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271 Terraforming Mars — Part 1

For SciFriday, September 27, Day 271 of the 2024 Story-a-Day Challenge

By Gerard DiLeoPublished about a year ago 2 min read
A daunting concept.

DIARY ENTRY SOL 4,100

My ears still ring.

Phobos and Deimos were scheduled for euthanasia, nudged below Roche limit, to be shot into the planet. For the few colonists here who would witness what normally would be an extinction event, it was a dramatic test for the PoroCement that housed us, observers huddled in utero.

We thought it'd be interesting to witness.

Both moons would impact within minutes of each other, offering a unique opportunity to observe seismic overlays of dual impacts, one at each pole. My team was hunkered down a half-kilometer below, under three meters of PoroCement. Holovideo above our location on the surface worked well until the fire/shock-wall arrived: a glowing barrage of immolation, all the burning dust carried along the shock-wave, like a sideways meteor shower. Speeding toward us at fifteen thousand kph, the sky was reddened with countless points of light, offset blue from the reverse redshift. In a way, it was breathtaking, until the video feed abruptly ended.

We never heard the sound of the impacts. Other surprises were coming.

A sonic juggernaut approached.

The thin Martian atmosphere bunched the frequencies together; at the height of the firestorm/shockwall pass, high-pitch sirens transmitted through tons of rock above—high-pitched, yet “full.”

And painful.

Lasting two minutes, I pressed my hands firmly over my ears, but bone conduction continued the torture. The high-pitch didn’t mitigate until the sound Dopplered lower with distance. Many of us passed out from the pain; there were several concussions.

The sonic attack circled Mars, serving us "seconds" several octaves lower—but no less painful. Every hour-and-a-half it returned. By the eighth time everyone was awake and cursing, and its ninth was its last strike at our acoustic nerves. The sound became a deep rumble bordering on subsonic, but still powerful enough to rattle bones.

Then came the noise of the tornadoes. Vaporized moon debris and Martian eject, carried with the shock wave, produced horrific tornadoes of 800 kmh. Even half a kilometer down, the cliché of the sound of freight trains remained accurate. Subsequently, we weathered unvaporized debris and ejecta rains, lasting weeks, as well as our PTSD, lasting considerably longer.

What the hell am I doing on Mars?

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ABOUT THIS STORY

This is from one of my opening chapters of my novel, : The Novel. Terraforming is a daunting geological concept. Yet, the science here was to create a debris canopy to trap heat by vaporizing Mars' two moons. In their place, a Kuiper Belt object would be shephered toward Mars orbit. It would be big enough to create the gravitational pull required to rekindle Mars' molten core. Without that, there would be no electromagnetic field to protect colonists from harmful solar radiation. Also, such manipulations would stabilize an atmosphere introduced by cyanobacteris in the waters delivered via shepherding comets into the planet.

But it wouldn't be pretty!

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About the Creator

Gerard DiLeo

Retired, not tired. Hippocampus, behave!

Make me rich! https://www.amazon.com/Gerard-DiLeo/e/B00JE6LL2W/

My substrack at https://substack.com/@drdileo

[email protected]

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  • John Coxabout a year ago

    You were born to write epic science fiction, Gerard! This is a brilliant opening for a novel! I look forward to reading more!

  • Whoaaa, that was soooo fascinating!

  • Cathy holmesabout a year ago

    My ears hurt just from reading that. Yeah, I think I'll stay right here. Well done.

  • Cindy Calderabout a year ago

    As usual, this was a super awesome sci-fi spin. Engaging and creative.

  • Dana Crandellabout a year ago

    An awesome read, and I look forward to reading the book!

  • Heather Hublerabout a year ago

    I am sure I am not curious or brave enough to have been willingly in the narrator's position! I was pulled in immediately and very invested. Thank you for the author's note. I always love to know more :)

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