A hidden door in a castle leads to a kingdom made of glass
A Short Story
Rain pelted the ancient stone walls of Eldwyn Castle as sixteen-year-old Elara pressed her fingertips against the cracked mural in the west wing. The corridor had been closed for decades, yet something-some whisper of instinct or fate-had led her there.
She traced the image of a golden deer woven into the design. As her fingers glided over the creature's eyes, there was a low, mechanical click. The wall trembled. Then, a seam formed in the stone.
A door.
Elara stepped back, heart thudding.
Dust billowed from the crack as the stone door slowly creaked open, revealing a narrow staircase spiraling downward into darkness. Lantern in hand, she descended.
The stairway opened into a cavern. But it wasn’t cold or damp. It shimmered with soft, glowing light. At the center stood an archway-not made of stone or iron-but of translucent glass that pulsed like moonlight on water. Etched across its top were words in a language she didn’t recognize. As she stepped through, her breath caught.
On the other side was an entire world made of glass.
Towers of clear crystal stretched toward the sky, reflecting rainbows through their sharp spires. Trees with leaves like spun sugar swayed gently in a breeze that carried no sound. A river flowed nearby, and even that-Elara realized-was not water, but molten glass, flowing like silk, never burning, never breaking.
She turned as the arch behind her dissolved into mist.
“No going back,” she whispered.
Then came a voice, light and echoing like wind through hollow flutes. “You have crossed into the Kingdom of Vitralis.”
Startled, Elara turned to see a woman emerging from the woods of crystal trees. Her skin was clear as quartz, her gown layered with shards of mirror and pearl.
“I am Lysenne, the Watcher of the Gate,” she said. “You are the first to enter in a hundred years.”
Elara blinked. “What is this place?”
“A forgotten kingdom,” Lysenne replied. “Once, Vitralis was vibrant and known to your world. But when the wars above turned greedy and cruel, our people sealed the doorway and vowed to remain hidden-until someone pure of heart found it again.”
Elara wasn’t sure what to say. She was just a girl who loved exploring crumbling walls and hiding from history lessons.
“Why me?”
“Because you saw what others ignored,” said Lysenne. “You listened. And because the kingdom needs a new bearer of its light.”
Lysenne led her into the heart of the city. It was mesmerizing. Glass creatures roamed freely-serpents curled in sunlit fountains, birds with stained-glass wings shimmered overhead, and small deer with translucent antlers tiptoed through gardens that rang like chimes when touched.
But all wasn’t well.
In the square stood a towering palace, cracked at its base. Murmurs ran through the glass folk as they bowed to Elara. Lysenne led her inside, where a throne of obsidian glass sat, empty.
“The last monarch fell to sorrow,” said Lysenne. “The kingdom reflects its ruler. With no hope, it fractures.”
She stepped aside to reveal a mirror. Not an ordinary one-but one that shimmered like a pool.
“Place your hand upon it,” Lysenne instructed.
Elara hesitated, then reached out. The surface turned to mist, and she saw images: her late mother tucking her into bed, the pain of her father’s distant grief, her hours wandering the empty castle halls alone.
But the images changed. She saw herself comforting a crying stable boy, planting flowers where no one noticed, stitching up a bird’s broken wing.
She stepped back, trembling.
“You have carried light into darkness,” Lysenne said. “That is what Vitralis needs.”
Elara was offered a place in the kingdom-a guardian, not a queen, they said. Someone to listen to the glass, to mend what was broken, to be the bridge between worlds.
Days passed, or maybe weeks-time moved differently there. She learned to hear the subtle hums of the crystal flora, to guide shards into bloom, to heal the fractured creatures of the realm. Slowly, cracks in the towers sealed, the river shimmered brighter, and music returned to the air.
One night, the stars in the glass sky shifted, and Lysenne brought her back to the archway, now solid again.
“It is time to return,” she said.
Elara frowned. “But I want to stay.”
“You must remember this place, Elara. You are its first memory in a century. But you are also the first whisper of hope in your world. The door will call again when it is ready.”
When Elara stepped back into the castle corridor, only a few moments had passed in the world above.
Years later, Elara became a renowned explorer, historian, and keeper of ancient secrets. People spoke of her kindness, her strange affinity for light and reflection, her deep love for forgotten things.
And in the quietest corners of Eldwyn Castle, when the moon hung low, the outline of a door would shimmer faintly on the wall, waiting.
About the Creator
Emma Ade
Emma is an accomplished freelance writer with strong passion for investigative storytelling and keen eye for details. Emma has crafted compelling narratives in diverse genres, and continue to explore new ideas to push boundaries.
Comments (2)
I would like to visit that kind of castle too. Thanks for the comment.
This is some cool fantasy stuff. Reminds me of when I explored an old, abandoned building and found a hidden passage. Felt like I'd entered a whole new world, just like Elara.