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Beneath the Breath

mystery of breath

By Keyur PorechaPublished 2 years ago 3 min read

[The scene opens to a dimly lit room, with flickering candles casting eerie shadows on the walls. Two characters, EMILY, a young woman with a sense of curiosity, and JAMES, an enigmatic figure with a mysterious aura, sit facing each other. There's an air of tension between them as they begin their conversation.]

EMILY: [Glancing around the room nervously] So, James, what exactly are we doing here?

JAMES: [Smirking faintly] We're here to explore the depths of the unknown, Emily. To delve into the secrets that lie beneath the surface of our reality.

EMILY: [Intrigued but apprehensive] And how do you propose we do that?

JAMES: [Leaning in closer, his eyes gleaming with anticipation] We listen, Emily. We listen to the whispers of the unseen, the voices that echo in the silence between breaths.

[Emily shivers slightly, feeling a chill run down her spine. She hesitates before speaking again.]

EMILY: [Voice barely above a whisper] Whispers? What whispers?

JAMES: [His expression darkening] The whispers of those who came before us, Emily. The ones who walked this earth long before our time. They have stories to tell, secrets to reveal.

[Emily's curiosity battles with her fear as she considers James's words. She takes a deep breath, steeling herself for what lies ahead.]

EMILY: [Resolutely] Alright, James. I'm in. But where do we begin?

JAMES: [A slow smile spreads across his face] We begin by quieting our minds, by opening ourselves to the unknown. Close your eyes, Emily, and listen. Listen to the silence, and you'll hear them.

[Emily closes her eyes tentatively, her senses heightened as she tries to focus on the sound of her own breathing. James watches her intently, a sense of anticipation building in the air.]

[Silence envelops the room, broken only by the faint rustle of fabric as Emily shifts in her seat. Minutes pass, and just as Emily begins to feel a sense of unease, she hears it—a faint whisper, like the echo of a distant memory.]

EMILY: [Eyes still closed, voice barely a whisper] James, do you hear that?

JAMES: [His own eyes closed, a serene expression on his face] Yes, Emily. That's it. Listen closely.

[The whispers grow louder, swirling around Emily like a gentle breeze. She feels a strange sense of familiarity, as though she's tapping into something ancient and profound.]

EMILY: [Voice filled with wonder] It's like... like they're speaking to me, James. I can almost understand...

JAMES: [Eyes snapping open, a look of urgency in his gaze] What are they saying, Emily? Focus. Tell me what you hear.

[Emily concentrates, her brow furrowed in concentration. The whispers grow clearer, forming into distinct words and phrases that send a shiver down her spine.]

EMILY: [Voice trembling] They're talking about... about a place. A hidden place, beneath the earth. They speak of secrets buried deep within its depths.

JAMES: [Eyes gleaming with excitement] Yes, Emily. That's it. We're on the right track. But we must tread carefully. Not all secrets are meant to be uncovered.

[Emily nods, her heart pounding in her chest as she realizes the magnitude of what they've stumbled upon. She opens her eyes, meeting James's gaze with newfound determination.]

EMILY: [Voice steady] I'm ready, James. Ready to uncover the truth, no matter where it leads us.

JAMES: [A flicker of pride in his eyes] That's my girl. Come, Emily. There's much work to be done.

[They rise from their seats, their minds ablaze with possibility as they prepare to embark on their journey into the unknown. The whispers continue to echo in the air, guiding them towards their destiny.]

[The scene fades to black, leaving the audience with a sense of anticipation for what lies ahead in the depths of the earth, beneath the breath of the ancient whispers.]

Mystery

About the Creator

Keyur Porecha

A deep thinker, analyser, researcher who loves to explore the unknown facts and insides of a topic. Love creating short stories which may be a good tool to love reading for the active readers who like stories and get inspired as well.

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