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Brown

Talang, 27 January 2025

By Moharif YuliantoPublished 12 months ago 3 min read
Brown
Photo by Hans Isaacson on Unsplash

The old woman sat on her porch swing, the worn wood groaning rhythmically as she swayed. Her eyes, the color of faded mahogany, crinkled at the corners as she watched the children playing in the dusty street. One, a freckled girl with hair the color of burnt caramel, chased a boy with eyes the color of warm chocolate, their laughter echoing through the afternoon.

A sigh escaped the old woman's lips. "Brown," she murmured, the word tasting like rich soil and ripe figs. "Such an underappreciated color."

The children, oblivious to her musings, continued their game. The boy, agile as a young deer, dodged the girl's outstretched hands, his skin the color of cinnamon dusted with a fine layer of sweat. He tripped, tumbling into a patch of wildflowers, their petals the color of rust.

The old woman smiled. Brown was everywhere, if you only knew where to look. It was in the swirling coffee she drank each morning, in the velvety fur of her cat, a creature of shadows and moonlight. It was in the sturdy oak tree that shaded her porch, its bark rough and deeply furrowed, the color of aged leather.

"Brown is strength," she whispered to herself. "It is resilience. It is the earth beneath our feet, the foundation of all life."

She remembered a time, long ago, when brown was considered dull, insignificant. People craved the brilliance of red, the vibrancy of green, the ethereal glow of blue. But brown, they said, was boring, ordinary.

The old woman scoffed. "Boring?" she muttered. "Brown is the color of comfort, of warmth. It is the color of home."

She closed her eyes, and in her mind's eye, she saw a tapestry woven with threads of brown: the deep, rich brown of chocolate, the warm, golden brown of honey, the earthy brown of freshly baked bread. It was a tapestry of life, a celebration of the ordinary, the everyday miracles that often went unnoticed.

Suddenly, she heard a commotion. The children had stopped their game. They were gathered around something, their faces a mixture of awe and wonder. Curiosity piqued, the old woman rose from her swing and walked towards them.

There, nestled amongst the wildflowers, was a butterfly. Its wings, a breathtaking spectacle, shimmered with iridescent hues of brown, from the deepest chocolate to the palest, most delicate fawn.

The children gasped. "Look!" the girl exclaimed, her eyes wide with amazement. "It's the most beautiful butterfly I've ever seen!"

The boy nodded in agreement. "It's like magic!"

The old woman smiled. Perhaps, she thought, the children were beginning to understand. Brown was not just a color; it was a symphony, a masterpiece. It was a reminder that beauty could be found in the unexpected, in the ordinary, in the things we often overlook.

Old Woman: "Brown is the color of the earth, my dear. It nourishes us, sustains us."

Child: "But Grandma, it's just brown. It's boring."

Old Woman: "Boring? Look at the rich soil in your garden. It gives life to the most vibrant flowers, doesn't it?"

Artist: "I can't paint this landscape. The colors are so… mundane. Just shades of brown and green."

Critic: "Mundane? Look closer. See the way the light plays on the brown of the tree bark, creating a thousand subtle variations. It's a masterpiece in itself."

Mother: "Why did you choose brown for your room, darling? Don't you want something brighter?"

Child: "But Mommy, brown makes me feel safe and cozy. It's like a warm hug."

Baker: "This bread is perfect. The crust is a beautiful golden brown."

Customer: "It looks delicious. The color alone makes me want to take a bite."

Scientist: "The fossil is remarkably well-preserved. Notice the intricate patterns in the brown of the bone."

Student: "It's incredible! It's like a window into the past."

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About the Creator

Moharif Yulianto

a freelance writer and thesis preparation in his country, youtube content creator, facebook

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  • Joe Patterson12 months ago

    Very well written.

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