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The Great Escape

A Journey of Survival and Unyielding Hope

By oluwatoba ayomikunPublished about a year ago 3 min read
The Great Escape
Photo by Mor Shani on Unsplash

The air was heavy with silence, broken only by the rhythmic drip of water leaking from the ceiling. Malik sat hunched in the corner of the dimly lit cell, his heart pounding against his ribcage. His hands trembled, not from fear, but from a deep resolve. Tonight was the night.

He exchanged a glance with his cellmate, Arif, who nodded imperceptibly. The two had been planning this moment for months, carefully piecing together fragments of hope amidst despair. They were prisoners of circumstance, caught in the crossfire of a war that had consumed their homeland.

Life in the camp was bleak. Days bled into nights, and weeks stretched into months. For Malik, every sunrise was a reminder of the life he had left behind—a wife, a son, and the promise of a future. The thought of them kept him alive, fueling his determination to escape and reunite with his family.

Arif, older and more seasoned, had become Malik’s mentor and confidant. “We have one chance,” Arif had whispered weeks ago, his voice low but steady. “If we fail, it’s over.”

They had spent countless nights carving a tunnel beneath their cell, using makeshift tools fashioned from scraps of metal. The work was grueling, their hands bloodied and raw, but neither of them wavered. Each scrape of metal against stone was a step closer to freedom.

The night of the escape arrived, cloaked in a thick fog that blanketed the camp. The guards, weary and complacent, patrolled with less vigilance. Malik and Arif waited until the muffled sounds of footsteps faded into the distance before lifting the loose floorboard that concealed their tunnel.

Sliding into the narrow passage, Malik felt the earth press against him, suffocating and cold. Panic clawed at the edges of his mind, but he forced himself to focus. The tunnel was barely wide enough to crawl through, and every inch forward felt like an eternity. Arif’s steady breathing ahead of him was the only sound grounding him.

After what felt like hours, they reached the tunnel’s end—a patch of loose soil beneath the outer fence. Arif used his makeshift tool to break through the surface, and a rush of cool, fresh air greeted them.

They emerged into the open, their bodies covered in dirt, their lungs heaving. For a brief moment, they paused, overwhelmed by the vast expanse of freedom before them. But there was no time to linger. The guards would soon discover their absence.

They ran through the night, guided by the faint glow of the moon. Their destination was a dense forest on the horizon, where they hoped to find shelter and evade capture. The journey was fraught with danger—every rustling leaf and distant sound felt like a threat.

By dawn, exhaustion threatened to overtake them, but they pressed on. It was Arif who collapsed first, his legs buckling beneath him. Malik knelt beside him, panic surging in his chest.

“Go,” Arif rasped, his voice barely audible. “You can’t stop now.”

“No,” Malik said firmly, gripping Arif’s shoulder. “We escape together, or not at all.”

Summoning the last of his strength, Malik helped Arif to his feet, supporting him as they stumbled forward. When they finally reached the forest, they collapsed beneath the canopy, their bodies trembling with relief.

For days, they navigated the wilderness, relying on their instincts and the sparse provisions they had managed to steal. It was during one of these nights, as they huddled around a small, hidden fire, that Arif spoke softly.

“Malik,” he began, his gaze distant. “If we don’t make it, promise me something.”

“Don’t talk like that,” Malik interrupted.

“Promise me,” Arif insisted, his voice breaking. “Tell my family I tried. Tell them I didn’t give up.”

Malik swallowed hard, nodding. “You’ll tell them yourself,” he said, his voice steady despite the tears in his eyes.

Their perseverance paid off when they stumbled upon a refugee camp near the border. The sight of the camp brought Malik to his knees, tears streaming down his face. They were safe, finally free from the horrors they had endured.

As Malik looked at Arif, who managed a weak but triumphant smile, he felt an overwhelming sense of gratitude. They had survived together, bound by a shared determination and an unyielding hope.

And as Malik held the tattered photograph of his family, he knew their great escape was more than a journey to freedom—it was a testament to the human spirit’s capacity to endure, to fight, and to dream of a brighter tomorrow.

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