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Ayodele And The Enchanted Forest

The Enchanted Forest.

By TellerPublished about a year ago 4 min read
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INT. VILLAGE CENTER - NIGHT

The village sits quiet in the dark. Around the central fire, the ELDERS converse in hushed, grave tones.

ELDER OKOWE

The signs have not been good this past moon. Our crops grow weak, cattle sicken.

ELDER ADENIKE

And the forest spirits offer no counsel. Their voices are muted.

ELDER CHUKWU

It has been too long since one with the sight has walked those haunted paths. We must send one to unearth what darkness veils their sight.

The elders fall silent as a petite form approaches - AYODELE, just 12 seasons old but with eyes that seem to see far.

AYODELE

Grandmother says the spirits favor me. I will go at first light and seek their guidance.

Okowe considers, then nods solemnly. Hope kindles in the circle's eyes once more.

ELDER OKOWE

May the ancestors light your footsteps, child. Go now and rest - you'll need your strength for the morrow.

Ayodele bows and heads to her hut to prepare. The elders' concern follows her into the night.

EXT. VILLAGE - DAWN

The first rays of sun gild the grassy plains. Ayodele rolls from her mat, eats quickly, then packs provisions - dried meat and fruits, a gourd of water. Her beloved GRANDMOTHER waits outside.

GRANDMOTHER

The forest will protect its own, Ayodele. Trust your gift, and let it light your way even in darkness. Now go - we pray for your safe return.

Ayodele embraces her fiercely, then sets off down the well-trod path. As she nears the border, strange noises drift from the unseen depths - hoots and caws and a cacophony of unseen voices whispering secrets just out of earshot. She hesitates...



A CRASH behind her! Ayodele WHIRLS to find a massive panther staring down at her, lips curled in a snarl. But something in its luminous green eyes gives her pause - not menace, but protection. It bows its head as if in greeting, then turns and pads silently into the forest. With a steadying breath, Ayodele follows.

The trees ENCLOSE her, stealing the sunlight. Spanish moss DRAPS like banners from gnarled limbs overhead. Every tiny sound makes Ayodele jump - the tap of an woodpecker, the SCRABBLE of squirrels in the leaves. She walks for what feels like hours, starting at every shadow, until exhausted, she leans against an ancient baobab to rest. That’s when she notices the CARVINGS...

Continues with Ayodele interacting with forest inhabitants like a circle of dancing spirits, solving riddles left by a trickster bird, following carvings on trees that reveal the forest's history. She crosses a canyon by charming a vine snake, and camps with the help of friendly forest dwarves. Deeper in, she begins having flashes of visions - a dark shadow clouding the spirits, sickness spreading through the land. Finally Ayodele arrives at a clearing where the Forest Goddess, OYA, appears magnificently from a rushing waterfall. Oya presents Ayodele's final test - to find the Heart Tree unassisted by dusk and receive the message meant for her village. If she succeeds, the spirits' voices will return and their troubles will lift. But night falls swiftly in this haunted wood.

INT. FOREST CLEARING - DUSK

The light begins to fade as Ayodele searches frantically. She tries listening for a sign but hears only the deepening CHORUS of the forest coming alive in the dark. Fear creeps back in as shadows seem to TWIST and LURCH around her.

She stops, fighting tears, when a faint GOLDEN GLOW catches her eye between two massive tree trunks. Slowly, she picks her way toward it, pushingaside vines.

There, atop a small rise, stands the HEART TREE in all its glory - branches hung with golden fruits and rich green leaves that GLOW LIKE STARS in the gathering dusk.

Relief and awe flood Ayodele as she approaches the sacred place. But before she can rest, a sound like RUSTLING SILK makes her WHIRL.

Through the flickering leaves emerges the shimmering form of OYA once more, eyes gleaming with pride.

OYA

You have persevered well, little one. Now come - it is time for your reward, and your village's salvation.

Ayodele joins Oya at the tree's gnarled roots. Ghostly faces seem to peer from its bark, and winds sigh secrets through its boughs. Oya places a hand on the trembling girl's brow.

Visions ASSAULT Ayodele - the dark shadow is revealed as a great serpent poisoning the earth. But a blue-robed figure emerges to battle it, and cleanses the land. Green spreads once more as joyful souls return to the forest in thanks.

Oya removes her hand with a satisfied smile.

OYA

Now you understand. Return to your village with hope. The shadow has passed, and brighter days will soon dawn for all.

Dawn light spreads rosy fingers through the trees as Ayodele hikes home, heart full to bursting with what she has seen.

EXT. VILLAGE - DAWN

As the first rays peek over the plain, cries of relief and joy ERUPT from the village center. Ayodele has returned, spirit aglow with new purpose and wisdom.

She recounts all that transpired in the haunted forest. The elders beam and embrace her, then send messengers out across the land with the restorative news.

As Ayodele looks out on her cheering village, Grandmother by her side, the first birdsong of a new day RISES above the trees that will always be her home and guardians. Her gift has awoken, and new adventures surely await this brave soul in the enchanted wood.

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Ever wondered about African folktales? Dive into a world of enchanting characters, captivating stories, and timeless wisdom. African folklore is more than entertainment - it's a journey through diverse landscapes, mythical creatures.

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