Amelia's 'gift'
A Story Every Day in 2024 August 30th 243/366 and and an entry for the Epic Beginnings challenge
"Oh my God! Laney's on fire!"
These were the words that marked the appearance of Amelia's superpower where the adage "If looks could kill" amazingly came true.
Fortunately for Amelia but rather too late for Laney, (who had been foolish enough to comment on Amelia's choice of hair dye and the dubious notion that it would make Amelia look 'cool', an opinion Laney did not endorse) nobody knew the origin of Laney's spontaneous combustion except the human match who lit it.
For Amelia, it was a crash course in learning to control your emotions. Or not, as the situation required it.
The fact that in the moment that Laney began to burn, Amelia had been staring at her with the warmth of embarrassment and anger smouldering in her eyes goes someway to showing how her superpower worked. Glaring at Laney, Laney unaware, with the full power of her emotion behind her, Amelia's eyes decided to channel the enmity that was pressing against them and in a quirk of nature not yet analysed, transformed it into invisible death rays.
Amelia wore sunglasses on days where she was feeling particularly dark and avoided eye contact with people who had irked her in some way. This led to her becoming viewed as a shy, recalcitrant individual who was a bit of a loner, which she wasn't. Before her 'gift' had been discovered, she had been quite the socialite, but until she could get things under control, she was reluctant to mix.
She tried to conjure the image of Laney's funeral as seen that day; this worked for a time, but with hormones raging and the constant pressure of high school, she opted to go to Anger Management classes.
It was some years before Amelia's "withering glare" became a diminishing force for good.
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Comments (10)
This felt like a very classically written origin story!! Loved the narrative voice and "natural" feeling of this story Rachel!! Laney could have been a really look X-men or something!!
Omgggg, I want that power soooo badly! Hehehheheehhehe
Love this!🤩 especially: “ These were the words that marked the appearance of Amelia's superpower where the adage "If looks could kill" amazingly came true.”
Really like this, Rachel!! Very cinematic and character driven! The last paragraph was a brilliant close!
My former mother-in-law had a withering stare much like the one you've described herein....Ha! Creative piece of micro fiction.
“Withering” has always been one of my absolute favorite words to describe a stare. Awesome work!
Shades of Stephen King's Carry in this one. If looks could kill and all that stuff. Great entry!
This is great. Don't piss off Amelia.
This is so damn clever, Rachel! I loved it!
Sheesh! What a “Withering glare”!!.. I use to have a death stare, now I just have dead eyes 👀. 😳🤪