A Few Surprises
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Komal opened the front door of her house. She had been studying at the library all day. Her mind felt exhausted from thinking about business continuity plans.
She was just ready to come home and decompress from her college coursework. The house was empty because her family had left for a vacation.
The lights flicked on before she could turn them on.
âSurprise!!â
Yelled Maryam, Sk and Jesse.
âHappy birthday!â đ
Jesse sat at the piano in the living room and started playing the happy birthday song. The three of them sang to Komal who had almost forgotten it was her own birthday.
âOh wow!â
She was incredibly surprised.
Maryam had on a glittery party hat. Excitedly, she pulled out a beautiful cake that had decorative letters that said happy birthday Komal on it.
âWe baked you a chocolate cake!â
Sk lit the candles quickly. They sang the happy birthday song a second time.
Komal tried to blow the candles out but they were trick candles and they didnât blow out easily.
Her three friends laughed with her and then helped her blow the candles out finally.
They lit a fire in the fireplace and ate the chocolate cake in the living room. The firelight glinted off the edges of the book spines.
âPresent time!â
Sk had a handsome smile on his face. He led Komal over to the other side of the couch to where there was a large gift wrapped up with a fluffy neon bow on top.
âOh my gosh! You guys didnât have to do all this!â
Komalâs cheeks blushed a little.
âOpen it up already!â
Jesse blurted out.
Komal started unwrapping the gift.
âOh wow, itâs a wooden treasure chest!â
Sk nodded, saying,
âWe made it! We learned how to sand the wood and stain it just right.â
âFeel how smooth the wood is!â
Maryam encouraged.
âOpen the lid and see whatâs inside the chest!â
Jesse put his arms around Sk and Maryamâs shoulders. Komal was kneeling down and opened the lid of the chest.
âNo wayyy! My name is etched inside! Woahhhh!!!â
Komal smiled and got up to hug her three happy friends.
âI like the hugs but thereâs more in the chest⌠keep going!â
Maryam shooed her back to the chest. In the box there was a handmade gem necklace that Maryam had made. There was a stack of leather bound classic books, and last, but not least, there was a novel that sheâd never seen before.
âWe got it published!â
The three friends cried in climactic excitement.
âWhat?â
Komalâs jaw dropped in disbelief.
âWhat on earth? Our book?â
She looked at the bottom of the book cover and saw their four names there. Sure enough, it was the novel that the four of them had worked on so diligently. It had been published by the Harper Collins Publishing company. The title was radiantly raised with golden letters.
âThis is the best birthday party ever! Iâm in shock at all that you guys have done! And here I almost forgot what day it even was!â
âWe love you lots and lots!â
Maryam declared and the guys nodded in agreement.
âI just canât believe it all! This is all so incredibly beautiful.â
âCome on, Komal, weâve got more cake to eat!â
âI volunteer to read the first chapter aloud of our book while you guys do some damage to that cake!â
Jesse loved reading aloud.
âOkay, and Iâll read chapter two.â
Sk said as he nestled into a large cloth chair with a plate of scrumptious cake.
The fire was stunning and warmed their hearts more and more each moment. The night was full of sweet laughter and it was indeed an intimate birthday party that none of them would ever forget! In fact, many years later she still had the chest at the foot of her bed and she always remembered those very special birthday memories.

About the Creator
Rowan Finley
Father. Academic Advisor. Musician. Writer. My real name is Jesse Balogh.
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Comments (7)
Ohh! Jesse, you do something unique every time. This story is amazing; it was a very special surprise for Komal. Great â¨
Happy birthday komalll!!!
We loveee a wholesome friendship storyyđĽš
omg, I had to read this! 𤊠Woah! Jesse... You're always the best on these types of stories... This would be a dream come true if it was a reality! Komal would definitely be blushing at this story, you made it feel so real đ¤â¤ Amazing Job, jesse...!
Beautiful âŚď¸âŚď¸âŚď¸âŚď¸
You've done this again, man! Haha, this is the birthday party of dreams!đ Iâve got everythingâsurprises, cake, personalized gifts, and my friends out here making my dream book a reality! Seriously, who wouldn't want a birthday like this? Iâm definitely one lucky! đ⨠Thank you Jesse for writing thisâ I'll never forget it!
Great surprises! Good work!