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DAUGHTER OF THE UNBROKEN THREAD

A feminist retelling of fate, freedom, and the girl who dared to rewrite destiny

By Alisher JumayevPublished about a month ago 6 min read
DAUGHTER OF THE UNBROKEN THREAD
Photo by Sasha Freemind on Unsplash

In every version of the old myths, the Fates are three:

Clotho spins, Lachesis measures, and Atropos cuts.

Three sisters weave the destiny of gods and mortals alike.

But the storytellers never mention the fourth.

Her name was Erytheia, the youngest—born from the same cosmic loom but ignored, dismissed, and tucked away like an inconvenient thread. While her sisters shaped empires with a single gesture, Erytheia was given a broom and told to sweep the floor of the Loom Hall.

“Your job,” Lachesis would say, raising her chin, “is to keep the threads from tangling. You are not to weave. You are not to cut. You are not to interfere.”

Erytheia was obedient.

But obedience is a fragile thing.

And destiny has a way of slipping through fingers—no matter how tightly one grips.

________________________________________

Every night, when her sisters rested, Erytheia wandered through the Hall of Threads—an infinite space stretching farther than mortal eyes could imagine. Countless strands glimmered like stars: the threads of every life.

She was supposed to tidy them.

But Erytheia had a curious flaw: she cared.

While her sisters saw numbers, patterns, and structures, Erytheia saw stories.

She saw a mother’s joy, a warrior’s sacrifice, a queen’s heartbreak. She saw love and loss and the quiet courage of mortals who rose each morning without knowing why.

One thread in particular called to her.

A luminous silver strand belonging to a girl named Thalia of Helis—a mortal destined for greatness but doomed to die before she touched it.

Erytheia traced the thread with trembling fingers.

“Why must she die so young?” she whispered.

The Loom hummed, offering no answer.

She looked around. Her sisters slept. The cosmos was quiet.

And Erytheia—forgotten, underestimated, invisible—felt something dangerous stir within her.

She tugged the thread.

Just a little.

The Hall reacted instantly.

The air snapped. Lights flickered. The thread glowed brighter, resisting her touch.

Destiny does not like to be questioned.

Erytheia pulled harder.

________________________________________

On the mortal plane, Thalia woke with a scream.

In her dream, a blade had been descending toward her throat—her own father wielding it in a sacrifice demanded by the Sun God Helion. When she jolted awake, her heart pounded, sweat soaked her hair, and the blade was gone…

…but the fear remained.

Thalia was no ordinary girl. Born during a rare solar eclipse, the priests had declared her “a child claimed by the sun.” For sixteen years, she lived under prophecy, watched like property, praised in public, and controlled in private.

Now, the day she feared had arrived.

Her father stood over her bed.

“It is time.”

She backed against the wall. “Father, no—please—”

“Helion demands a life to end the drought.” His face was stone. “You are blessed to give it.”

Blessed.

Blessed to die.

Blessed to be used.

Thalia’s throat tightened. “I don’t want to die.”

“It is the will of the Fates,” he said.

Thalia’s fear ignited into rage. “Then the Fates are cruel.”

Her father flinched. She never spoke like that. Never fought back.

Something ancient—something unstoppable—was awakening within her.

“You can’t control me,” she whispered. “Not anymore.”

In another part of the cosmos, Erytheia smiled.

________________________________________

Clotho was the first to wake.

She saw the glowing thread—changed, brightened, alive.

“Someone altered this,” she whispered.

Atropos examined the cut-line. “It resists my blade.”

Lachesis narrowed her eyes. “There is only one in this hall foolish enough to interfere.”

They found Erytheia at the far end of the Loom, pretending to sweep.

Lachesis’s voice cracked like thunder. “What did you do?”

Erytheia straightened her shoulders.

“For once? Something right.”

Atropos stepped forward, scissors gleaming. “You have broken cosmic law.”

“No,” Erytheia said softly. “You have.”

Her sisters froze.

Erytheia walked toward the glowing thread, hand hovering over it with reverence.

“She was destined for death because it was convenient. Because a priest demanded it. Because mortals have always made women pay the price.”

Clotho’s jaw hardened. “Mortals suffer. It is the order of life.”

“Why?” Erytheia looked at them—not with fear, but clarity. “Why must suffering be destiny? Why must death be written in ink no one can erase?”

