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"Beauty’s Secret"

"From Beast to Beauty: A Story of Transformation"

By Muhammad AzeemullahPublished 8 months ago 6 min read

The Beast’s Heart

Chapter One: The Curse of the Heartless

In the heart of the kingdom of Rosethorn, there was a great palace that stood atop a hill, towering over the small village below. The palace was known for its grand halls, its towering spires, and its beautiful gardens. But none of these splendorous features mattered when compared to the dark legend that surrounded it. The castle had been abandoned for many years, and the villagers whispered that it was cursed.

Long ago, the lord of the palace, a nobleman named Lord Aldric, was known throughout the land for his beauty, his strength, and his pride. He was loved by all for his generosity, but there was one flaw in his heart: a deep arrogance that made him believe he was untouchable. He was so self-absorbed that he cared for no one, not even his own people. He believed he was destined for greatness, and no one, not even a humble villager, could stand in his way.

One cold winter night, a mysterious woman, draped in tattered robes, appeared at his gates. She asked for shelter, her voice soft but strong, her eyes filled with secrets. Lord Aldric, too proud to show compassion, turned her away with cruel words. But the woman wasn’t deterred. She returned to the palace that evening, this time with a gift: a single, enchanted rose.

“If you take this rose and learn the true meaning of love, you will never know sorrow again,” she told him. But Lord Aldric, dismissing her words, mocked her gift and told her to leave.

The woman’s eyes darkened. “You will regret this. I curse you, Lord Aldric. For your pride and arrogance, you will become a beast—your heart as cold and cruel as the one you have shown tonight. Only love, pure and true, will break the curse.”

As the curse took hold, Lord Aldric’s body transformed into that of a terrifying beast, his once-handsome face now twisted with fangs and fur. His eyes, however, retained the same piercing gaze, and his heart, though hardened, still beat with the faintest hope that one day someone might break the curse. But until then, he was doomed to live alone in the dark, cursed palace, watching as his once-beautiful home fell into ruin.

Chapter Two: The Maiden of the Rose

In the village below the castle, there lived a kind and gentle woman named Beatrice. Beatrice had always been drawn to the mysterious palace on the hill, despite the rumors that it was haunted. She was a healer, known for her ability to mend broken bones, soothe fevers, and bring peace to the souls of the weary. Her beauty was not of the physical sort—though her eyes shone with warmth and kindness, it was her heart that made her stand apart.

One evening, as she wandered near the edge of the forest, she spotted a single rose blooming in the snow. It was no ordinary rose. The petals were silver, and its fragrance was unlike any flower she had ever smelled. Drawn to it, Beatrice gently plucked the rose and marveled at its beauty.

But as she held it, she heard a voice, low and rumbling, echo from the depths of the forest. “Who dares to take what is mine?”

Startled, Beatrice turned to see a massive shadow looming behind her. A great beast, with fur as dark as night and eyes that glowed with a faint, eerie light, emerged from the trees. His face was twisted with anger, and his growl made her heart race with fear.

But Beatrice, unlike others, did not run. She stepped forward, her heart not filled with fear but with curiosity. “I meant no harm,” she said gently, holding out the rose. “I found this beautiful flower in the snow. I did not know it belonged to anyone.”

The beast’s eyes narrowed. “You’ve taken something that has been left to wither for years,” he growled. “It is mine, and you must return it.”

Beatrice, recognizing the sorrow in his voice, felt an unexpected compassion. “I didn’t mean to steal it from you. It’s just so beautiful, and it seemed like it needed to be noticed.”

The beast’s expression softened for a brief moment, and he stepped closer. “I was once the lord of the castle,” he murmured. “I was cursed long ago for my arrogance. The rose, the last gift I received, is a symbol of my curse. You must return it to the castle if you want to break the spell.”

Beatrice, realizing the depth of his words, nodded. “I will return it, if it helps you.”

Chapter Three: The Beast’s Heart

The journey to the castle was long and fraught with challenges. Beatrice’s courage was tested as she passed through forests filled with shadows and crossed streams that whispered of forgotten things. Yet, each time she felt fear creeping in, she thought of the beast—his loneliness, his curse—and her determination grew stronger.

Finally, after days of travel, Beatrice arrived at the castle gates. The once-grand entrance was now shrouded in ivy, its massive doors hanging loosely on their hinges. The inside of the palace was dark, the air thick with the scent of age and dust. She made her way through the halls, the sound of her footsteps echoing in the silence.

At the heart of the palace, she found the beast sitting alone by a dying fire, his massive form hunched over in desolation. Beatrice approached him slowly, holding the silver rose in her hands. “I’ve come to return what I took,” she said softly.

The beast turned his head, his eyes wide with both surprise and something deeper—an emotion he had long forgotten. He reached out with trembling hands to take the rose, but as he did, their fingers brushed. The touch, so simple yet so meaningful, sent a spark through both of them.

“I don’t deserve your kindness,” the beast said, his voice shaking with a mix of sorrow and longing. “I was once a man, but my heart was too cold. I thought I was above love, and this is the price I paid.”

Beatrice, her heart aching for him, knelt beside him. “I don’t think you are beyond redemption. We all have flaws, but it is in the breaking of our hearts that we find healing.”

For the first time, the beast felt the warmth of her words reach the core of his being. Slowly, he allowed himself to feel something he had long denied: hope.

Chapter Four: The Breaking of the Curse

Days passed, and Beatrice remained in the palace, caring for the beast. She spoke to him of her life, of the villagers, and of the simple joys she had known. In return, the beast shared his memories, of his life as Lord Aldric and the mistakes that had led to his curse.

As their bond grew, the curse that had bound Lord Aldric’s heart began to lift. The dark, twisted form of the beast began to soften, and for the first time in years, Aldric’s human form began to show through the fur and claws.

One evening, as they stood together by the now-glowing rose, Aldric’s transformation was complete. He was no longer a beast, but a man, his heart restored by the love Beatrice had shown him.

The curse was broken, and with it, the palace was revived. The once-dying gardens bloomed anew, the halls filled with light, and the kingdom of Rosethorn flourished once more.

Beatrice and Aldric, now free from the shadow of the curse, ruled the kingdom together, their love a beacon to all who believed in the power of compassion and redemption.

Epilogue: A Love that Endures

Years passed, but the story of Beatrice and Aldric lived on. The tale of the beast who was redeemed by love became a legend in Rosethorn, and the silver rose, still blooming in the castle’s garden, remained a symbol of the power of love to heal even the deepest wounds.

And in the quiet of the palace, Beatrice would sometimes smile as she walked through the halls, remembering the man who had once been a beast, and how love had saved them both

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Muhammad Azeemullah

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