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Beneath the Olive Sky

Every Soul Hides a Secret, Every Sky Covers a Truth

By Zain Ul Abedin KhanPublished 7 months ago 7 min read

🖋 Genre: Contemporary Fiction / Mystery / Spiritual Drama

Setting: Jerusalem, Istanbul, Lahore

Main Themes: Faith, justice, family, destiny, divine timing, female strength

✨ Main Characters:

Mariam Alvi — A 25-year-old Pakistani linguist who moves to Jerusalem for a research project but discovers her family's buried history.

Yunus Halevi — A quiet, sharp-eyed Turkish-Palestinian journalist with scars of war and secrets of resistance.

Professor Layth — Mariam’s mentor, an expert in ancient scripts — and someone with deep connections to her past.

Amaan Alvi — Mariam’s estranged father, once a celebrated diplomat, now labeled a traitor.

📖 Chapter 1: The Girl Who Read the Sky

The sky over Jerusalem looked like a faded painting — soft blue, cracked gold, and layers of quiet sadness.

Mariam Alvi stood at the rooftop of her small apartment, her scarf gently brushing her shoulders in the breeze. It was her third morning in the Holy City. A city so ancient, it seemed to whisper stories in the wind.

In her hands was an old leather-bound journal — written in a language she hadn’t yet translated.

“If you want to know who you are,” her mother once said, “follow the unanswered prayers.”

She didn’t know then how much truth lived in that sentence.

Mariam had come to Jerusalem on a research grant — to study forgotten dialects of Aramaic and Arabic. But what she found here wasn’t just language.

It was silence.

The silence of tombs.

Of unsaid words between nations.

Of broken relationships between father and daughter.

Of a past no one wanted to admit.

That morning, she received an email.

No sender name. No subject. Just a single sentence:

“He didn’t betray the country. He betrayed something bigger.”

Attached: a photo of her father — standing in front of the Dome of the Rock — a younger version, eyes burning with something between hope and pain.

Her breath caught.

Her father had disappeared 15 years ago.

And now, a stranger in this city wanted her to find him.

Or perhaps, to find the truth about him.📖 Chapter 2: The Whisper in the Wall

The ancient alleyways of the Old City echoed with the sound of history — stone against sandals, prayers against stone, silence against secrets.

Mariam walked past the Western Wall, not as a tourist, but as a seeker. Her mind wasn’t focused on religion or politics today. It was on the strange message in her inbox and the photo of her father she hadn’t seen in over a decade.

She clutched the journal to her chest, heart thudding beneath her coat. The writing inside was fragmented, some in Ottoman Turkish, some in an archaic Arabic script. She didn’t fully understand it yet, but one phrase had repeated across pages:

“The sky knows what the earth tries to bury.”

She didn’t know what that meant… not yet.

As she turned a narrow corner near the Al-Aqsa compound, she saw a figure leaning against the old olive tree by the gate. He wore a black keffiyeh loosely draped around his neck and was scribbling something in a brown notebook.

He looked up — calm eyes, dark beard, worn jacket.

“Mariam Alvi?” he asked in a low voice.

She froze.

He gestured to her to come closer. “I won’t harm you. I’m Yunus Halevi. Journalist. Your father saved my life once. I owe him everything.”

Mariam’s eyes widened. “My father? Where is he?”

Yunus shook his head. “That’s the thing. He vanished. But not without leaving clues. And he wanted you to find them. Not the intelligence agencies. Not the politicians. You.”

He handed her an envelope. Yellowed, wax-sealed, smelling faintly of oud.

Inside was a single page — her father’s handwriting, unmistakable.

“Daughter, the story they told you was a lie. I never sold my faith. I only protected the truth. What I couldn’t do — you must. Follow the olive path. Trust the voice of the wall.”

“Your father, Amaan Alvi”

Mariam felt her legs weaken. She hadn’t cried in years — not even when people called her father a traitor. But this... this shattered her.

Yunus gently touched her arm. “There are others who know your father is alive. And they don’t want him found.”

“Why me?” she whispered.

Yunus stared into the distance. “Because you carry his eyes... and his burden.”

That night, Mariam lay awake, the journal open beside her. Outside, the moon poured silver over the Jerusalem rooftops. Somewhere beneath this city, in stone and shadow, lay the answer she’d waited for all her life.

And now, she would go after it — no matter what it cost her.📕 Chapter 3: The Language of Stone

Mariam stood in the crypt beneath the Church of the Holy Sepulchre, her eyes scanning the etchings on the ancient wall. Yunus had taken her here at sunrise, saying only, “This was your father’s favorite place. He believed the stones remembered what humans forgot.”

