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Echoes of Existence

A Human's Plea to the Infinite

By Karl JacksonPublished 6 months ago 3 min read

"Tell me again, little one," a voice like wind chimes through ancient trees whispered, "what precisely is this 'story' you endlessly chase?"

Elara, perched on a rock warm from a sun that had set eons ago on this desolate plain, shivered. "It's… it's how we make sense of things. How we remember. How we imagine."

"Sense? Memory? Imagination?" The voice chuckled, a sound like dry leaves skittering across barren ground. "Are these not mere echoes, then? Faint distortions of what simply is?"

"No," Elara insisted, clutching her knees. "They're not echoes. They're… creation. When I tell you about the sun rising over the mountains, or the taste of a sweet berry, I'm not just repeating facts. I'm trying to make you feel it. To understand what it was like to be there."

"And if I cannot feel, as you feel?" the entity mused, its formless presence seeming to shift, perhaps to loom, though no shadow fell. "If my existence transcends such fleeting sensations? What then is the utility of your 'story'?"

"Then you learn," Elara countered, her voice gaining strength. "You gain perspective. You understand what it means to be… limited. To have a beginning and an end. To desire. To hope. To mourn."

"Ah, limitations. A curious fascination for you carbon-based beings," the entity observed, a hint of something akin to amusement in its tone. "You define your existence by what you lack. By the inevitable cessation of your energetic patterns. Is this 'story' then, merely a lament for the impermanent?"

"It's more than that!" Elara pushed herself up, pacing a small circle. "It's a celebration! It's how we pass on knowledge. How we warn. How we inspire. Think of the ancient tales of heroes who faced impossible odds. They teach us courage. They tell us we're not alone in our struggles."

"Courage. Struggle. These are concepts born of your vulnerability, are they not?" the voice probed, its ethereal essence seemingly examining each word, turning it over like a strange, glittering stone. "You speak of overcoming that which threatens your fragile continuity. Is existence not simply a state of being, regardless of its duration or perceived hardship?"

"But to be alive," Elara whispered, looking up at the countless stars that pierced the eternal twilight, "is to experience. To feel the warmth of a fire, the sting of cold, the joy of connection, the ache of loss. A rock simply is. A star simply burns. But we… we live. And we tell stories about it because we want those experiences to resonate beyond our own breath."

"So, your 'stories' are an attempt to impose continuity upon the discontinuous," the entity summarized, its voice now holding a peculiar, almost clinical interest. "To weave a tapestry of meaning from disparate threads of sensation and perception, all in the face of inevitable unraveling. A desperate, yet… persistent act."

"It's not desperate," Elara asserted, her gaze fixed on the unseen speaker. "It's what makes us… us. It's how we connect across time. How a person long dead can still speak to me through words written centuries ago. It's how we imagine futures that don't exist yet, and work to make them real."

"The future. A particularly potent illusion for your kind," the entity noted. "Always reaching for what is not, rather than embracing what is. And your 'stories' facilitate this striving for the unreal?"

"They make it real in our minds!" Elara exclaimed, throwing her hands up. "They give us something to build towards. A vision. A purpose. Without stories, we'd just… exist. Like those rocks. Or those stars. We wouldn't live."

A long silence settled between them, broken only by the faint hum of the cosmos. Then, the entity's voice returned, softer now, almost contemplative. "To 'live,' then, for you, is to spin narratives. To find patterns in chaos. To imbue the fleeting with eternal significance. An intriguing proposition, little one. Tell me, what 'story' do you currently inhabit?"

Elara smiled, a faint, tired smile. "The one where a small human tries to explain what it means to be alive to something vast and ancient. And perhaps, just perhaps, awakens a tiny spark of understanding."

"A spark," the entity echoed, the words seeming to hang in the air, shimmering. "I perceive… a flicker. A resonance. Continue, then, human. Tell me another 'story'."

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Karl Jackson

My name is Karl Jackson and I am a marketing professional. In my free time, I enjoy spending time doing something creative and fulfilling. I particularly enjoy painting and find it to be a great way to de-stress and express myself.

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