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**A Desolate Hospital Mystery**

''A Woman Wakes up in a Hospital Room, only to Realize she's the Only Person in the Building''

By AbbasPublished about a year ago 3 min read
**A Desolate Hospital Mystery**
Photo by Martin Widenka on Unsplash

As the first light of dawn pierced through the thin curtains of the hospital room, Emily’s eyes fluttered open. Her head throbbed with a dull ache, and she blinked at the sterile ceiling, disoriented. She tried to sit up, but the room spun slightly, forcing her to take a moment to steady herself.

"Hello?" she croaked, her voice cracking with dryness. She attempted to call out again, but no sound came from her throat. Pushing through the fog of confusion, Emily looked around.

She swung her legs over the side of the bed, the cold tile floor against her bare feet making her shiver. The quiet was unsettling, punctuated only by the distant hum of an old ventilation system.

Emily struggled to remember how she ended up here. There were flashes of an accident—a blurred image of headlights, screeching tires, and then darkness. But the details were fragmented, like pieces of a shattered mirror.

Gingerly, she stood up and took a few cautious steps towards the door. She reached out to turn the knob, but it wouldn’t budge. Panic fluttered in her chest. She tried again, this time with more force, but the door remained firmly shut. She glanced around the room, hoping for some kind of clue or solution, but there was nothing.

She turned her attention to the window, hoping to see some signs of life outside, but the glass was fogged and grimy. She pressed her forehead against it, squinting through the haze. The parking lot below was deserted, the usual hustle and bustle of morning hospital activity conspicuously absent.

Taking a deep breath, Emily moved back to the bed and picked up the phone on the nightstand. She picked up the receiver and heard a faint crackling, but no dial tone. She tried to dial zero for the operator, but the line was dead.

Frustration bubbled within her. She needed to find out what was happening. She decided to explore the hospital, hoping to find someone—anyone. She walked out of the room and into the corridor, the click of her shoes echoing off the empty walls. The hallways were eerily quiet, the fluorescent lights flickering intermittently. As she moved, she noticed the usual hospital signs for different departments—radiology, pediatrics, oncology—but no signs of life.

The silence was punctuated only by her own footsteps and the occasional clatter of something unseen. Emily’s heartbeat quickened with every step, her mind racing through the possibilities of what could have happened. A sense of dread gnawed at her.

She reached the main lobby, its expansive space filled with uncomfortable stillness. Desks that should have been bustling with activity were unmanned, chairs arranged in orderly rows but vacant. The front doors were locked tight. She moved to the reception desk, where a single computer screen flickered with a low battery warning.

With growing desperation, she wandered through the hospital, calling out for anyone who might be there. Her voice grew hoarse and desperate, but there was no reply. She tried to open more doors, finding empty offices and storage rooms, but no people.

As the day wore on, Emily’s sense of isolation became overwhelming. Her stomach growled with hunger, her throat parched. She forced herself to remain calm, though fear was creeping in. She sat in the cafeteria, staring blankly at the empty tables, trying to piece together what was happening.

Just as despair began to settle in, she heard a distant noise—footsteps, faint but real. Emily sprang to her feet, her heart racing. She followed the sound through the labyrinthine halls, her voice hoarse from calling out.

“Where is everyone?” Emily asked, her voice trembling.

The nurse looked at her with wide eyes. “I—I don’t know. I was just coming in for my shift, and the building was empty. I thought maybe you could help me figure this out.”

Emily nodded, a wave of relief washing over her. They stood together, a small glimmer of hope in the vast emptiness of the hospital.

Horror

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Abbas

Versatile writer skilled in both tale & stories. Captivate readers with engaging content & immersive narratives. Passionate about informing, inspiring, & entertaining through words.

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  • Latasha karenabout a year ago

    Amazing article

  • ReadShakurrabout a year ago

    Interesting piece

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