Fiction logo

Beneath the Surface of Love

When love turns into a curse, is true love still worth the cost?

By Sazia Afreen SumiPublished about a year ago 5 min read
 Beneath the Surface of Love
Photo by Shaira Dela Peña on Unsplash

It all began with a smile. The kind that could make your heart race and leave you momentarily breathless. Amber had that smile. It was the sort that pulled people in, made them forget their surroundings, and left them wanting more. She was the type of woman who could illuminate a room with just a glance, someone you’d never forget after meeting.

I first encountered her on a rainy evening, at a gathering hosted by a mutual friend. Little did I know that a simple chat would evolve into a whirlwind romance, a profound bond that would change my life forever. We spent hours talking about everything and nothing at all. She opened up about her childhood, aspirations, and fears—things she had never revealed to anyone else.

Yet, beneath her laughter, there was a hint of darkness—something that occasionally made me uneasy, as if a shadow lingered close by, regardless of the brightness around her. I brushed it off, convincing myself it was merely my imagination. After all, we were in love—or so I believed.

Chapter 2: The Cracks in the Facade

As the days turned into weeks, our relationship flourished. We were inseparable. Amber seemed to be everything I had ever wanted. But gradually, like the tide creeping up the shore, things began to shift. It started with small issues—an argument here, a cold shoulder there—but over time, they escalated.

She started to pull away. Her eyes, once warm and inviting, began to appear cold, almost empty. She would go out with friends and come home late, her excuses becoming more far-fetched with each passing day. But what truly unsettled me were the whispers—those eerie sounds she left behind when she was gone.

At night, after she fell asleep, I would hear footsteps in the hallway. Soft, deliberate, as if someone—or something—was watching me. Initially, I dismissed it as stress. But the whispers grew louder, and I started to doubt my sanity. Had I become paranoid? Was I just imagining things?

Chapter 3: The Shadow of Ignorance

One restless night, I decided to follow Amber when she slipped out of the house. My heart raced as I trailed her through the dimly lit streets. She led me to an old, abandoned house on the outskirts of town—a place that had been deserted for years. I held my breath as she knocked on the door, which creaked open slowly.

I crouched in the shadows, my gaze fixed on her as she stepped inside. I needed to uncover the truth.

Once inside, a man’s voice welcomed her. It wasn’t just any man—it was him. I had seen him before, lurking in the background, a mysterious figure whose presence always unsettled me. They spoke in low voices, their conversation thick with tension. I couldn’t catch the words, but it was evident that something was wrong—something dark, twisted, and dangerous.

The pieces began to fit together. Amber wasn’t just the woman I loved; she was concealing something—something sinister.

Chapter 4: The Descent Into Madness

The following day, Amber acted as if nothing had happened. But I could no longer keep up the facade. I confronted her, demanding the truth. She attempted to deny everything, but I could see the guilt etched in her eyes. Gradually, she began to break down.

She revealed a secret she had been hiding from me. She had been involved with the man I’d seen that night for months. Their connection ran deeper than mere attraction—something much darker, something that had started long before I came into her life.

But that wasn’t the worst part. The worst part was the truth she was terrified to acknowledge: she had made a deal. A deal with a force beyond human comprehension. A force that promised eternal love, but at a terrible price.

Amber had sold her soul.

The revelation struck me like a punch to the gut. I couldn’t wrap my head around what I was hearing. Was it possible? Could there be a love so intense that it could warp reality itself?

I pleaded with Amber to leave the man, to cut ties, to find a way out. But it was too late. She was tethered to him, ensnared by the darkness that now dictated her every action. No matter how deeply she loved me, no matter how much she cared, there was no escaping the fallout of her decision.

The following weeks were a haze of dread and powerlessness. Amber turned into a shadow of her former self, a mere puppet to the man she had sacrificed everything for. She would gaze at me with eyes brimming with tears, yet there was nothing behind them. She was lost, trapped in a realm I could never comprehend.

Yet, a part of her still lingered—her love. And that love, as distorted and shattered as it was, still reached out to me in my darkest moments.

Chapter 6: The Final Choice

One night, as I stood in the doorway of our apartment, Amber appeared before me. Her face was pale, her eyes hollow, yet she remained beautiful—hauntingly beautiful.

“I can’t escape him,” she whispered, her voice trembling. “But I can still love you. I can still hold on to that.”

Tears filled my eyes as I reached out to touch her face. “I’ll find a way. We’ll find a way out of this.”

But even as I said those words, I knew they rang hollow. There was no escaping this fate. Amber was lost to a love that could never be mine. And no matter how deeply I loved her, I could never break the curse that bound her.

At that moment, I grasped the truth: love—real, true love—wasn’t enough to conquer the darkness that had claimed her. It wasn’t enough to overcome the horrors that haunted us.

Epilogue: The Price of Ignorance

As I navigate through life now, years after Amber's disappearance, I often reflect on those times. The love I believed was flawless, the love I thought could overcome any obstacle. Yet, the reality is that nothing endures forever. Not love, not hate, not even life itself. Everything is transient, momentary, and ultimately beyond our grasp.

But one truth persists: the reality of Amber. The reality of the darkness that enveloped her.

So, if you find yourself reading this, take this lesson to heart: True love isn’t always what it appears to be. It doesn’t always suffice.

And sometimes, the things you remain unaware of can lead to your downfall.

FantasyHorrorMysteryLove

About the Creator

Sazia Afreen Sumi

I craft stories that delve into love's many facets—romantic, unrequited, and lasting—plus other intriguing themes. Discover tales that resonate!

Reader insights

Nice work

Very well written. Keep up the good work!

Add your insights

Comments (4)

Sign in to comment
  • Raushan Miraabout a year ago

    Good.

  • Margarita Faithabout a year ago

    Very good!

  • Soma Ahmedabout a year ago

    Nice.

  • Izzyabout a year ago

    Interesting

Find us on social media

Miscellaneous links

  • Explore
  • Contact
  • Privacy Policy
  • Terms of Use
  • Support

© 2026 Creatd, Inc. All Rights Reserved.