A Heart Worth Saving

Dawn had always suspected her heart was dangerous.

Not metaphorically, though she’d had her share of heartbreak, but literally. Every man she had ever loved had died. Not dramatically, not heroically, not even interestingly. They died like losers, which, if she was honest, they had been.

Alex had choked on a microwaved burrito.

Jeff had fallen asleep in a tanning bed.

John had tried to impress her by line dancing and had slipped on some peanut shells.

Three funerals. Three eulogies she didn’t believe. Three times she’d stood in black, wondering if she was cursed or simply had terrible taste.

The city whispered about her. Noir‑soaked streets carried rumors like cigarette smoke. She was dubbed as the woman whose love kills. Dawn tried to ignore it, but the truth clung to her. She didn’t date anymore. She didn’t flirt. She didn’t even make eye contact with men if she could help it.

Then Dean walked into her life.

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Dean was a private investigator with a reputation for taking cases no one else wanted. He had the kind of face that looked carved from patience. Dark and steady eyes with a calm jaw. He had a softness that didn’t weaken him but made him approachable in a city that chewed people up.

He first saw Dawn in the rain outside a coffee shop, staring at her reflection in the window.

“You look like you’re waiting for someone,” he said gently.

“I’m waiting for myself,” she replied, surprising herself with the honesty.

Dean didn’t laugh and he didn’t try to charm her. He nodded once, as if he understood exactly what she meant.

That was the first moment Dawn felt the curse stir. It was a cold, familiar tightening in her chest. Her warning.

She stepped back. “You should stay away from me.”

“Why’s that?”

“Because men who get close to me die.”

Dean blinked once. “Well. That’s inconvenient.”

She stared at him. “You think I’m joking.”

“I think you believe it,” he said. “And that’s enough for me to take it seriously.”

No one had ever said that to her before.

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Dean insisted on helping her. Dawn insisted he shouldn’t. They argued about it all the time.

Still, he researched. He interviewed people who knew her exes. He dug through old records and followed threads she didn’t even know existed. Finally, he discovered something Dawn had never dared to consider. This curse wasn’t hers. It was placed on her.

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A long time ago, when she was young and foolish and thought love meant giving everything, she had fallen for a man, the first loser. He had been charming in the way con artists are charming. He had stolen from her and lied to her. When she finally left him, he’d spat one final insult, “You’ll never love anyone better than me. And if you try, it’ll kill them.”

She’d thought it was just cruelty. But he had been dabbling in old magic no one could understand and he had cursed her heart.

Jeff, Alex, and John had died because they were unworthy of the love she gave them. The curse fed on disappointment and on wasted affection. It thrived on men who took more than they gave.

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Dean explained it all to her one night in his office, papers spread across his desk like a map of her past. “You didn’t kill them,” he said. “They killed themselves by being the wrong men.” Dawn felt something inside her crack. It was relief. A weight she’d carried for years suddenly loosened.

“But the curse is still there,” she whispered.

“Yes,” Dean said. “But curses have rules. And this one can be broken.”

“How?”

He hesitated. “By someone who loves you right.”

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Dawn tried to push him away. She told him he was too kind and too alive to risk. But Dean wouldn’t budge.

“I’m not afraid of your heart,” he said. “I’m afraid of you never getting to use it.”

He stayed and he listened. He learned her rhythms, her fears, and her hopes. He treated her with a gentleness she’d never known. He didn't treat her like she was fragile, but someone worth loving and respecting. He didn’t take from her. He didn’t demand. He didn’t expect her to fix him or worship him or to save him. He just cared and he loved her.

And the curse… didn’t react. It couldn't.

There was no cold tightening in Dawns chest. No omen. Her heart was filled with warmth and understanding. For the first time in her life, Dawn felt safe.

But curses don’t break quietly.

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One night, as they walked home under the glow of streetlamps, the air shifted. The shadows thickened. A figure stepped out from the darkness. It was a shape Dawn recognized instantly.

