Families logo

The Silent Goodbye

A Story of a Father's Hidden Love and a Son Who Understood Too Late

By Abdulrehma Published 8 months ago 3 min read

In the heart of a bustling city, where buildings grew taller and relationships shorter, lived a young man named Adil. A talented software engineer, Adil had everything a modern life could offer—an upscale apartment, the latest phone, a buzzing social circle. But there was one thing he didn’t have: patience for his father.

His father, Nazeer, was a simple man from a quiet village. After Adil's mother died when he was 12, Nazeer had raised him alone—working odd jobs, saving every rupee, denying himself every comfort so his son could study, grow, and succeed.

And Adil did. But success built a wall.

When Adil got his job in the city, he barely looked back. He rarely called. When his father tried to talk, it was always short, rushed, distracted.

“Abba, I’m busy. Can we talk later?”

“Abba, please don’t visit the office. It’s awkward.”

Even when Nazeer would send food or knitted sweaters during the winter, Adil barely acknowledged them. “These old-style things don’t suit me,” he would mutter, tossing them aside.

Still, Nazeer smiled through it all. He never complained. He simply said, “You’re happy. That’s enough for me.”

Then one day, Nazeer came to the city unannounced.

Adil was furious. “Abba, why didn’t you call first?”

“I just wanted to see you,” Nazeer replied softly, holding a small bag. “I won’t stay long.”

He stayed for two nights. Adil barely spoke, always on his laptop or phone. On the second night, Nazeer tried to sit beside him.

“I brought the photo album,” he said. “Remember this?” He held out a picture of young Adil on his first day of school.

Adil didn’t even look up. “Abba, I’m in the middle of something.”

That night, Nazeer quietly packed his bag. The next morning, he left a handwritten note on the table:

> I’m proud of you. Take care. Love always — Abba.

Adil didn’t notice the note until hours later.

---

Months passed.

Then, one rainy Tuesday morning, Adil got a call. From a neighbor back in the village.

“Adil beta… I’m sorry. Your father… he passed away in his sleep last night.”

The world seemed to fall silent.

Adil rushed to the village. The old house smelled of damp earth and memories. His father’s room was simple—just a bed, a Quran, a few books, and a small wooden box.

Inside the box were dozens of letters. All written by Nazeer. None of them ever sent.

> “Adil, I saw your picture on Facebook. You looked so handsome in your suit.”

“I made your favorite biryani last night. It didn’t taste right without you.”

“Your silence hurts sometimes, but I know you’re busy becoming great.”

Tears streamed down Adil’s face.

In one envelope, there was an unsent money order. Nazeer had tried to send Adil some savings for his birthday—even though Adil earned more in a week than his father did in months.

Then he found a torn page from an old diary. In it, Nazeer had written:

> “I may not understand his world, but he is my world. If he forgets me, I will still remember him every night in prayer.”

Adil fell to his knees.

He remembered the times he was cold, impatient, ashamed even… of the very man who had sacrificed everything. He remembered the slippers with worn-out soles his father never replaced. The cold winters his father bore so he could send Adil a heater in the hostel. The hundreds of silent sacrifices.

And now, it was too late to say thank you.

Too late to say sorry.

Too late to hug him one last time.

After the burial, Adil didn’t return to his shiny apartment. He took a leave from work, stayed in the old house, cleaned every corner with his own hands. Every item became sacred—the old cup, the torn prayer rug, the framed picture of his mother and father smiling together.

Before leaving, he visited the village mosque and quietly donated a large sum in his father’s name.

Then he went back to the city—but a changed man.

He kept his father’s photo on his desk. He joined a foundation that built homes for the elderly. And once a month, he’d visit other old fathers in senior homes, sit beside them, and just listen.

One day, a coworker asked, “Why do you do all this?”

Adil simply smiled and said, “Because I heard someone’s love too late. I don’t want to make the same mistake twice.”

---

Moral of the Story:

Sometimes, the quietest love is the deepest. Don’t wait until it’s too late to appreciate the ones who made you who you are.

book reviews

About the Creator

Abdulrehma

Reader insights

Nice work

Very well written. Keep up the good work!

Top insight

  1. Expert insights and opinions

    Arguments were carefully researched and presented

Add your insights

Comments (2)

Sign in to comment
  • ijaz ahmad8 months ago

    i am support you you support me

  • ijaz ahmad8 months ago

    nice

Find us on social media

Miscellaneous links

  • Explore
  • Contact
  • Privacy Policy
  • Terms of Use
  • Support

© 2026 Creatd, Inc. All Rights Reserved.