong summer sunset
on the particulate in the industrial air, seen in the shifting vapors, something like soot, layer by layer,
magisterial, more mysterious than mist, but not a zephyr?
there are zones of windflow unfelt down here which buffet the cloud forms towards the witness
from within that zone of its airshell; big swaths of light were shrouded in cloud and then alternately
lit with noon gildings only to morph and vanish in twisted dispersal and absorption
zones of windfall flowing unfelt by us which folds into itself and the airways
The Road Less Travelled: “Really Watching the Twilight”
staring into the sunset vapors and
directly into the reddening and growing sphere of the sinking sun
unblinded
(branded a red circle on the back
of closed eyelids)
which whether it was a kind of idle navel-gazing or not—you decide—but the ephemera of the
layers of particulate vapor and the waves the vast colors they took were shifted out of their tubes or
pillows of billow and flattened into pink-orange and purplish nebulae lined with silver,
clouds are slowly being pulverized and scattered
slowly fading into a neutral indigo greying
over the darkening pines planted in the sooty industrial landscape of outskirts
[the fortune-cookie said this would be important]
About the Creator
Rob Angeli
sunt lacrimae rerum et mentem mortalia tangunt
There are tears of things, and mortal objects touch the mind.
-Virgil Aeneid I.462
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