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Don't Call Me Bethy

A Story Every Day in 2024 Nov 8th 313/366

By Rachel DeemingPublished about a year ago Updated about a year ago 2 min read
Don't Call Me Bethy
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"Don't call me Bethy." Bethan bristled at the endearment.

Dave flinched at her implacable tone, regrouped.

"You're right. That was...wrong. I'm sorry. It's just..." He tailed off, hoping that words left unsaid would convince Bethan that he held some feeling for her still, that he was struggling to keep his emotions in check. Just the right level of vulnerability. He shrugged.

"It's good to see you," he added.

Bethan looked at her ex-husband, his hopeful look and, despite her trepidatory unease at meeting him, she could feel her heart softening. Her brain, however, drifted to his reluctance to answer her calls and Katie's discovery of the camera, timely reminders of reasons to resist his charm offensive.

"Yes...well," she said and left it there.

There was a pause and a shifting of feet by them both and then, Bethan asked:

"So, what's this all about?" Bethan threw out her hand, palm up and Dave remembered that she always was direct.

"Shall we walk?' Dave mimicked the same gesture but with more courtly swagger towards the path, leading into the woods.

"You want to walk?" Bethan was unsure. She wouldn't show weakness but she wouldn't voluntarily lead herself into danger.

"Well, I thought we could walk and talk. It is a beautiful day to walk in the woods." He smiled to himself, ready to deliver his next line. "You remember how much Laney liked leaves, especially little red ones?"

Bethan was not prepared for the memory to rush in, wincing a little, Dave noticing the tremor created by the emotional arrow he'd just slung. He was also struck by an image of his lost daughter stomping through leaves, picking up "special" ones with curiosity. He suddenly felt a pang of longing for his lost little girl.

Bethan saw it, his expression change and wondered was it the same image of Laney in her mind's eye? The jolt of love threatened her equilibrium. Was this ever going to end?

She was struck then by the gap that would be left if Laney's disappearance was ever resolved. She hoped relief would fill the void.

A little red leaf cascaded down where they were standing.

"Okay," she decided. "Let's walk."

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  • D.K. Shepardabout a year ago

    He is clearly a master manipulator. I’m bracing myself

  • Cindy Calderabout a year ago

    NO!! Bethan!!!!! NO!!

  • Oh dear!😵‍💫… JBaz nailed it! I suspect Dave plans foul play, but there seem to be remnants of decency in him… hoping that wins out over his ruthlessness.🥹

  • Jay Kantorabout a year ago

    Daahlink Rd - Please forgive the "Chin~Wag" but you induce me into it. A few more days and you'll be bopping 'round your local Sally Thrift shops in hopes of finding a slightly less thread-bare housecoat...! btw; As little boys with 'Lisps' we called our Sister, Betty, 'Bethy' - Sorry, just me being me - Jbud - Just me being me -

  • JBazabout a year ago

    Me thinks the man be evil....Yet I hope I am wrong because that would mean bad things are about ot happen. Really great sense of tension built in a beautiful surrounding. Well done

  • Cathy holmesabout a year ago

    I know he's an ass, but I don't want him to be THAT much of an ass, so I don't want to worry for her. Yet, here I am, worried.

  • John Coxabout a year ago

    Extraordinary writing, Rachel! You really know how to plumb the human heart!

  • OOOO I am excited for the handy collation! Going to try to start from the beginning because I need to know. I love how you manage to build so much tension in such a small space. Brilliant!

  • HOW DARE HE REMIND BETHAN OF THAT?????

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