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A Mother’s Dream, A Son’s Triumph

A big Test

By Akhter khanPublished 8 months ago 3 min read
“A mother’s tearful pride—years of sacrifice reflected in a single moment of her son’s success.”

1. A Mother in a Mud House
In the humble village of Chak No. 47, lived Zainab Bibi with her only son, Hamza. Widowed at a young age, she worked day and night as a seamstress to raise him. Her world revolved around a single dream:
“One day, my Hamza will become an officer.”
She often went hungry herself but ensured her son never missed a meal or a school day.


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2. Silent Sacrifices
Hamza, mature beyond his years, saw his mother’s quiet struggles. She sold her bangles to buy his books, stitched late into the night, and never let him feel poor.
He never asked for new clothes or toys. Instead, he said,
“Ammi, your love is all I need.”
Each stitch she sewed was laced with prayer and hope.


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3. From Village to City
After finishing school, Hamza got admission to a university in the city. The day he left, Zainab Bibi hugged him tightly and said:
“Don’t forget your roots, and don’t forget this mother’s dream.”
In the city, Hamza struggled — working part-time jobs, skipping meals, and studying under streetlights when he couldn’t afford electricity.


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4. The Big Test
Then came the day of the civil service exam. Zainab Bibi fasted that day without telling anyone. She spent the entire day praying on her worn-out prayer mat.
Weeks passed. Then came Hamza’s call:
“Ammi… I did it. I’m an officer.”
She fell silent. Tears rolled down her cheeks as she whispered,
“Alhamdulillah… now I can rest.”


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5. The Uniform Returns Home
When Hamza returned to the village in his officer’s uniform, the whole village gathered. People clapped. Children ran to him.
Zainab Bibi stood at the door, eyes moist, hands trembling. She saw him and smiled through her tears:
“This is the day I lived for.”
That night, she kept a fast of gratitude and prayed for his future.


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6. A Peaceful Goodbye
A few years later, Zainab Bibi passed away quietly in her sleep. Her heart content. Her dream fulfilled.
At her funeral, Hamza whispered,
“You gave me everything, Ammi. Today, I give you my every success.”


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7. The Legacy Lives On
Now a respected officer, Hamza keeps her photo on his desk. Before every decision, he closes his eyes and says:
“Ammi, guide me like you always did.”
Because behind every great man… lives the prayer of a mother.
Story Summary

In a small village called Chak No. 47, a widowed mother named Zainab Bibi lives a life of sacrifice and struggle, raising her only son Hamza. Her dream is simple yet powerful: to see her son become an officer — a respected man who can hold his head high in society. Despite poverty and hardship, she gives him everything she can, often skipping meals and selling her belongings to pay for his education.

Hamza, a bright and obedient child, understands the weight of his mother’s sacrifices. He studies hard, never complains, and dedicates himself to fulfilling her dream. When he gets accepted into a university in the city, it is both a proud and painful moment for Zainab. She lets him go with nothing but her blessings and hopes.

In the city, Hamza struggles to survive. He works part-time jobs, skips meals, and studies under tough conditions. Through sleepless nights and exhausting days, he stays focused, remembering his mother's dream and prayers. The story reaches its emotional peak when Hamza finally passes the competitive exam and becomes an officer.

When he returns home in uniform, the entire village welcomes him, but it’s Zainab’s tear-filled eyes that matter most. Her dream is finally fulfilled. Shortly after, she passes away peacefully, leaving behind a legacy of love, strength, and sacrifice.

Hamza continues his life as an officer, guided by the values and prayers of his late mother. Her picture remains on his desk, a constant reminder that behind every success, there's often a mother’s unseen struggle and unwavering belief.


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Akhter khan

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