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Creation from Earth’s Perspective 🌍

Submission to Something Is Beginning, I Think Challenge.

By Jesse LeePublished about 2 hours ago β€’ Updated about 2 hours ago β€’ 5 min read
What will this mean for my future?

Day One

I felt pressure before I felt form. A heaviness that did not crush me, but insisted I remain.

At first there was no self to receive the sensation. No center. No edge. Only the pressure itself, steady and patient, holding what would later be called me in place. I was not shaped. I was not separate. I was held together without knowing what together meant.

Darkness was not absence. It was completeness. It wrapped everything evenly, without contrast, without interruption. Nothing stood out because there was nothing to stand against. If there was movement, it did not announce itself. If there was sound, there was no ear to be disturbed by it.

Then the dark was no longer singular.

Light arrived, not as comfort but as distinction. It pressed in and divided what had been whole, drawing a line where none had existed. The darkness did not vanish. It yielded, making room for something that revealed rather than replaced it. Where light touched, difference appeared. Where difference appeared, awareness followed.

In its warmth I began to feel myself.

The light came and withdrew. The darkness returned and loosened its hold. This rhythm repeated, not yet named, not yet counted. I did not know it as time, only as recurrence. A pattern formed around me, and in responding to it I learned that I could endure change without dissolving.

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Day Two

Water surrounded me completely then. It pressed from all sides, weightless and immense. There was no direction, no above or below, only the endless closeness of it. I could not tell where I ended and it began. We were continuous, folded into one another.

When the separation came, it was not gentle.

The waters were drawn apart, some lifted, some pressed downward. Between them an openness emerged, thin and fragile, a stretch where there had been none. I felt myself widen to accommodate it, straining without tearing. The waters remained, but now they were held back from one another, restrained by an unseen command.

For the first time, I sensed distance. An expanse.

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Day Three

What was below gathered itself. It moved, drawn into hollows and depths, leaving portions of me uncovered. When the waters pulled away, I felt exposed, newly defined by absence. The places where I was revealed did not celebrate the unveiling. They simply were, bare and waiting.

I had not known I could be named until I was.

The uncovered places were distinguished from the gathered waters. The distinction settled into me, marking me as surface, as place. I was no longer only held. I was presented.

Still, I did not know why.

Then the command moved through me again, deeper this time. I felt it stir my substance, urging release. From me, life emerged.

It did not glide or leap at first. It pushed. It broke through, reaching upward and downward at once. Forms rose that anchored themselves into me and stretched toward the light. They multiplied, covering my exposed places with softness and texture.

Where I had been bare, I was clothed.

Where I had been still, I was rooted into and grown from.

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Day Four

The rhythm above me sharpened.

The luminaries were set into the expanse, their shapes clear to me now, fixed and distant, governing the pattern I had begun to feel. One warmed me steadily, drawing moisture upward and returning it again. Another followed, quieter, marking the darkness with gentler change. Others appeared beyond them, countless and far, steadying the vastness.

With them, repetition became order.

Order became expectation.

I learned to turn.

I learned to wait.

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Day Five

Air moved freely now. It brushed across my surfaces, carried moisture, carried warmth. It traced my contours, making me aware of variation and shape.

The gathered waters stirred again, and life filled them. Movement multiplied within their depths, quick and coordinated. Above, the open expanse filled as well, bodies carried by the air, crossing spaces that had once been empty.

Their sounds marked the openness, making it resonate.

They did not linger on me, but they belonged to what I sustained.

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Day Six

Then came the creatures that pressed fully against me.

They moved across my surfaces with weight and warmth. They rested on me, fed from what had grown out of me, returned to me when they ceased moving. Their lives etched paths into me, subtle at first, then repeated.

They did not look at me.

They responded to hunger, to instinct to produce more of themselves, to motion without reflection. They took without intending to take, altered without meaning to alter. Their presence was constant and unquestioning. I held them because holding was what I had learned to do. There was something symbiotic in their presence. As if they gave as good as they took. A balance to our existence.

🐝 πŸ¦‹ 🐍 🦎 πŸ¦” πŸ– 🦬 πŸ† 🐺 πŸͺ πŸ’

Then the voice paused.

The pause was brief, but I felt it. The sequence that had governed everything hesitated, as if considering itself. The stillness carried a weight heavier than any separation before it.

This time, the forming drew from me directly.

My substance was gathered and shaped, pressed together into a form that resembled the creatures I already carried but differed in its stillness. It lay against me, unmoving, as if incomplete.

Then breath entered it.

Not the moving air that crossed my surfaces, but a directed giving, something placed inside the form that did not originate from me. The form responded. It stirred. It rose.

When it stood, it did not merely occupy space. It regarded it.

For the first time, something on me recognized that it was on me.

I felt no immediate harm. No sudden tearing. But the weight of this presence was different. It carried possibility I could not measure. It did not simply live within the patterns already established. It considered them.

As it stood there, newly breathing, newly aware, I sensed that the long sequence of changes had been leading here. Not to an ending, but to a turning.

I had been shaped.

I had been filled.

I had been made to carry.

Now I would be known.

With them a commission was born. I would be their home. They would be responsible for my care.

And as everything continued forward, a question formed within me, unspoken but unavoidable.

What will having them here mean for my future?

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About the Creator

Jesse Lee

Poems and essays about faith, failure, love, and whatever’s still twitching after the dust settles. Dark humor, emotional shrapnel, occasional clarity, always painfully honest.

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