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Betrayed In A New World: Jack's Revenge

Part 1

By S KPublished 3 years ago 6 min read

Once upon a time, there was a young man named Jack who was transported to another world. He came into a world of superpowers with heroes and villains. He had no idea what kind of life awaited him there. As he wandered around, he met some friendly people who wanted to show him their world. They became fast friends, and Jack was amazed by the incredible superpowers that everyone possessed.

Jack soon learned that this new world was not as safe as it seemed. A dangerous organization known as The Order was trying to take over the entire planet. To help stop them, Jack decided to become a hero himself. So he joined the hero's academy with his new friends so he could become one. he started to train with classmates and started getting stronger.

One day, Jack discovered that he too had a superpower, but he didn't know what it was. He was excited to explore his newfound abilities, but his friends had other plans. He himself didn't know what his powers were but his new friends could smell the darkness from him. They knew right away that he wasn't like the others.

As they continued their training, Jack learned about The Order's plan to take over the entire world and destroy all its inhabitants in one fell swoop. His friends explained how they would use his special power against them, so together they joined forces to fight back.

The Order gathered an army of supervillains to help them achieve their evil goals. But these villains had a secret weapon; a machine called The Disrupter that could cause chaos wherever it went. If The Order used it against the heroes, the world might be destroyed forever.

Jack teamed up with his friends to defeat the enemies and protect the world. Together they stopped The Order and defeated the villainous leader.

thats how you would think the story went. but here is a little twist.

one night, Jack woke up in his bed in his room on campus. It was dark outside and Jack couldn't see anything. He thought he was dreaming. He felt something strange inside his head, and suddenly everything turned black.

this was the night before they would go after the order with all the heroes and students, the plan was made up but it was different from what jack thought it was. everything turned black and a pretty women voice starts talking: '' you dont know who i am but thats not needed. im here to tell you that tomorrow is not gonna be the day you hoped it was gonna be. tomorrow everyone will betray you and they will give you to the order to remain peace. there is something you dont know yet about yourself wich i cant tell you either. there is a dark hidden power inside of you and everyone is scared of it but you. im telling you this because i dont want you to die Jack i hope because of this message you will remain alive and well'' the darkness was gone.

and now its your turn to decide if you should believe her or not.

you wake up again in your bed on campus. you are alone. the only thing you can hear is the sound of the fan.

the next morning, a group of heroes comes in the dorms. everyone looks at you and asks how you feel. you say you feel fine.

they ask you a few questions but you look away and refuse to answer. they try to get you to talk but you keep ignoring them.

when they leave, the silence remains for a minute until it gets broken by someone else.

"hey jack! do you know where we have to go?"

you start looking at the person who spoke and realize it was your friend jeremy. you notice hes acting weird and he keeps staring at you.

he says "i just got to class and youre already late!"

you reply: "oh sorry about that, i didnt really sleep well last night."

he seems confused and looks around.

"what about the rest of us? did you guys end up sleeping alright?"

you shake your head and tell him that you had trouble falling asleep. he asks you why and you tell him that you cant help it sometimes.

he agrees and tells you that he also has problems sleeping.

starts walking to class alone and leaves you behind.

as you walk along, you see jeremy and a girl sitting together. she seems familiar. he introduces you to her.

"this is my girlfriend kate, and this is jack"

she smiles at you but you stay silent, and she sits down.

kate looks at you. "so Jack, i heard what happened yesterday, i'm so sorry that you had to go through that. but i know that all the students who saw it are talking about it, it must have been scary"

you nod and tell her that you're not really sure what she means

but then she continues to speak. "it's ok, no one blames you, you don't have to worry about that"

you look at her closely, wondering what she could mean.

she moves closer to you and whispers: "theres something that you dont know yet about yourself wich i cant tell you either. there is a dark hidden power inside of you and everyone is scared of it but you. im telling you this because i dont want you to die Jack i hope because of this message you will remain alive and well".

there is a dark hidden power inside of you and everyone is scared of it but you.

im telling you this because i dont want you to die Jack i hope because of this message you will remain alive and well''.

you dont understand what she said.

as you walk down the hallways, you hear all kinds of rumors about what happened yesterday.

everyone talks about what they saw. you don't really care about any of them.

you see jeremy and kate standing outside the classroom.

jeremy is being nice to her, saying things like ''i know youre tired but can you come with me? please?''

she nods and follows him.

he opens the door for her and leads her inside.

you watch them go in, feeling a little jealous.

you go to class and sit down.

the class goes on and school day is over. jack is thinking by himself what did kate just tell me? its bouncing in my head all day.

when jack got home, he found out what everyone was talking about yesterday. he went to the bathroom to wash his face because he was so nervous.

after he washed his face, he looked at himself in the mirror.

something wasnt right. he tried to move his hand but it was stuck, it didnt budge. he tried to scream but nothing came out. he couldnt even move his eyes. when he tried to open his mouth, he noticed something was covering it.

everything was black.

he tried to move his hands but he couldnt.

he tried to cry but nothing came out.

he looked at his body and saw that his clothes were torn.

he was naked.

he saw a woman's face.

she smiled at him and said: "you dont know who i am but thats not needed. im here to tell you that tomorrow is not gonna be the day you hoped it was gonna be. tomorrow everyone will betray you and they will give you to the order to remain peace. there is something you dont know yet about yourself wich i cant tell you either. there is a dark hidden power inside of you and everyone is scared of it but you. im telling you this because i dont want you to die Jack i hope because of this message you will remain alive and well".

jack tried to run but he couldnt.

he tried to scream but he coudnt.

he tried to call for help but his throat was dry.

he struggled to breathe.

he couldnt move.

he felt pain.

he felt like he was dying.

his heart was beating fast.

> You sigh "...... today is the day everyone will betray me......" and trail off.

You look at yourself in the mirror and see that your skin has changed color.

Your hair is silver and your eyes are red.

A deep red cloak falls around your shoulders.

The woman's face is still visible in the mirror.

She says "I know that all the students who saw it are talking about it, it must have been scary"

You nod and whisper "yes... yes, very much so..."

The woman says "It's ok, no one blames you, you don't have to worry about that—"

> You interrupt and say "Who are you? for some reason you are the only comfortable person right now."

will be continued......

Mystery

About the Creator

S K

i am a 20 year old man who loves to watch stories and create stories. I dont have much to say just read!

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