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Affinity Man

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By Tony MartelloPublished about a year ago Updated 5 months ago 6 min read
Honorable Mention in The Shape of the Thing Challenge
Affinity Man
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Act I – The Struggle

Theo adjusted his thick glasses and tried to keep up as chalk screeched across the board. The lecture hall was a sterile box of fluorescent light and endless note-scribbling. Professor Lascola’s voice cut through the air like a scalpel.

“Neuroscience,” the professor declared, “is not mysticism, not metaphor. It is circuitry. Firing patterns. Data. Anything else is indulgence—and indulgence does not pass exams.”

Theo sat stiffly, heart hammering. He understood the diagrams, the neurotransmitter cascades, the sodium-potassium pumps. But the multiple-choice tests? The standardized rubrics? His mind turned to static the moment the paper landed on his desk. He could grasp the living pulse of neurons in his imagination, but he could not memorize the phrases the way the system demanded.

Behind him, Craig leaned back in his chair, grinning. Craig breezed through everything—the exams, the labs, even Lascola’s disdain. “It’s just a game, man,” Craig said after class, waving another perfect score in Theo’s face. “Don’t think too much. They’re not testing if you understand. They’re testing if you can beat the questions.”

Theo forced a smile, but inside he withered. Not thinking too much—that’s the problem.

That afternoon, Theo slouched into the office of Dr. Ramirez. The therapist’s space was unlike the sterile labs across campus. Bookshelves bent under the weight of worn journals, and a prism on the desk scattered soft rainbows against the walls.

“You’re drowning in the rigidity,” Ramirez said, leaning forward. His voice was steady, calm, the kind that made the nervous system obey. “You’re trying to succeed in a system built for Craigs. But Theo, that’s not your way.”

Theo rubbed his eyes. “If I can’t pass the tests, I don’t move on. No research. No career. Just failure.”

Ramirez regarded him kindly. “Close your eyes. Let’s try something.”

Theo hesitated, then complied.

“Picture a color. Don’t name it, don’t analyze it—just see it. Breathe it in. Let it flow through you like tidewater, through your nerves, your bones.”

Theo inhaled. He saw deep blue, liquid and endless. With each breath, it filled his chest, cooled his temples, steadied his shaking hands.

When he opened his eyes, his body felt light, as if someone had untied a knot inside him.

“That’s color energy healing,” Ramirez said with a faint smile. “It’s not data points. It’s resonance. Every mind has a palette. Yours is blue. Stay with it.”

Theo wanted to believe. But he pictured Lascola’s scowl, the sneer he reserved for anything “soft.” Stick to the data, the professor’s voice echoed. Poetry does not pass exams.

The next day, Theo carried the blue with him into class. He inhaled, exhaled, tapped his pencil to the rhythm of his breath. For a moment, the lecture hall sharpened, neurons glowing on the board like constellations.

“Mr. Theo!” Lascola snapped. “Explain the difference between afferent and efferent neurons.”

Theo’s breath caught. His mind blanked. His lips moved, but no sound came.

Laughter rippled through the hall.

Lascola shook his head. “This is what happens when one indulges in feelings instead of facts. Next.”

Theo slumped in his seat, heat crawling up his neck. The blue inside him flickered and nearly went dark.

That evening, storm clouds gathered over San Luis Obispo. The air smelled of salt and ozone. Theo, desperate to escape the shame, walked to the Rec Center pool. He changed into boardshorts and stood at the edge, staring up at the swollen sky.

“If only my brain worked like Craig’s,” he muttered. “If only I could pass.”

The first raindrops dimpled the pool. The lifeguard whistled from her chair, uneasy. But Theo dove in anyway, sinking into the cool silence. Water closed over him like a shroud. For a moment, all he saw was shimmering blue.

Then the lightning cracked.

Act II – The Transformation

The bolt struck the pool.

Heat seared his body. His vision flared white. Every neuron lit up like fireworks. He screamed into the water, but it stole the sound. For a heartbeat, he saw himself from the inside—brainwaves blooming into fractals of color: green, gold, violet. Not circuits. Not data. A living aurora.

Then, blackness.

When he surfaced, someone was hauling him out. Coughing, choking, he felt hands pounding on his chest.

“Stay with me!”

It was the lifeguard, a young woman with storm-wet hair clinging to her cheeks. She rolled him to his side, pressed down, squeezed water from his lungs.

“You’re my first save,” she whispered, wide-eyed. “Can you breathe?”

Theo sucked in air—hot, electric, alive. Steam curled from his skin. His hair had turned streaked silver.

The lifeguard froze, clutching her knee. Her face shifted from pain to shock. “My knee… the pain’s gone.”

Theo stared at his hand. What did I just do?

That night, he lay in bed, throat scorched. Words would not come. When he tried to speak, only a vibration escaped—a hum that shimmered in the air like invisible light.

