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A Wild Ride in Wyoming

It was Debbie's fault.

By Dana CrandellPublished 2 years ago Updated 2 years ago 1 min read
Polaroids don't lie...

It was a bright, cold morning and the weather report ensured that the short drive to work would be interesting. Overnight, high winds had pushed deep snow into massive drifts and filled roadside ditches, leaving them indiscernible in the vast expanse of white. Such was the cost of living and working far from “civilization” on the edge of Interstate 80 in Wyoming.

As one of the technicians whose job required his skills and company-owned tools be available throughout the gas field and its supporting stations, one of Dale's perks was a company-owned, 4-wheel drive Suburban. He was more than happy to provide a ride to and from the nearby plant for two of the other technicians.

Debbie, the youngest and smallest of the technicians, had taken the center spot in the crowded bench seat and Bill, more hefty, manned the passenger side. This more than cozy arrangement was the only option, due to the lack of available rear seating. On the plus side, the truck's heater was blasting out plenty of warm air and the conversation was lively.

With the transfer case locked in, Dale had punched through the first huge drift at a modest pace, and the vehicle swung into a moderate fishtail, corrected easily with a nudge of the throttle. Laughing, Debbie said, “That was fun! Let's do it again!”

As fate would have it, there was another great drift dead ahead. The following morning, Dale was finally handed the requisition for new tires.

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Dana Crandell

Dad, Stepdad, Grandpa, Husband, lover of Nature and dogs.

Poet, Writer, Editor, Photographer, Artist

My poetry collection: Life, Love & Ludicrosity

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  • Cathy holmes2 years ago

    lol. That one way to get the new tires. Well done.

  • Hahahahahahahahhahajahah I can see myself in Debbie! 🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣

  • And the legend of Wyoming I-80 continues. Coulda been worse! When I was in seminary in Kansas City, classes got cancelled due to a blizzard. Being sensible students, we took that as an opportunity to drive the 10-15 minutes out to Blue Ridge Theaters for an afternoon movie. The parking lot was quite naturally all but empty, so our driver decided to use that wide open bit of pavement to spin cookies. Admittedly, it was kinda fun.

  • JBaz2 years ago

    Oh I don’t blame Debbie, girls just wanna have fun. Blame the company. Nicely written

  • Hannah Moore2 years ago

    I feel this story may not be a fiction.

  • Lana V Lynx2 years ago

    Loved the humor of this story, especially the "Polaroids don't lie" caption!

  • haha, love it!

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