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DECEPTION

heist within a heist

By Pamela WilliamsPublished 3 years ago 1 min read
DECEPTION
Photo by Donovan Reeves on Unsplash

Midnight gusts of wind rattled the windows giving the gallery an eerie ambiance. A red-headed woman and a thin man opened a crate of terracotta mythical beasts in the gallery’s darkened room. The woman removed a beast from the box and brushed sawdust away, revealing cracked, sunken eyes.

Thin man shined a flashlight on the beast and whistled.

Then, the woman stood in the shadows, raised the beast above her head, and smashed it to the floor. “Not artifacts,” she yelled. “Fakes!”

A security guard shouted. "You have five minutes to get out of here. There's gonna be a shift change, and I have to get the cameras back online.”

Thin man pulled a revolver from his jacket, threatening the guard. "Move," he said, pushing the guard into the hall and following him down two flights of stairs, into the storm. “This operation’s been in the works for months, and you give us fakes.”

Floodlights signaled the rush of Federal agents. "Drop your weapon," echoed from a bullhorn.

The guard took a deep breath as thin man lowered the revolver. He was all set, even had a buyer.

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About the Creator

Pamela Williams

“Suppose I had wings like the dawning day and flew across the ocean. Even then your powerful arm would guide and protect me.”

— Psalm 139:9–10, Contemporary English Version (CEV)

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  • Michelle Liew Tsui-Linabout a year ago

    Loved the twist, Pamela!

  • Novel Allen2 years ago

    Bob Marley, i like it. Every little thing. Cool heist, wonder what happened, they get so lost between the many challenges.

  • Donna Renee3 years ago

    This was brilliant!! 👏👏👏

  • 5-4-3-2-13 years ago

    Loved it

  • Great job ❤️💯❗

  • Chantae Harding3 years ago

    There is so much going on in this piece. I have company from out of town here and can't give it the time it deserves. I will try to get back to this when I have more time. But I look forward to your next work as well.

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