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A Lesson Learnt

Will it be to my detriment

By Colleen Millsteed Published 2 years ago 1 min read
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I was hauled to my feet, dragged across the field, and flung to the dirt.

I quivered in terror.

Two men approached me, placing my feet inside a bucket.

“That money you stole was ours. Now you’ve a lesson to learn!”

They approached with another bucket. I screamed in fear when I saw the wet concrete, which they packed around my feet.

I was going to die and why? For some money.

I begged for forgiveness. I pleaded. They laughed. I was doomed!

Suddenly, a man pulled my feet from the partially set concrete and asked, “Was the lesson effective?”

I was challenged by Jessica's Quill (Medium Writer) to write a drabble of the word 'effective'.

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Colleen Millsteed

My first love is poetry — it’s like a desperate need to write, to free up space in my mind, to escape the constant noise in my head. Most of the time the poems write themselves — I’m just the conduit holding the metaphorical pen.

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  • Randy Wayne Jellison-Knock2 years ago

    I certainly hope so. It would be for me.

  • Cathy holmes2 years ago

    Oh my. Yup. I certainly would learn. Well done, my friend.

  • But did they actually steal their money? Loved your drabble!

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