A Relationship The Can Be Fix
Mending Broken Bridge
Susie misses Jake, they been away from each other for six months.
They were giving each other space. Jake misses Susie, sleep elude him at night. All he can think of the time they spent together. Susie wanted space, she felt smothered by Jake.
“Should I call Jake? Will he forgive me?” Susie thought.
Ring, Ring, Ring !!!!!! Jake phone interrupted his thoughts, “ Should I answer the phone or not?”
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Mariann Carroll
Proactive for positive change.Born in the City of Chicago ,Illinois.
Multi race .Studied in a foreign country .Fluent in several languages .
fascinated by diversity.A Romantic and a dreamer.Interest in healthy living
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Comments (4)
Answer the phone 📱💬😉
This story!!! I believe communication is the key, but we often don't know that. We are too scared of what the call might be about.
Oooo! I like wonder what will happen next! Nicely done Mariann!
I never seem to be able to answer either question correctly. Is there a right answer?