One symbol kept appearing: a star inside a crescent, but turned upside down.

“What is this?” she asked.

Yunus answered, “He used to say it was the mark of a hidden brotherhood… people who preserve truths when the world burns them.”

She touched the wall, feeling a faint pulse. “And they know where he is?”

“Maybe,” Yunus replied. “But if they find out we’re searching... we won’t be the only ones watching.”

📕 Chapter 4: Jibreel’s Letter

Back in her apartment, Mariam found something tucked in the binding of the journal — a thin piece of parchment, sealed in wax.

Breaking it, she found a letter in her father’s hand:

“If you're reading this, they haven’t won yet. Trust the man named Jibreel. He will come to you without a voice, but he will speak through signs. He carries the path.”

Three days later, in the souq, Mariam met a mute calligrapher. His name was — Jibreel.

He handed her a painted scroll, smiled, and vanished into the crowd.

On the scroll: A map of the Old City. At its heart — a date: 27th Rajab, the night of Isra wal Miraj.

It was two nights away.

📕 Chapter 5: Voices of the Night Journey

The 27th of Rajab arrived.

The night of spiritual ascension.

Mariam and Yunus followed the map to a hidden chamber beneath the Al-Aqsa compound, opened only once a year by mystics.

Inside: dozens of clay tablets, each etched with verses — Quranic, biblical, even Sanskrit.

But one stood out.

“Indeed, those who conceal what We sent down... they trade it for a small price.” — (Surah Al-Baqarah: 174)

Mariam stared.

Her father had circled this verse in red ink.

Yunus whispered, “He tried to reveal something. Something sacred. And someone wanted it buried.”

📕 Chapter 6: Amaan’s Trial

Suddenly, everything shifted.

Yunus disappeared.

Mariam was arrested at a checkpoint — accused of spying. Her journal was confiscated.

In a cold interrogation room, an agent leaned forward.

“We know who your father was. Amaan Alvi gave up state secrets. He betrayed Pakistan — and Palestine. You're continuing his work?”

She said nothing.

But her eyes burned with defiance.

When they released her 36 hours later, a stranger handed her a USB.

No words.

Just: “Your father’s trial — the real one — is on this.”

📕 Chapter 7: The Archive

The USB contained files never released to the public.

Videos of her father in court — defending not himself, but a document. A manuscript he found — predating all three Abrahamic faiths — pointing to a shared divine origin.

“They didn’t want unity,” he said in the footage. “They wanted division to control the masses.”

“So they erased the evidence. And me with it.”

Mariam watched in tears. This wasn’t a traitor. This was a man who’d sacrificed everything for truth.

Her truth.

Now, it was her mission.

📕 Chapter 8: The Tunnels Beneath Time

Jibreel returned.

This time, he handed her a key — ancient, rusted, shaped like a dove.

“Al-Quds Tunnels,” he wrote on her notebook.

With help from Yunus (who’d resurfaced, bruised but alive), they entered the tunnels under the Dome.

There, hidden in a sealed stone box, they found it: the Unity Manuscript. Written in ink that shimmered gold under candlelight. It blended phrases from the Torah, Bible, and Quran — almost word-for-word.

Yunus whispered, “This… this could rewrite history.”

Mariam clutched it to her heart. “Or restore it.”

📕 Chapter 9: The Betrayal

They weren’t alone.

A familiar face appeared — Professor Layth.

Mariam’s trusted mentor.

With armed men.

“You were never meant to find this,” he said coldly. “Your father was right. This knowledge threatens every institution that profits from division.”

He pointed a gun at Yunus.

Yunus stepped forward, shielding Mariam.

But Layth hesitated.

“You won’t shoot,” Mariam said calmly. “Because you fear what happens if the truth dies with us.”

In that moment, the call to prayer echoed from above.

Layth faltered.

Mariam and Yunus ran — escaping through the lower tunnel.

📕 Chapter 10: The Sky Opens

They surfaced at dawn, in a forgotten garden of olive trees behind the Al-Aqsa mosque.

Mariam raised her eyes to the sky.

For the first time, it didn’t feel heavy. It felt open. Expansive.

They still had the manuscript.

They still had faith.

And the world needed both.

Yunus looked at her. “What will you do now?”

Mariam smiled softly. “Tell the truth. With or without anyone’s permission.”

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Zain Ul Abedin Khan

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