The biggest loser of them all, Mark... or what was left of him.

Mark had died in a way so humiliating that even the curse seemed reluctant to claim responsibility.

He’d bought a dirt bike that was laughably undersized for him. It was a flimsy model plastered with decals that said things like XTREME RAGE and MAXIMUM POWER despite having neither. Mark, who outweighed the bike by at least a hundred pounds, insisted it was “built for speed.”

During his “big stunt,” he attempted to ride the tiny dirt bike up a makeshift ramp he’d built out of two wobbly planks and a milk crate. His audience consisted of three neighbors who had come outside only because they heard him shouting, “Prepare to witness greatness!” Greatness did not occur.

The moment Mark sat on the bike, the suspension compressed so dramatically that the frame scraped the ground. When he revved the engine, the bike made a noise like a blender full of gravel. Still, Mark was undeterred. He shouted, “This is how legends are made!” and gunned it.

The bike lurched forward and wheezed under the sheer insult of his weight before snapping in half. It was a sad, clean break, like a cheap toy giving up.

Mark toppled forward in the slowest, least impressive fall imaginable. He pitched over the handlebars and landed flat on his back with a thud that sounded more like disappointment than impact.

The broken bike frame bounced once and landed squarely across his chest. It was not enough to injure him but enough to trap him like a man pinned under the consequences of his own choices.

He lay there, flailing and shouting for help. He cried out, insisting the bike had “malfunctioned.” His neighbors, torn between concern and secondhand embarrassment, eventually called for assistance.

By the time help arrived, Mark had worked himself into such a frantic, panicked frenzy from screaming, kicking, and insisting he was “in mortal danger”. He kicked his legs once more and managed to knock over his own ramp. The milk crate rolled, the planks slid, and one of them clipped him on the temple with the gentlest, most anticlimactic bonk imaginable. But that was enough.

His obituary called it “a tragic equipment failure.” Everyone else called it “the dirt‑bike disaster.”

Dawn called it what it truly was: Proof that the curse had standards, and Mark had failed to meet even those.

Standing before her now, his eyes were hollow. His voice was a rasp as he begin to speak, “You weren’t supposed to move on. You're not allowed to”

Dean stepped in front of Dawn to protect her, “You’re dead.”

“Death doesn’t end a curse,” Mark hissed. “It only feeds it.” He lunged.

Dawn grabbed Dean’s hand. She was not afraid. But in this moment, she knew she loved him. She was overcome by the fierce desire to protect the man who had protected her. The curse reacted.

But not the way anyone expected.

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A surge of warmth burst from Dawn’s chest. The curse recognized something it had never encountered.

A love that wasn’t wasted or misplaced.... and a love that was returned.

Mark screamed as the magic unraveled, tearing away the remnants of the spiteful spell. The shadows dissolved and the air cleared. Dawn felt something inside her shatter. She felt the warmth spread. She could feel herself healing. The curse was gone.

Dawn collapsed into Dean’s arms, laughing and crying at the same time.

“It’s over,” she whispered.

Dean brushed a tear from her cheek. “You broke it.”

“No,” she said. “We did.”

From that night on, Dawn’s life changed. Not because she suddenly became fearless but because she finally understood that her heart had never been the problem. She had simply given it to the wrong men.

Alex, Jeff, John, and Mark... they were not mistakes. They were lessons. And they were proof that Dawn had a beautiful heart that loved even when it was hard. Dean was the proof that she had always been capable of choosing better. And she did. Every day.

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Dean proposed to her a year later in front of the same coffee shop where they’d first met. Dawn said yes before he finished the question. Their wedding was small. Dawn, who had never been a fan of dresses, wore jeans. On her finger, Dean slipped a lovely ring the color of a sunrise to remind her that her name meant beginnings, not endings.

And when she kissed Dean, she felt nothing but joy. No curse. Just love. The kind that heals instead of harms and the kind Dawn always deserved.