Doose's Last Performance, Part 3
Weeping with the Angels at the Beauty of the Light
This is the next installment in The ShambElla Saga, and the final installment of three about Doose's Last Performance. For my part, given an opportunity to comment on these events irrespective of the Narrator's snark, I'd like to point out that I understand the need for gentility and compassion, but I am often left to wonder: where's the compassion for those who must step in and do the right thing when everything goes wrong? Again, I ask: Who saves the sacrifice?
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The companions made camp for the night in a clearing in the forest, just as Damien suggested.
When they were all settled in, the EYEGOONS buzzed, and they saw Doose’s last performance.
By the time he got to the last song, the crowd had dwindled.
Doose was shitfaced, but no less eloquent, aside from the occasional exchange with Peter, which everyone enjoyed as much as the rest of the performance.
“Play Freebird!”
“Never heard that one before! Oh, and Peter?”
“Fuck you too, Doose!”
“Ah, nothing like an old friend who knows what you’re laying down! Anyway, this last song is one you’ve never heard before. I wrote it thinking about a Lady I know, and about my mom, and about all the people I love—yes, even you, Peter!—because I know that though we’ve all had tragedy in our lives, none of us would trade the incredible beauty with which we’ve been gifted just to avoid an occasional sad and lonely day. Think of this one as a prayer.”
Everything seems broken
But everything is fine,
So take this small token
And hold the line.
Everyone is chokin’
On the sands of time
But the sea is soakin’
A new paradigm.
Rising from the deep,
A new form of life,
Where the demons creep
On the edge of a knife.
Now the time is comin’
For the end of strife,
This guitar keeps strummin’
The new chord of life
Where the angels weep
At the beauty of the light,
Consigning to the deep
The worst of the blight!
No way out but through
The vision of the night
For the contrast proves
The beauty of the light!
We don’t serve your masters
Or their disasters,
We only serve the beauty
And the meaning of the light!
We are weeping with the angels
At the beauty of the light…
After the final note cleared, the small crowd clapped and hooted and roared at first, but the clapping began to slow, and Doose watched, with the first tears seeping from his eyes, as his old friends shook their heads in confusion.
Their eyes, which were only just a moment ago filled with good cheer, opened wide, and their mouths twitched, and their bodies shook.
Looks of love slowly gave way to sneers of hate.
Doose, who liked to play sitting down, rose from his stool.
Openly weeping, he threw his bass behind him.
He heard it clatter to the floor as he stepped down from the stage and walked behind the bar.
Haley, the bartender, had been his high school girlfriend.
She didn’t even look at him as he reached into his inside flannel pocket and pulled out a small device to leave on the bar.
He walked into the midst of a crowd of just five, and took off the flannel, dropping it to the ground.
His favorite shirt, the one his mom gave him all those Christmases ago, was wrinkled, with ragged edges, little holes, and bleach stains.
The decal on the front was flaked and faded, but it was easy to make out the white horseshoe.
His friends started to growl, bark, and scream.
It wouldn’t be long before they took his life.
Doose, cheeks wet with tears, smiled and waved as the view backed away and out the door, revealing to the companions a sign that Sam and Ella recognized all too well.
It read: The Rusty Barrel.

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C. Rommial Butler
C. Rommial Butler is a writer, musician and philosopher from Indianapolis, IN. His works can be found online through multiple streaming services and booksellers.




Comments (8)
Really beautiful song lyrics, Rommi. The scene at the end of the song was so tragic and cinematic. Riveting and heartbreaking in equal measure.
Oh no...poor Doose. Closing my eyes for this portion of the movie.
Don’t shoot the messenger.
My heart broke so much for Doose 😭😭😭😭😭😭
This is so good, Charles <3
I like how you set up this story. The idea of Doose's last performance is intriguing. It makes me wonder what led to the dwindling crowd. And that song he wrote sounds deep, touching on love and tragedy. I'm curious about the "Lady" he mentioned. Also, what's with the EYEGOONS buzzing? It adds an element of mystery. Can't wait to see how this all wraps up.
Doose went out raw, honest, and alone, but not without meaning. That song it was everything he had left. And it cost him. You asked, “Who saves the sacrifice?” Sometimes no one. Sometimes the sacrifice is the saving. That’s the brutal truth.
I really liked the song, and you should actually get it published as a song. What a great chapter that I will be reading parts 2 and 1 when I get there. Catching up on all my notifications. My transcription assignment was kind of like writing a cookbook.