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A Brown Dog

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By Abdul QayyumPublished 2 years ago 4 min read
A Brown Dog
Photo by Arlette Rieken on Unsplash

A Brown Dog

Upon a bustling street corner stood a solitary child, leaning against a weathered board-fence, swaying gently as if dancing with the breeze, while absentmindedly kicking at the gravel beneath his feet.

The sun beat down relentlessly upon the cobblestones, casting long shadows in its wake, while a lazy summer wind stirred up golden dust, forming ethereal clouds that meandered down the avenue. Amongst the cacophony of clattering trucks, the child stood in a trance, his gaze fixed on some distant point.

After a while, a small dark-brown dog trotted purposefully down the sidewalk, a frayed rope trailing behind him. Every now and then, he would step on the end of it, stumbling slightly in his determined journey.

Halting opposite the child, the two locked eyes. The dog hesitated momentarily before tentatively wagging his tail, inching closer. Extending a hand, the child beckoned to him. With an air of apology, the dog approached, and the two engaged in a tentative exchange of affectionate gestures. Gradually, the dog's enthusiasm grew, his playful antics bordering on the chaotic as he threatened to overwhelm the child with his exuberance. In response, the child, with a mixture of amusement and reprimand, gently tapped the dog on the head.

This action seemed to bewilder and sadden the little dark-brown dog, who slumped down in defeat at the child's feet. With each subsequent blow and admonition, he conveyed his remorse in a manner both comical and sincere, pleading with the child through his eyes and actions.

Eventually, the child grew weary of their game and turned homeward. As he departed, the dog, still prostrate, watched him with a mixture of longing and devotion, before summoning the courage to follow, albeit with trepidation.

Throughout their journey, the child intermittently turned to chastise the dog with a makeshift stick, each blow accompanied by gestures of disdain and superiority. Despite the dog's contrition, he continued to trail behind, his demeanor increasingly furtive and guilt-ridden.

Upon reaching their destination, the child, seizing upon a newfound sense of ownership, dragged the dog indoors, up flights of stairs in a dimly lit tenement building. As they ascended, the dog's panic grew, his small frame struggling to keep pace with the child's determined strides.

Arriving at their final destination, the child and the dog found themselves alone. In this solitude, their bond deepened, forged in the crucible of adversity and misunderstanding.

However, their newfound companionship was not without its challenges. The family, upon discovering the dog's presence, expressed vehement opposition, viewing him as an unwelcome intruder. Despite the child's impassioned defense, the dog remained a source of contention within the household.

Yet, in the child's presence, the family's hostility abated, for they knew that his tears and protests would ensue should the dog be mistreated. Thus, a fragile peace was maintained, safeguarded by the child's unwavering loyalty.

But in moments of solitude, when the child lay asleep, the dog's plaintive cries echoed through the night, a testament to his enduring loneliness and longing for his absent friend.

And so, their bond endured, a testament to the unbreakable connection between a child and his faithful companion, transcending hardship and adversity until the very end.

Despite the challenges they faced, the child and the dog remained inseparable. Whether exploring the neighborhood or embarking on whimsical adventures, they were always together. The child, with his boundless curiosity, led the way, while the dog faithfully trailed behind, ever watchful of his friend's safety.

Yet, one fateful day, their idyllic existence was shattered by the father's descent into drunken revelry. Returning home in a state of inebriation, he unleashed chaos upon the household, wreaking havoc with abandon. Sensing the danger, the child sought refuge under the table, a familiar sanctuary in times of turmoil.

Unaware of the impending storm, the dog, seeing his friend's sudden dive, interpreted it as an invitation to play. Oblivious to the true nature of the situation, he bounded across the room, eager to join in the supposed merriment.

But his exuberance was met with violence as the father, seized by a cruel impulse, lashed out with a coffee pot, striking the dog with brutal force. Ignoring the child's pleas for mercy, he subjected the dog to a relentless onslaught, each blow a testament to his unchecked rage.

In the face of such cruelty, the dog, overwhelmed and defenseless, could only offer silent prayers for deliverance. Yet, salvation never came, as the father, consumed by a perverse sense of amusement, seized the dog and callously hurled him out of the window.

The sudden flight of the dark-brown dog elicited gasps of astonishment from onlookers below, who watched in horror as he tumbled to the ground below, his body crashing against the unforgiving pavement.

Meanwhile, the child, distraught by the unfolding tragedy, made a slow and laborious descent to the alleyway below, his tiny frame trembling with each step as he clung desperately to the railing.

And there, amidst the debris and the shadows, he found his loyal companion, lying motionless upon the cold ground. With tears streaming down his cheeks, he cradled the dog in his arms, a silent testament to the bond they shared, unbroken even in death.

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About the Creator

Abdul Qayyum

I Abdul Qayyum is also a passionate advocate for social justice and human rights. I use his platform to shine a light on marginalized communities and highlight their struggles, aiming to foster empathy and drive positive change.

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