Lachesis hissed, “You are not a Fate. You were never meant to shape the world.”

Erytheia’s voice was steady.

“And who decided that?”

Her sisters exchanged a look.

They realized something too late.

Erytheia was no longer obeying.

She was questioning.

And questions are far more dangerous than scissors.

________________________________________

Back in Helis, Thalia fled into the night—barefoot, terrified, alive.

The wind whipped through her hair as the sun priests shouted behind her. She sprinted through the village, past ruined fields, past shrines to gods who took more than they gave.

Thalia didn’t stop running until she reached the cliff overlooking the sea.

Below, waves crashed like angry beasts. Above, the sky glowed red as if waking from a long sleep.

She collapsed to her knees.

“I don’t want to die,” she said to the wind. “I want to live. I want to choose my path.”

Then she felt it.

A hand—not physical, but warm—touches her shoulder.

A voice whispered inside her:

“Then choose it.”

Thalia inhaled sharply.

“Who are you?”

“A friend. A sister. A Fate who refuses to obey.”

Thalia closed her eyes.

“I’m nobody. I’m weak. I’m scared.”

“The world fears you because you are powerful.”

The wind surged, swirling around her like a cloak.

Thalia rose slowly, breath steadying, muscles loosening.

For the first time, she felt her pulse not as panic—but as promise.

________________________________________

In the Loom Hall, the sisters launched their retaliation.

Threads snapped across the sky like lightning. Cosmic winds howled. The Loom itself shuddered as Clotho, Lachesis, and Atropos began rewriting the world—hunting down the mortal girl whose destiny had been stolen.

Erytheia stepped in front of Thalia’s thread.

“No.”

Her sisters advanced.

“You cannot protect her,” Atropos said.

“She is meant to die,” Clotho added.

“Women like her always die,” Lachesis finished.

Erytheia felt something ignite inside her chest—the same fire she sensed in Thalia.

A shared defiance.

A shared truth.

“She is not yours to command.”

“She is not yours either,” her sisters snapped.

Erytheia lifted her chin.

“No. But she is hers. And that is enough.”

Her sisters attacked.

Cosmic threads lashed through the air like serpents.

Golden shears sliced toward her wrists.

Destiny itself clawed to reclaim its order.

Erytheia didn’t run.

She grabbed Thalia’s thread with both hands—pulled it to her heart—and channeled every ounce of her power into it.

“THALIA,” she shouted across realms,

“YOUR LIFE IS YOUR OWN!”

________________________________________

On the cliff, Thalia’s eyes snapped open.

Power erupted from her chest—pure, blinding light that shattered the prophecy binding her. The priests fell to their knees. The air trembled. The sea roared.

She felt her fate burning and reforming like molten gold.

No more chains.

No more sacrifices.

No more silence.

Thalia raised her hand, and the cliff glowed beneath her feet.

“I am not your offering,” she said to the sky. “I am the storm you feared.”

And destiny—new and ancient—answered her call.

________________________________________

Back in the Loom Hall, the threads calmed.

Erytheia stepped away from the glowing silver strand.

“Her destiny is changed,” she said.

Atropos’s shears trembled. “Impossible.”

Lachesis whispered, “She rewrote a mortal fate.”

Clotho stared at Erytheia with something like awe—and something like fear.

“You… are more powerful than we believed.”

Erytheia took a deep breath.

“For too long, you shaped destiny without empathy. Without mercy. Without balance.”

She touched the Loom.

It hummed—recognizing her.

“I am not the forgotten sister,” she said softly. “I am the one who listens. The one who sees. The one who cares.”

Her sisters slowly knelt.

Not because she commanded them.

But because she finally saw her own worth—and the cosmos responded.

A new Fate had awakened.

Not one of cruelty.

Not one of indifference.

But one of the choices.

________________________________________

On the mortal plane, Thalia walked away from the cliff—alive, unafraid, unstoppable.

In the heavens, Erytheia watched her with pride.

Two lives.

Two worlds.

One shared courage.

And the myth of the Fates changed forever.

Not three sisters.

But four.

Clotho the Spinner.

Lachesis the Measurer.

Atropos the Cutter.

Erytheia the Rewriter.

The Fate who gave mortals something destiny never allowed before:

Hope.

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About the Creator

Alisher Jumayev

Creative and Professional Writing Skill & Experience. The aim is to give spiritual, impressive, and emotional stories for readers.

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