Craig barged in, tossing his backpack down. “Dude, you seriously got fried by lightning? You okay?”

Theo opened his mouth. The hum spilled out, soft waves rippling through the room. Craig’s eyes widened.

“What the hell was that?!” Craig pressed a hand to his chest. “I feel… calm. Like, actually calm. I haven’t felt this since—ever.”

Theo sat stunned. Whatever happened in the pool, it had rewired him

Days passed. Word spread. Rory borrowed Theo’s pen in class and later admitted her test anxiety vanished. She wrote the best essay of her life. A girl with migraines touched his shoulder and swore the pain dissolved. Students began to gather around him—cafeteria, library, even the quad.

Dr. Ramirez studied him quietly. “The lightning unlocked what we trained for. You’re not practicing color energy healing anymore. You are it. Affinity. Affinity Neuroscience.”

Theo wanted to believe. But Lascola’s shadow loomed. From his office window, the professor watched the crowds, jaw tight.

“This is not science,” he muttered. “This is fraud.”

Act III – The Clash

Theo sat on the grass under a pale sun, sketching color waves instead of neuron charts. Around him, students whispered, hoping for a touch, a hum, a cure.

Then she returned—Maya, the lifeguard. She handed him a smoothie, half-smile tugging at her lips.

“Figured you needed electrolytes,” she said.

Theo gave her a grateful nod. Words still wouldn’t come.

She plopped down beside him. “So, you get zapped by lightning, wake up with silver hair, and now everyone wants you to touch their forehead. That’s a solid superhero origin story.”

Theo hummed softly, embarrassed. The sound made her drink ripple.

Her eyes widened. Then she burst out laughing. “You just made my smoothie dance! That’s hilarious.”

Theo buried his face in his hands, mortified. But Maya leaned closer. “Relax, Silver Hair. I like weird.”

Her smile softened. “When you hugged me that day at the pool, something filled this hollow part of me I didn’t even know was there. Since then, I feel lighter. Not just healed—seen.”

Theo blinked, stunned.

Maya nudged him. “Don’t think you’re getting out of taking me surfing. You owe me.”

For the first time since the strike, Theo felt something close to joy. The grass around them bent in a faint wave, as if even the earth chuckled.

The next day, an email arrived.

“Mr. Theo, you will defend your so-called Affinity claims in tomorrow’s symposium. Failure to comply will result in expulsion. – Professor Lascola.”

The lecture hall buzzed. Students filled the seats, professors lined the walls. Lascola stood at the front, chalk in hand, voice sharp.

“Today we put an end to this spectacle. Evidence, or exile.”

Theo stood silent. Maya caught his eye and smiled. Craig shifted nervously in the front row.

Lascola sneered. “Heal something real. No parlor tricks.”

Craig raised a shaky hand. “I’ll do it. Before every test I can’t breathe right—like I’m suffocating.”

Theo placed his hand on Craig’s shoulder. The room hushed. He closed his eyes. The hum rose—soft, then blooming, colors shimmering just out of sight. Craig inhaled sharply. His shoulders dropped. His breathing steadied.

Craig looked up, tears in his eyes. “For the first time, I’m not afraid.”

Murmurs rippled.

Lascola lunged forward, attaching electrodes, scanning brainwaves. The monitor flickered. Coherence. Synchronization across both hemispheres. Impossible.

“This… this isn’t real,” Lascola whispered.

Theo looked at him, humming softly. The professor’s chest loosened against his will. Calm seeped in. For the first time in decades, Lascola had no words.

Epilogue – Affinity Man

That night, Theo and Maya sat on the cliffs above the Pacific. The ocean hummed in rhythm with his breath. His silver hair glowed faintly in the moonlight.

“You don’t have to save the world,” Maya said, leaning against him. “Just keep doing what you’re doing. That’s enough.”

Theo smiled—not with words, but presence. He didn’t need tests or approval. Affinity was bigger than academia. It was connection, healing, resonance.

Somewhere behind them, Craig’s laughter echoed, freer than ever. Even he had changed.

Theo closed his eyes, listening. The ocean and his hum became one.

He was no longer drowning. He was alive, attuned—finally seen.

Affinity Man had arrived.

Affinity Man

Short StoryFantasyMicrofictionMysterySci FiYoung Adult

About the Creator

Tony Martello

Tony Martello, author of The Seamount Stories, grew up surfing the waves of Hawaii and California—experiences that pulse through his vivid, ocean-inspired storytelling. Join him on exciting adventures that inspire, entertain, and enlighten.

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  • Tony Martello (Author)3 months ago

    Thank you! I appreciate it.

  • Wooohooooo congratulations on your honourable mention! 🎉💖🎊🎉💖🎊

  • I just revised this piece. Take a look. It is much more developed than the previous synopsis.

  • Jariatu Kallonabout a year ago

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  • Latasha karenabout a year ago

    Interesting piece

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