Istanbul, 2015
The Bosphorus shimmered under the golden haze of a late summer evening, its waters whispering secrets to the city that straddled two continents. Istanbul was a place of contrasts—opulence and struggle, dreams and despair. Kemal, at twenty-two, is a determined student from Zonguldak, balancing university studies with part-time jobs to support his family. On a regular day, he boards a bus home, his mind occupied with engineering concepts. His hands, calloused from labor, rest on his lap, a stark reminder of his modest roots.The bus lurches to a stop, and Nihan, a beautiful and slightly disheveled artist, steps aboard, her sketchbook under her arm. She offers cash to the driver, but he insists on a bus card, leaving her confused. Kemal, noticing her distress, stands up and offers his own bus card. "Here, you can use mine," he says, his voice steady but warm.She looks up, surprised, and then smiles, a smile that makes Kemal's heart skip a beat. "Thank you," she says, taking the card and swiping it. As she hands it back, their fingers brush, and for a moment, time seems to stand still. They stand close in the crowded bus, the vehicle's sway bringing them nearer with each turn. Kemal can smell her perfume, a light, floral scent that mingles with the city air. He notices she is carrying a sketchbook, and every now and then, she glances at him, her eyes lingering on his face.Is she sketching me? he wonders, but dismisses the thought as the bus continues its route. At another stop, a seat becomes available, and Kemal gestures for her to take it. "Please," he says, his manners ingrained from years of hard work and respect for others.She sits down, grateful, and opens her sketchbook on her lap. Kemal tries not to stare, but his curiosity gets the better of him. He leans slightly, trying to catch a glimpse, but she quickly turns the page, revealing a sketch of an old man instead. Kemal chuckles inwardly, impressed by her quick thinking, thinking, "She's clever, this one."When his stop arrives, Kemal alights, casting one last look at the woman. She meets his gaze, and for a brief moment, there is a connection, a spark that neither can deny. But then the bus pulls away, leaving Kemal with a sense of loss, wondering if he would ever see her again. Later that day, Kemal finds himself at a mall with a friend, browsing through the shops. An art exhibition catches his eye, and he wanders in, more out of curiosity than interest. As he walks through the displays, a particular sketch stops him in his tracks. It is his own face, rendered with remarkable detail and emotion, the eyes capturing a depth he hadn't realized he possessed. In the corner, signed "Nihan Sezin," he smiles, committing her name to memory, a small piece of her he can hold onto. That evening, Kemal is working as a valet at an upscale restaurant, a job necessitated by his family's financial struggles. As he parks cars, he notices a group entering, a large banner proclaiming "Happy Birthday Nihan!" hanging above the entrance. His heart skips a beat when he recognizes her, radiant in a beautiful dress, surrounded by friends and family.But as he watches, a sense of inadequacy washes over him. She is from a world of wealth and privilege, while he is just a student struggling to make a living. He turns away, ashamed of his own status, fearing that if he approached her, he would be mocked or dismissed, his heart heavy with unfulfilled longing.Inside the restaurant, the birthday celebration is in full swing, but Nihan feels out of place. Her mother, Vildan, is pressuring her to marry Emir Kozcuoğlu, a wealthy businessman who has been infatuated with her since childhood. Nihan has no interest in Emir; her heart belongs to art and freedom.As the night wears on, Emir arrives, his presence commanding attention. He is charming, but there is a darkness in his eyes that makes Nihan uneasy. When she dances with a male friend, a classmate from her art circle, Emir's jealousy flares, and he confronts the friend, beating him in a fit of rage. The scene causes a commotion, and Nihan, humiliated and angry, leaves the party in tears, her heart racing with fury and exhaustion.She drives to the seaside, seeking solace in the open air. Renting a water motorbike, she hopes the speed and the sea will clear her mind. But as she rides, her foot slips, and she plunges into the dark waters, the cold enveloping her, panic setting in.Kemal, who had been working nearby, sees the accident and doesn't hesitate. He dives in, swimming with all his strength to reach her, pulling her to safety and bringing her to his boat, where he works part-time. "Are you okay?" he asks, his voice filled with concern as he wraps her in a blanket.Nihan, shivering but safe, recognizes him. "You're the one from the bus," she says, a small smile breaking through her distress.Kemal nods, returning her smile. "And you're Nihan Sezin, the artist." They laugh, the tension easing, a shared history bridging the gap between them. "Happy birthday, Nihan," he says softly, surprising her."How did you know?" she asks, her voice tinged with curiosity."I saw the banner at the restaurant," he admits. "I work there sometimes." Her expression softens, grateful for his honesty, and for a moment, the world feels right. On the boat, between 7 pm and 11 pm, they talk for hours, sharing stories of their lives. Kemal opens up about his poverty, his education, and his goals to make mines safe and reliable, aspiring to be the best mining engineer. "I want to build a future where no miner has to fear