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The Weight of a Promise

Threads of Love, Loss, and Letting Go

By Lalchand kumhar Published about a year ago 4 min read

**"The Weight of a Promise"**

1. **The Unspoken Bond between Aarya and Adil **

Aarya, a very skilled weaver of Surajpur village, was appreciated for her work but had a secret-a deep love for her childhood friend, Adil. From their playful days by the riverbank to their silent moments under the banyan tree, their bond deepened with time. Though the connection between them was undeniable, neither of them spoke up their feelings aloud because they did not want to break their dear friendship.

Adil, full of dreams and ambition, often shared his plans with Aarya, who listened quietly as her heart swelled in admiration and fear of losing him. The tension between them was palpable; a single glance, a fleeting touch, held promises they dared not voice. Yet, in the time they spent together, both found solace from the knowledge that life was about to shift dramatically.

2. Adil Leaves and Aarya Makes Her Silent Sacrifice

One evening, as the sky blushed with the hues of sunset, Adil brought news that left Aarya’s world trembling. He had secured an apprenticeship in the bustling city, a stepping stone to the future he had always dreamed of. However, the excitement in his voice was tinged with hesitation. “I’ll have to leave the village… and you,” he said, his gaze searching hers for reassurance.

Aarya's heart contracted, but she pressed a smile. "You go now, Adil. This is your dream."

"Will you wait for me?" he asked, his vulnerability laid bare.

Though doubt gnawed at her, Aarya nodded. "Of course, I'll wait."

Adil left after days but Aarya was left to her own turmoil. She could have confessed the love, and she really wanted to because she didn't want him to be stopped. His void was what filled in his empty space, and their letters were only solace for her.

--- 3. Heartbreak: Adil's New Life and Last Letter

The letters began as full of excitement. Adil spoke of the wonders of the city, his challenges, and victories. Aarya treasured all of them, reading and re-reading them under the shade of the banyan tree. Her responses were full of encouragement and affection she could hardly name.

Time passed, and the letters became scarce and far between. When they did come, Adil's words were polite but detached. Aarya sensed the change but held on to hope. One day, a letter came that shattered her world. Adil confessed that he had met someone—Zara, a woman who understood his new life in ways Aarya couldn't.

He writes of Zara's goodness and of his guilty conscience for accepting another woman. "You were my anchor, Aarya," the letter read, "but life has taken us in different directions.".

Aarya read the letter under the banyan tree, her tears dripping down. She felt cheated but could not blame him. Love was not a possession; it was the desire for the other's happiness, even if it was at one's own expense. And from that day on, she decided to rediscover herself, though her heart weighed heavy with unsaid anguish.

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4. **Aarya's Transformation and Meeting Adil Again **

Aarya put all her sorrows into her craft. Her weaving brought a new depth to rich colors interwoven with more intricate patterns that seemed as if telling stories of lost love, loss, and resilience. Her work appealed to a merchant who invited her to display it in the city. Reluctantly, Aarya agreed and knew the city was also Adil's world.

At the exhibition, Aarya felt a little out of place, but soon she was surrounded by admirers of her work. As she stood by her display, a familiar voice called her name. She turned to see Adil, his face a mixture of surprise and hesitation. He looked different—more refined, his presence commanding. Beside him stood Zara, her beauty and poise undeniable.

"Aarya," Adil started, his voice breaking, "this is Zara, my fiancée."

Aarya smiled, she extended her hand to Zara. "It was nice meeting you."

Zara smiled, not even sensing the undertow of emotions between the two. As the night wore on, Adil and Aarya found some time to be alone for a brief moment. "I never stopped loving you," he confessed. "You were my anchor when I was lost."

"And you were my compass," Aarya whispered. "But we've found our separate paths now."

5. **Conclusion: Letting Go Gently **

Under the night sky in the city, Adil finally spoke words of love of so many years left unspoken while Aarya acknowledged the bond forming them together and the paths that carved their destiny. Adil was all praise for the selfless help Aarya had given to him with her unconditional will, but she wished him a happy ending with Zara from a true heart.

Though the emotions between them were raw, Aarya felt closure. Love wasn't always about holding onto things; it had to be letting go so they could grow away from one another.

As she goes back to her village, Aarya feels light, like a burden that was there but which she never knew about had been taken off from her. The banyan tree is near the river. It has deep and indomitable roots-a symbol of strength and resilience. Aarya would come to know that the love for Adil was going to be a part of her life forever, but she was free to fashion her own story and life, intertwined with threads of resilience and self-discovery.

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