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Chapter 1: Waters of Change

Book Title: The Mystic Threads of Eloria

By Sue Anne KariukiPublished about a year ago Updated about a year ago 3 min read

The river ran backwards on the day the Queen vanished. It turned not only the course of its own waters but spun the fate of the entire realm into a whirlpool of uncertainty. Whispers rose among the leafy boughs of the ancient forests of Eloria; even the woodpeckers paused, dubious, as the river defied nature's course.

King Edrin stood at the banks of the Tevis River, his countenance as stony as the castle walls that loomed behind him. Beside him, his trusted advisor, Eldrin the Wise, traced the contrail of the unnatural flow with an intensity that defied his years. After an era in service, Eldrin had not witnessed the like. A backward river was no mere illusion; it was an omen—an inversion that tugged at the very tapestry of magic that wove through the realm.

"The forest itself hushes," Eldrin spoke, trembling with an air of concealed foreboding. "Nature senses her absence."

King Edrin's hand clenched around his sword hilt. "The Queen means to return," he stated, yet doubt seeped through his conviction. His words were intended more for himself than the wise advisor. "She will return."

"And yet," Eldrin said lightly, the springs of the years evident in each word, "the river protests otherwise. We must probe deeper into this mystery, my King."

The King nodded. The portraits within the castle still held her presence, the emerald eyes and the gracious smile—Queen Seraphina, fairest of the glowing folk—a queen whose iridescent light kindled hope in even the bleariest dusk. Many throughout Eloria could scarce contemplate her abrupt disappearance; even the stars seemed to quiver with confusion on that somber eve.

"Then consult the Oracular Pool. We cannot stand about idly while the kingdom unravels."

The mystic pool behind the shrouded halls of Glinhold would perhaps have the answers they sought. While the rivers defied current logic, the Pool often stretched its essence willingly toward understanding. One needed preparation. The king set off towards the archway in blazing golden-armored swiftness. Such scenes foreshadowed great turning points; every life seemed at cross-sequence, locked within familial bonds.

Glinhold's walls soon cradled them, deep in the mystical grove veiled with cascading plumes of ethereal mist. Light danced without a moon’s guidance. Many adventurers concealed musings in the pool of fewest footsteps knowingly echoed over frayed fibers littered by age.

They reached the altar next to the glimmering Oracular Pool which rested calmly within its embroidered granite embrace. Eldrin began an incantation, his fingers flicking so gracefully that they might have been wand-bound. The pristine waters shifted beneath currents untraceable; definitions eluded ordinary expressions.

The visage that subsequently emerged from the pool revealed a landscape known to none; rippling sands embellished by ornaments floating over an expansive crimson horizon. An ancient voice reverberated from depths indiscernible—intangible as spider silk spun in twilight.

"*When river turns backward, two paths converge. Ill fortune and hope intertwine… Seek swiftstallion bays beyond sunstalk crest*."

"What does it mean?" King Edrin asked, eyes flashing with rare streaks of inquisitive intent. "Sunstalk crest... isn’t that...?"

Eldrin moved like the woods, wise from sun to solemn moon. "Indeed, my lord, a land untracked for generations amongst mortal deeds; yet a realm beneath constellations constant shall reveal another passing step."

The sky above shimmered portentous—as if Chronos measured its ticking heartbeats over scenes dipping toward a cascade within itself.

Swimming complexities of layered arrangements suddenly everywhere all at once; implications lined native traits. Solutions? Mere reflections of desire heeded enigmas answered.

With unwavering determination, anchored in the sanguine promises born of resilience long unearthed, King Edrin commanded a swift assembly.

"Ride," commanded Edrin, now fully consumed by a rising, unbreakable will. "Forth, into journeys anew." Ahead, bewildering landscapes stretched out, with firm paths awaiting discovery between shadowed hours. Tumultuous truths lay hidden, wrapped in the boldness of dreams, daring only the fearless to decipher skies beyond comprehension, where untraceable winds signaled the start of unknown beginnings.

Fantasy

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