for their life," he says, his eyes earnest, his voice carrying the weight of his dreams.Nihan speaks of her love for art, how each stroke is a rebellion against her family's expectations. "They want me to marry for money, for status," she confesses, her voice trembling. "But I want to live for myself, for my art." Their connection deepens, a bridge across their class divide, each word a thread weaving their hearts closer.At one point, Nihan takes Kemal's hand, tracing an infinity sign on his palm with her fingertip. "This is how I feel about you," she whispers, her eyes locking with his, a vow of endless love. Moved, Kemal leans in, and they share their first kiss, tender and passionate, a moment of pure connection under the starlit sky, the Bosphorus whispering below them.As the clock strikes 11 pm, Nihan knows she must leave. They exchange numbers, reluctant to part, but knowing they'll see each other again, their hearts alight with hope, the infinity sign a silent promise etched in their minds. That same night, as Nihan drives home, her phone rings at 11:30 pm. It's Ozan, her brother, his voice a frantic wail. "Nihan, I—I think I killed someone! At the farmhouse! Please, come quickly!" Fear grips her heart, the joy of the evening shattered. She floors the accelerator, her car tearing through Istanbul's streets, arriving by 12:30 am at the farmhouse, her pulse pounding in her ears.What she finds there is a nightmare. Ozan is pale, shaking, and Emir stands over him, calm and calculating, his eyes gleaming with a predator's satisfaction. Emir had orchestrated a trap, bringing Ozan to the party, plying him with drinks, and setting up a scenario where Ozan would shoot a woman, Leyla, who was supposed to play dead. She wore blood bags and a bulletproof vest around her belly, the plan being that Ozan, drunk and in excitement, would fire at her abdomen, the blood bags would burst, and she would collapse, feigning death. Emir would then "save" Ozan, burying the body and framing it as a tragic accident, binding the Sezins to him.But in his drunken state, Ozan, his hand trembling, fired at her chest, piercing her heart. Leyla gasped, blood seeping through her fingers as she crumpled to the floor, dead. The room froze, Ozan dropping the gun, his face pale, his bravado shattered. Emir's eyes narrowed, but his mind raced. A real death was better than a staged one—it was leverage, unassailable and absolute. "You’ve killed her," he said to Ozan, his voice calm but laced with menace. "But I’ll fix this. For you. For your family."Emir dragged Leyla's body to the farmhouse garden, Ozan stumbling behind, sobbing. Under the cover of darkness, they buried her beneath an olive tree, the earth swallowing their secret. Emir's hands were steady, his heart untroubled. To him, Leyla's death was a fortunate twist, a stronger chain to bind Nihan.He then called Nihan's family, revealing he was now an accomplice to murder. He blackmailed Nihan, saying, "Marry me, or I'll tell the police, and Ozan will spend his life in prison." Vildan, Nihan's mother, clutched her arm, her voice shrill. "You have to do this, Nihan! For Ozan, for us!" Onder, her father, was quieter, his eyes pleading, torn between guilt and helplessness. Ozan, wracked with panic attacks, could only whimper. By dawn, Nihan agreed, her soul fracturing under the weight of her choice, the infinity sign on Kemal's palm feeling like a distant dream. The next day, Kemal, unaware of the tragedy, called Nihan, his voice bright with hope. "Meet me at the boat," he said. "I have a surprise for you." Nihan, hollowed by grief, drove to the dock, each mile a step toward her own execution. The boat was transformed, strung with fairy lights, a small table set with candles and a simple meal—Kemal's labor of love.They sat, and Kemal poured her a cup of Turkish tea, its warmth a cruel contrast to the coldness inside her. She sipped it, her hands shaking, the porcelain clinking against her teeth. The sky darkened, clouds gathering over the Bosphorus. Kemal, sensing a divine signal in the changing weather, knelt before her, pulling a small box from his pocket. He opened it, revealing a modest ring, its simplicity a testament to his heart. "Nihan, I know it's not much," he said, his voice soft but fervent. "Your hands deserve more, but this is all I have for now. I promise I'll work hard, give you everything you deserve. Will you marry me?"Nihan's breath caught, her hand flying to her mouth as tears spilled over. The proposal was everything she had dreamed of, but it came at the worst moment of her life. Her mind replayed Emir's threats, Ozan's terrified face, the blood in the farmhouse garden. She loved Kemal with every fiber of her being, but she was no longer free. The tears became sobs, her body shaking with the weight of her mourning. Kemal's face fell, confusion clouding his eyes. "Nihan?" he asked, like a child seeking reassurance. "Will you marry me?"She shook her head, a silent, agonized no. The sky broke open, rain pouring down in sheets, as if the heavens wept for them. Nihan stood, her dress clinging to her skin, and ran from the boat, her sobs lost in the storm. Kemal remained seated, the ring in his hand, rain mixing with the tears sliding down his face. The infinity sign she had traced on his palm felt like a lie, and fate, merciless, tore them apart.
CHAPTER 2 WILL BE WRITTEN AND UPLOADED IN A DAY OR TWO, STAY TUNED AS NOW THE STORY WILL TAKE A TURN AND DRIVE YOU ON A JOURNEY OF IMMENSE LOVE.
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